realization (SS MDT SERIES)

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Scene starts with Raman sitting in his car near office he is reminding everything happened in last few days.Ishita telling about Subbu and her love for Ruhi .

Raman thinks that he is not important for Ishita and she still considers him only as Ruhi's father and just a friend.

Raman is worried over his feelings for Ishita .

Raman "Ishita key liyen main sirf Ruhi ka Papa hun aur kuch naheen.Main iss baath sey agey badh chukka hun lekin Ishita .."

Raman "Mujhey khud ko control mey rakhnaa hoga.Mera koi bhee galthee kissey bhee keemat par jaa saktha hain."

Raman leaves office and reaches home.The moment he reached home scenario was every one busy with their own work and Ishita is helping Ruhi in her studies.

She was about to come to help Raman but he rejects the offer and tells her to continue her work with Ruhi.

Raman gets ready and was doing his work in his room over his laptop.He gets busy and Ishita comes there to speak to him .

Ishita "Raman meri gaadi kharaab huin hain kall tum Ruhi ko school chod denaa."

Raman without any argument "Theek hain."

Ishita was surprised as she expected an argument over that matter.

Raman gets up and goes to kitchen making his own coffee.Mrs Bhalla comes there and offers the help and she does that.

Ishita sees this and gets weird as simply Raman could have told her.

After dinner while Ishita was making arrangements for sleeping .Raman sees this.

Raman "Ishita aaj mujhey bahuth kaam hain tum aaj Ruhi key saath so jaana."

Ishita "Raman main adjust karloongi."

Raman "Kya jaroori hain.Tum aaj Ruhi key saath so jaon.Adjust karney kee kyaa jaroori hain.Ruhi kee maa ko Ruhi key saath soney mey kya problem hain"

Ishita leaves to Ruhi's room.

Raman watches TV for few minutes and then goes to sleep.

Ishita who comes out to get water notices light being off in Raman's room .

Ishita "Raman itney jaldee so gaye.Ussney kahan kee kaam hain."

She then leaves to Ruhi's room and gets busy telling a story to Ruhi.After Ruhi sleeps she goes and checks Raman's room and he is sleeping and Ishita wonders why he told lie to her.

Ishita "Koi kaam subaha hoga isliyen jaldhee sogayen.Lekin mera waha rehney sey kyaa problem hosakthey hain.Main he unhey rooj uthathee hun naa."

Ishita "Koi kaam ka tension hoga.main kuch jyaada soch raheen hun.Abh main bhee sojathee hun."

Ishita gets up in morning and gets ready and makes Ruhi ready and as usual takes coffee to Raman's room but Raman has left early and was not there in room.

Ishita "Mujhey bathaye bhina hee chal gaye."

Ishita was still in thoughts over it.

Mrs Bhalla "Kya soch rahee hai thu?"

Ishita "Mummy ji Raman itney jaldee chal gaye office."

Mrs Bhalla "Han Mujhey bathaaya tha kee kuch urgent kaam hain jaldee jaana pada.Tumhey bathaaya naheen?"

Ishita "Main to unsey milee he naheen."

Ishita leaves thinking about it she makes Ruhi do break fast and see driver coming to pickup Ruhi for school.

Ishita "Tum Ruhi ko chodkar ghar aajaana .Mujhey Raman key liyen naastha lekey jaana hain."

Driver leaves and after half an hour he comes back .Ishita goes in car to office.

She sees whole office is empty as still there is time for office and Raman was sitting alone in his cabin checking some files.

Ishita comes there to give break fast to Raman .

Raman "Ishita tum yaha ?"

Ishita "Main aapkey liyen naastha lekar aye"

Raman "Mujhey poocha hotha .Main neey aathey samay hee bahar karliyan."

Ishita "Itney jaldee aagayen aap.Yaha tho koi naheen hain."

Raman "Mujhey kuch kaam tha .Conference meeting tha."

Raman "Mujhey kaam hain main tumsey baadh mey miltha hun."

Ishita leaves but she din't believe what Raman said and she was sure that Raman din't had break fast.So she just left tiffin box there.

It happens similarly for few more days.

Raman comes late and leaves early .He was almost avoiding Ishita and Ishita was daily sleeping in Ruhi's room as Raman sent her saying he have work here.

He is not arguing over any thing and he planned few more weekend for just Ruhi and Ishita and he would be missing there.

Ruhi asks for a movie and Raman arranges tickets for just both of them .

Ruhi is getting time with Raman while Ishita gets time but they don't speak much and Raman only spoke about Ruhi and decisions over Ruhi.

Raman few times calls home and speaks to Ruhi and he is calling landline number instead of Ishita's mobile and he was telling everything to Mrs Bhalla about meetings and schedule.Which Ishita used to remind him.

Ishita initially doubtful is now sure that Raman is avoiding her.

Once while in Mrs Iyer's house Mihir and Mihika were there quarreling over something.

Ishita comes there and they stop fighting.

Ishita "Mihir office mey kuch problem hain kyaa.Koi nayee deal ya kuch problem hain."

Mihir "Kuch nahee sab kuch normal hain.Bhabhi kya huan?"

Ishita "Kuch nahee aisey pooch rahe thee?"

Mihika understood something but she was silent.

Once Mihir left.

Mihika "Akka koi problem hain kyaa .Sab kuch theek hain"

Ishita "Mujhey naheen patha .Sab kuch normal hee hain lekin kuch bhee theek naheen hain."

Mihika "Kyaa huan jeeju sey koi jagada huan ?"

Ishita "Wohi tho problem hain.Raman mujsey jagada kyaa koi bhee argument bhee nahee huan ek huftey sey."

Mihika "Koi jhagada naheen tho kyaa problem hain."

Ishita "Mujhey lag raha hain Raman mujhey avoid kar rahan hain."

Mihika "Kyaa .Aapko aisa kyon lag rahan hain?"

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch chupa rahan hain.Hum aarey beech itney din sey koi argument bhee naheen hua.Raman ney ek baar bhee gussa naheen kiya.ur office mey hee jyaada time bith rahen hain."

Mihika "Jeeju gussa naheen kar rahen tho acchee baath hain naa.Office mey koi kaam hoga."

Ishita "Naheen hain.Mera haath kaa coffee bhee naheen pee rahen hain.Khud jaakar banaarahen hain."

Mihika "Issmey kya problem hain .Aapsey baath bhee naheen kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Bathey tho hain lekin sab kuch Ruhi key baarey mey."

Mihika "Mujhey tho koi problem naheen dik raheen hain.Sab kuch theek hain."

Mihika "Main pehley baar dekhrahan hun.Kee koi issliye pareshaan hain kyon kee unka pathee ussey jagadha nahee kar rahan hain.Gussa nahee ho rahan hain."

Same time Bala comes there and it looks he listened to complete conversation.

Bala "Ishiat issmey tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain."

Ishita "Jeeju aap.Aap kabh aaye?"

Bala "Jab tum apney problems Mihika ko batha raheen thee thab."

Mihika leaves as she gets a message from Mihir .

Bala "Kabh sey aisaa ho rahan hain.?"

Ishita tells him everything from the day it started .

Bala "Ussey pehley aap log kiss barey mey discuss kiya tha."

Ishita tells him about the discussion over Raman asking whether she is happy in this marriage.

Bala understood the matter .

Bala "Sab kuch normal hain.Tum bass jyaada soch rahee ho."

Ishita "Aap yeh kaisey keh saktey hain."

Bala "Tum tension math lena ."

Ishita "Tension nahen loo.Jeeju aap merey situation mey rehkar dekho."

Bala "Tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain.Raman sey pyaar thodi karthee hun."

Ishita "jeeju aap kya bol rahen hain.Aap jaanthey hain naa main yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen kiya tha."

Bala continue "Aur Raman sirf tumhaara ek accha dosth hain."

Ishita was silent.

Bala "Tho tumhey kyaa problem ho raheen hain.Tum Ruhi key saath hee hon.Aur Ruhi sey acchey time mil rahan hain."

Ishita "Han "

Bala "Fir tumhey aur kyaa problem hain.Jab yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain tho."

Bala "Raman sirf ek dosth hain na tumhaara .Fir itnaa kyon pareshan ho rahen ho."

Bala "Who tumsey baath kar rahan hain.Tumhara respect dey raha hain.Sab kuch theek hee tho hain."

Bala "Fir tumhey kyaa problem ho rahan hain.Main bhee tumhaara dosth hee tho hun.Main thodi tumhey har baath bathatha hun phone karkey."

Bala "Main bhee tumsey jagada naheen kartha hun.Tumhey kuch problem naheen ussmey."

Bala "Tum bass jyaad a soch raheen hun ya Raman tumharey liyen kuch dossth sey bhadkar hain."

Bala "In donon mey kya sach hain tumhey decide karna hoga."

Bala leaves telling this

Ishita was in thoughts over what Bala told her.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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2 part

Scene starts with Ishita thinking over what Bala said.Ishita is still in confusion.

Ishita "Shaayad jeeju sach hee kehraha hain.Main kuch jyaada soch raheen hun."

She then leaves but she is not satisfied with her own judgement.

It is around evening Raman comes home and Ishita was waiting for him.She want to clear the problem today.

But Raman wins this time as he gets busy over the matter of concern.

Raman is in hall while everyone are there ready for dinner.

Raman "Maa main kall Hyderabad jaa raha hun.Kuch urgent kaam hain teen din mey ajaaonga."

Mrs Bhalla "Hyderabad mey kyaa kaam pad gaya tumhey."

Raman "Kuch naheen maa.Udhar hummarey company ney ek company handover karlee .Usskey liye mujhey waha jaakar sab arrange karnaa hoga .Waha kissey ko appoint karna padega samhalney key liye."

Everyone takes this news normally as it is common for Raman to go for business meetings .But Ishita's unanswered question are not leaving her.

Raman was packing his luggage and searching things which he could'nt find as he was even habituated for Ishita's presence.

Ishita comes and see Raman packing and comes to help him.

Ishita "Aap mujhey bol dethey main kar dethee na.Aap kyon kar rahen hain."

Raman "Koi problem nahee main kar longa .Waisey bhee mera kaam mujhey karney mey kyaa problem ho sakthee hain."

Ishita "Aap dialogu math maaro.Main ney bola naa main kar doongi."

Raman "Main kar loonga .Shayad tum bhool gaye .Main shaadi sey pehley apna kaam khud kartha tha."

Ishita "Lekin abh baath alag hain naa.Main madad karlongi aapke."

Raman "Ishita main karlonga .Ruhi ka doodh ka time hogaya tum jao.Pehley tum Ruhi kee Ishima ho baath mey saarey kaam."

Ishita "Main ussey doodh dekar hee aarahen hun."

Raman "Tum jaakar so jao mujhey subaha jakdee jaana hain.Tum waha hee so jao."

Ishita "Raman aap pehley bola hotha Ruhi so gaye hain.Fir ussey uthana theek naheen hoga.Aaj main yaha adjust karlongi."

Ishita started to counter Raman's trick.Ishita started packing Raman's stuff without his permission.

Raman after few minutes again reshuffles his luggage and changes everything what Ishita selected.

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahe hain aap.Main ney packing kiya naaap fir kar rahen hain."

Raman "Yeh kapadey kuch saaf naheen lag rahe hain tho mainey socha change karloo.Waha fir sey clean naa karnaa padey."

Ishita "Aap teen din key liyen jaa rahen hain.Ap jaisey bol rahen hain kee ek mahiney thak waheen rahengey."

Raman "Kisko patha kaam nahe huan tho wahee rukhna padega.Tum sojao.Mera flight subaha chey bhajey hain mujehy jaldee uthna hoga."

Ishita sleeps in her couch.

Her mind is filled with words.Raman calling her Ruhi's Ishima and Raman constantly avoiding her .Raman telling he is going out of town.

Ishita seeps thinking about Raman .

After few hours Ishita sees some strange scenes in her dream.

She sees Raman calling Toshiji and telling he wont come there for a month as he was busy and he speaks to everyone except Ishita.When Ishita calls him she will hear some voice asking whome is he speakin to and Raman answers as Ruhi's mom and nothing else.

Ishita suddenly wakes up at time in her sleep where Raman "Ruhi ke maa hain aur kuch naheen."

Same time Raman's laram rings and it was around 2:30.Ishita was fully tensed .

Raman gets up and ask.

Raman "Kya hogaya tum itney jaldhee uth gayee."

Ishita "Kuch nahee kuch ajeeb sa swapna tha."

Raman "Kya huan .Tum theek hon naa.Kuch bura swapna tha kyaa."

Ishita thinks over her dream and says "Kuch naheen."

Raman "Tum so jaon mujhey ready hona hain."

Ishita was trying to sleep but she is not getting sleep over the words Raman said in dream "Aur kuch naheen."

Ishita "Main Raman key liyen kuch naheen hun siwa Ruhi ki maa."

Again she gets to dilemma.That their marriage is a compromise for Ruhi and nothing else.

Ishita "Mujhey itnaa kyon farak pad rahan hain.Hum sirf dosth hain."

Ishita "Main isskey baarey mey itnaa kyon soch rahan hun.Yeh sirf ek swapna tha."

Ishita closes her eyes saying this.

It is around 4 o' clock Raman is leaving.

Ishita wakes up .Actually she never slept.

Ishita "Aap jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Han time hogaya hain.Tum sabko boldena."

Ishita "Raman aap apna khyaal rakhiyega.Jathey hee phone keejiyen."

Raman "Main jantha hun.Tumhey mujhey koi instruction deney kee jaroori naheen hain."

Ishita "Raman main waisey hee bol rahe thee."

Raman "Itna concern jaroori naheen hain.Main jaantha hun main kyaa kar raha hun."

Ishita "Raman aap aisey kyon kar rahen hain?"

Raman "Kuch naheen .Tum Ruhi ka khyaal rakhna.Waisey bhee Ruhi ki Ishima ko jyaada bolney kee jaroori naheen hain.Tum jarror rakhogi.Tum iss ghar mey aye bhee Ruhi key liye naa."

Raman "Bya main jaa rahan hun."

Raman leaves bidding good bye .But Ishita was struck over the words Raman told.

Ishita "Raman ney aisa kyon kahan."

Ishita "Raman sach hee tho keh rahan hain mais iss ghar mey Ruhi key liyen hee aye."

Ishita "Fir iss bath mujhey itnaa kyon pareshaan kar rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman waisey kahan hoga.Main usko badha rahen hun."

Ishita convinces herself that she is thinking so much and tries to sleep.But she cant get over words she heard from Raman's mouth and in dream ."Aur kuch naheen.'

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3 part


Scene starts with Ishita still thinking over Raman's words.

"Jab Raman merey liyen sirf Ruhi key Papa hain tho main bhee unkey liyen Ruhi kee maa he hongi naa."

Ishita sleeps thinking about it.She wokes up at around 7:30.

Ishita was late and she gets ready quickly and her ears were busy to hear ring from her mobile.

It was around 8:30 and she completes her break fast and was makes Ruhi go to school .

She goes personally to drop Ruhi in school.Then she goes for clinic.

In clinic she gets few patients and get busy but she was conscious about her phone.

After finishing her work she confirms that no wor is left and leaves for home.

Ishita "Muumyji Raman ka koi phone ayaa tha kyaa."

Mrs BHalla "Han ,tum Ruhi ko chodney gayee thee na jab ayaa thaa.Pahunc gayan hain.Sab kuch theek hain."

Ishita guessed it before only.She expected Raman will not call her .But she was happy atleast Raman reached safe there.

Ishita then goes to Iyer's house where Mihika was sitting .

Mihika "Akka aap aaj bhee pareshan hon."

Ishita "Kuch naheen .Main theek hun."

Mihika "Mijhey naheen lag rahan hain.Abh kya huan."

Ishita "Kuch naheen Raman Hyderabad gaya hain teen dinon key liyen ."

Mihika "Jeeju pehley bhaar todhi bahar jaa raha hain.Who hummesha kaam key liyen bahaar jatha hain naa."

Ishita "Han lekin mujhey tension ho raheen hain.Kyon patha nahee kuch gadbad lag rahan hain."

Mihika "Kyaa jeeju ka phone naee ayaa."

Ishita "Aaya tha mummyji key liyen mujhey phone hee nahee kiya."

Mihika "Akka ap tension math lo.Saarey mardh aisey hee hothey hain.Mihir bhee mujhey phone naheen kartha hain.Jab mujhey bheee gussa aatha hain."

Ishita "Fir tum kyaa karthee hon."

Mihika "Simple .Main hee phone karthee hun."

Ishita "Mihir ko kaam hoga tho disturb hoga naa."

Mihika "Honey do yeh punishment hain usskey liyen.Who naheen uthaaya tho main baar baar karthee rahongi."

Ishita "Mihir tumhey kuch naheen kahega kyaa.Dantega nahee."

Mihika smiles and takes Ishita's mobile and dials Raman's number and gives to Ishita.

Raman picks the call "Hello ."

Ishita "Main bol raheen hum aap hotel pahunch gaye."

Raman "Main yaheen hun.Tum theek hon."

Ishita feels happy over this question "Han .Aap"

Raman "Ruhi?"

Ishita "Ruhi bhee theek hain."

Raman "Ishita mujhey kaam hain main baath me bath karonga."

Raman cuts the call.

Ishita gets sad at this.She goes to her room.

Ishita "Raman key liyen Ruhi key alaawa koi aur baath naheen hain kyaa.Phoe katdiya.Mujhsey baath kyo naheen kar raha hain."

Ishita feels sad .

Ishita "Raman ko kyaa ho gaya pehley mujhsey bath kartha thaa sab kuch share kartha thaa.Abh achaanak sab kuch palat gaya."

Ishita "Mujhey itnaa kyo farak pad rahan hain.?"

Mihika was shown then she was speaking to Bala.

Mihika "Jeeju aap sahee they .Akka bahuth pareshaan hain."

Bala "Jaantha hun jaroor hogi."

Mihika "Jeeju aap jaanthey hain kyaa Raman jeeju aisey kyon kar rahen hain."

Bala "Ishita ney bahuth dinon baadh Raman ko yaadh dilaaya kee yeh shaadi Ruhi key liyen hain.Raman woho kar rahan hain jo Ishita sach manthee hain.Aur jab jo sach hain who Ishita ko pareshan kar rahan hain."

Mihika "Main kuch samjhee nahee."

Bala "Ishita aur Raman dono ek doosrey sey pyaar karthey hain.Aur who donon agey bhad chukey hain.Lekin Ishita ko abhee bhee lagtha hain kee yeh shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain,Aur Raman usskey sirf ek dosth hain."

Bala "Lekin Ishita ka tho Raman kamzori hain.Usskey bhina who kuch naheen.Ishita hummesha Raman ko saath chahtheey hain aur chahthee hain kee Raman sab unkey saath share kare."

Bala "Ishita Raman ko apnaa manthee hain aur bahuth possessive hain uskey baarey mey.Raman ka har kaam karnaa aur ussey jhagada karnaa ya behash aur usska gussa.Sab kuch pey ussney apna haq likhliya hain. Aur Raman bhee Ishita ko sab haq de diya thaa."

Bala "Jab Ishu ney Raman ko shaadi key baarey mey yaad dilaaya.Raman ko acha naheen laga kee Ishita abhee bhee agey nahee bhadee.Issliyen who sirf waaps wahe pad khada ho gaya waha khada thaa.Jaisey shaadi sey pehley sirf Ruhi key liyen"

Mihika "Aur Jeeju polite hogaye jaisey koi relation naheen aur koi anjaan hon."

Bala "Right .Yeh baath Ishita digust naheen kar paa raheen hain ,Kee usskey saarey haq kho gayen."

Bala "Who yeh maanney key liyen tayyar naheen hain kee Raman sey who pyaar karthee hain aur Raman ke bhina jee bhee naheen pa raheen hain."

Mihika "Jeeju abh mujhey kyaa karnaa hain."

Bala "Kuch naheen.Tum bhee woi taperecord chalao dosthi ka.Aur pooch kiss dosth key liyen wo itnaa possessive hain."

Mihika "Theek hain.I am on it."

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part 4


Scene starts with Mihika and Bala conversation.

Mihika "I am on it."

Mihika "Aap kyaa karney waley hain."

Bala "Main kuch naheen kar paonga.Jo bhee karnaa hain tumhey karnaa hain."

Mihika "Aap kyon?"

Bala "Main tumhey advice to de saktha hun lekin directly involve naheen bo saktha."

Bala "Jo baathey tum Ishita key saath kar sakte hon who main naheen kar paonga .You are better player of this game now.I am your coach."

Mihika "And Akka's realization is our game."

They gave each other a HI-Fi and leave.

Mihika goes to Ishita.

Ishita is still in thoughts what happened to Raman.

Mihika "Akka chalo hum bahaar chalthey hain."

Ishita "Mujhey interest naheen hain tum jaon."

Mihika "Abh thak pareshan hon tum.Aap ney baath kee na jeeju sey."

Ishita "Kahan Raman ney phone katdiyan aur mera sawaal ka jawaab bhee naheen diya."

Mihika "Akka aap tension kyon le rahee hon.Main bhee kitney baar aapka phone kaata tha jab main busy hothee thee."

Mihika "Koi bahaana nahee chalegi aap bahaar aa rahen hain merey saath."

Ishita "Hum kall jayengey aaj main sach mey busy hun."

Mihika "Kyaa aapko jeeju ka logic break karna hain."

Ishita "Kyaa majaak kar rahe ho .Abh bahuth tamaasha bana liya tumney uss baath ka.Mujhey Ruhi ka assignment mey madad karnaa hain .Kall he presentation hain."

Mihika leaves .

Ishita gets busy helping Ruhi in her assignment .

It was around 8'O clock landline rings .

Ishita takes the call and it was Raman.

Raman "Ruhi ko phone de naa."

Ishita does so.

Then Ruhi speaks with Raman for few minutes and then it goes in chain to Mrs Bhalla and Mr Bhalla and call ends.Ishita gets pissed off over this.She even dreamt it except tha part Raman staying their for a month.

Ishita was sleeping in her room and her thoughts over Raman's call.

After two days.

Raman comes back home and Ishita was in clinic that time .Ishita comes to know that Raman came and she rushes to home.

She reaches home and as usual goes towards her room but finds it bolted from inside.

Ishita feels it strange as why Raman locked it from inside.

Raman opens the door as aIshita knocks it.

Ishita smells something different in room.

Ishita "Raman aapko bhee yeh smell aa rahen hain."

Raman panics and "Kaunsa mujhey kuch nahee aa rahen hain."

Ishita understands Raman is hiding something .

She starts checking the luggage of Raman.

Raman "Mera luggage kyon check kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Kuch naheen main bass used kapadey dhobi key liyen ."

Raman "Main karlonga."

Ishita "Main kar rahen hon naa."

She sees luggage and notices something.

Ishita "Raman aapka blue shirt kahan hain.Aap ussey lekar gaye they naa."

Raman "Shayad bhool gaya hunga.Tumhey usspar itnaa interest kyon a rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman aapka ek suit bhee nahen hain."

Raman "Bola naa bhol gaya hunga."

Ishita now understood something.

Ishita "Raman aap mujhsey kuch chupa rahen hain."

Raman "Kuch naheen bass tumhaari galath faimee hain."

Ishita "Aapney room andar sey lock kiya thaa.Aap ney aisa kabhee nahee kiya.Aur room mey mujhey medicines ka badhbhoo aarahen hain."

Raman "Koi smell nahen hain."

Ishita "Aap mujhsey chupa nahe saktey Raman.Aap bhool gayen hongey kee main bhee clinic mey kaam karthee hun main bhee scent sey patha kar sakthey hun kee kisney pathi baandhi hain."

Ishita "Raman apna shirt utariyen."

Raman gives a sign he is caught.

Raman "Tum pagal ho gaye hon kya.Main apna shirt kyon utaru."

Ishita "Aap apna shirt utariye warna main sabko bulakar kehdongi."

Raman finally takes his shirt.Then we can see bandage ove Raman's ribs.

Raman "Chota sa cut hain stitches lagey hain.Huftey mey theek ho jaonga."

Ishita is scared now.Raman is saying it as small one but bandage is covering around six inches.

Ishita "Aap ney mujhey bathana jaroori nahen samjha.Aap ney mujhey kyon nahee bathaya?"

Raman "Mainey kissey ko naheen bathaya."

Ishita "Mainey poocha aapney mujhey kyo nahee bathaaya."

Raman "Ishita sab log panic ho jaayengey.Main theek hun issliyen kissey ko naheen bathaya."

Ishita "Raman mera sawaal Aapney mujhay kyo naheen bathaya.Aapko itna bada chot lage hain.Aapney mujhey nahee bathaya."

Raman not knowing how to coverup gets to Angry Bhalla mode.

Raman "Just stop it Ishita.Main ney kissey ko nahee bathayaMain nahee chahtha kee mera family panic ho aur pareshan hon jab who cheez important nahen hon."

Raman "Aur TUM APNA TYPICAL BIWI BANNEY KA NAATAK BANDH KARO .TUM ISS GHAR MEY SIRF RUHI KEE MAA AUR GHAR KE BAHUN HO.MERA PERSONNAL MATTERS MEY INVOLVE MATH HUAN KARO."

Ishita was struck listening this words as Raman this time reminded her about their marriage is just for Ruhi.

Raman "Aur tum yeh baath kissey ko nahen bathaogi."

Raman leave that place wearing his shirt.Ishita was still in shock unable to understand what to do.

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part 5

Scene starts with Ishita being hurt and goes out of room.Mihika who was waiting for chance comes to her.

Mihika "Akka aap free hon aaj?"

Ishita thinking that she needs a diversion accepts it.

Ishita "Han kyon?"

Mihika "Kuch naheen mujhey shopping key liyen jaana tha?"

Ishita "Theek hain main bhee aa rahen hun?"

Mihika and Ishita go for shopping in her car.Ishita is in car but her mind is completely over the wound she saw.

Mihika "Aapney jeeju sey mila.Main ney dekha tha unhey bahar jaathey samay bahuth gussey mey thaa?"

Ishita thinks about Raman's words and unknowingly gets tears in her eyes.

Mihika notices this.

Mihika "Jeeju aap pey gussa tha.Kyaa huan ussney kuch kahan?"

Ishita "Tum aisey kyo pooch rahen hon ?Kuch naheen huan?"

Mihika "Aapkey asson alag baath batha rahen hain."

Ishita then notices tears in her eyes and clears them.

Ishita "Kuch naheen."

She suddenly stops the car.

She remembers Raman's words and again stops.

Mihika "Akka mujhey batao naa kyan huan.Main aapkey madad kar saktey hun ."

Ishita "Raman mujhsey kuch chupa rahan hain.Ussney mujhsey itnaa bada baath chupaaya."

Mihika thinks something is seriously wrong and gets tensed.

Mihika "Kyan huan ?"

Ishita tells everything happened in her room to Mihika.Mihika also get tensed.

Mihika then remembers about Bala's words.

In flash back "Ishita aur Raman ka rishtha sab key jaisa naheen hain.Sab key rishtey khushiyo sey judey hothey hain.In donon ka tho problems aur tensions sey bana hain.In dono ka shaadi huee bhee Ruhi ko paaney ke liyen jab saarey ghar mey tension thaa."

"So jab in dono ko saath bhee laana hon tho koi problem hee kar saktee hain.Ishita ko bhee Raman apney khushiyon na baatney sey jyaada affect naheen hogi.Jitna jab who hogi Raman apney pareshaniyan naa baatney sey hothi hain."

"So our main work is to expand any problem related to Raman to peak and then leave them alone."

Mihika reminds evryt thing Bala told.

Mihika "Akka aap itnaa tension kyo le rahen hon.Jeeju ney bola naa who sabko tension naheen dena chahtha thaa issliyen naheen bola."

Mihika "Waisey bhee aapney kitney logon lo dekha hoga jaisey ghaayal aap jeeju ko itnaa importance kyo de rahen ho jab who khud usskey baarey mey naheen soch rahen hain."

Ishita "Kyaa kahan tumney.Sabmey aur Raman mey farak hain.Raman mera ..."

Mihika "Doosth hain" interrupts .

Mihika "Yeh bahuth baar bol chukee ho aap."

Mihika "Dosth hain maana accha doosth hain.Fir bhee itnaa pareshan honey kee jaroori nahen hain.Abh jeeju theek hain naa."

Ishita "Abh theek hain.Ussey sach mey kuch ho gaya hotha tho yeh baath karney ka mauka nahen miltha poora pariwar ro rahen hothey."

Mihika "Abh kuch naheen huan naa abh hua hotha tho sab kuch chod deejiye."

Mihika "Waisey bhee aapkey kitney dosth hain jiskey aap choto sey itna paresha hojathey hain.Main ney tho aapko itna pareshan kabhee naheen dekha kissey dosth ke liyen."

Ishita don't have answer for this question.

They reach shopping mall and Ishita goes for car parking.

Mihika then calls Mihir .

Mihika "Mihir Raman jeeju ko Hyd. Mey koi bada chot lagee hain.Mujhey usskey baarey mey janna hai.Akka bahuth pareshan hain.Bath kissey ko patha naheen hona chahiyen."

Mihir "Toda saas tho lo pehley.Theek hain main patha kartha hun."

Ishita comes there.

Mihika "Main ney Mihir ko bathaya who patha karega kee jeeju ko chot kaisey lagee.Abh tho khush ho jaon."

Ishita fakes a smile and Mihika accepts even though she knows it.

part 6




Scene starts with both Ishita and Mihika in shopping mall.Mihika is buying few dresses for herself.Then a crazy idea comes to her and she plans to buy a dress for Mihir.

Mihika "Akka main kya soch rahen thee kee main Mihir key liyen bhee kuch lo.Who tho hmmesha mujhey koi na noi gift detha rehtha hain.Main ney kuch naheen diya."

Ishita "Tumhaari marzi.ho karan hain karo mujhsey kyon pooch rahen hon."

Mihika "Akka aap bhee naa main ney waisey hee pocha aap sab kuch seriously le rahen hain."

Ishita "Main theek he hun.Chalo chaltey hain."

They goes for mens corner.

Mihika was checking few clothes for Raman and Ishita was seeing this.

Ishita then remembers Raman's blue shirt missing and then Ruhi's words Blue is Papa's favourite.

She goes and checks few shirts for Raman.She then selects a blue shirt for him.Mihika watches this from distance.Mihika smiles over this.

Mihika "Akka aapney bathaya naheen aap jeeju key liyen bhee le rahen hain."

Ishita "Kuch naheen.Main waisey ley rahen thee Raman ka favourite colour hain aur who Hyd.mey bhool gaye tho."

Mihika "Akka you no need to explain me.Apkaa husband hain usskey liyen jho bhee kare who aap donon key beeh mey hain."

Ishita "Its nothing like that.Tum bhee jyada soch rahee hon."

Mihika "theek hain hum ghar chaltey hain."

In home Ishita was thinking how to give shirt for Raman.

She keeps it over bed and goes to do her work.Raman comes there and sees the shirt and understands Ishita brought it for him.

Then he remembers her words in office over being Ruhi's mom and decides to let it be there.

Ishita comes there while Raman was busy over his laptop and notices that shirt being untouched.

Ishita "Raman main aapkey liyen yeh shirt layee thee."

Raman "Yeh merey liyen thaa.Kyaa jaroori thaMerey pass waisey bhee bahuth saarey hain naa."

Ishita "Aapka blue shirt nahen hain aur who aapka favourite tha naa."

Raman "Ishita isska yeh matlab naheen kee abh yeh mera favorite shirt ho jaayega."

Ishita "Main aapkey liyen layee thee aapko pehnna hain tho pehaniyen naheen tho cupboard mey padee rahegi."

Raman was about to get up but feels little pain over his wound and sits down.Ishita notices this.

Ishita panics and "Raman aap bhaithey rahiyen ."

Raman "Koi jarori nahen hain main karlonga."

Ishita stops she is scared and remembers his words from morning.

Raman then removes his shirt and gets to see his wounds.He decides to change bandage.

He unwraps it slowly but feels difficulty and pain.

Ishita was unable to see Raman in pain and rushes to him.

Ishita "Main karungi."

Raman "Main karlonga mujhey madad kee jaroori nahen hain."

Ishita "Raman mujhey karney dejiyen.Main dosrey tarekey sey bhee kar saktee hun.Sabko bulaakaey."

Ishita "Sabko bulaungi tho aapko sabko jawaab dena hoga kee aapko kaisey lagee .Sab lok dar jayengey panic hongey jo aap naheen chahthey hain."

Raman understood that Ishita was firm lets her do that.Ishita slowly starts unwrapping the bandage.

She clears bandage and notices a big cut over his ribs and stitches all over it.

Ishita gets scared seeing it and tears over her eyes rolling and she starts crying.Raman was lost in Ishita even though he is avoiding Ishita he always wanted to be with her she ws not ready to accept but Raman was sure that she is more than a friend for him.

Ishita unable to see the wound .

Ishita "Raman kaisey lagee aapko yeh chot.Kabh lagee thee."

Raman "Tumhey kyaa hogaya.Chota sa hee tho hain.Theek hojayega."

Ishita "Yeh aapko choti lag rahi hain.Raman itnaa bada cut hain.Kaisey huin."

Raman "Ishita tum panic math hon.Theek hain mujhey kuch naheen huan." Raman trying to console her.Raman cant act before Ishita seeing her in tears.

Ishita "Raman kaisey hue yeh sab .Aapney mujhey nahen bathaya."

Raman "Beers bottle sey slit huein.Staff key saath party mey they aur koi bahaar key admee merey employee tang kar rahan tha.Uss ladkeey ko bachaney gaya tho jhagada huan aur who log beer bottle sey attack kiya aur thap slit huin.Bass chukar nikal gayee.Fir hospital gaya tha aur stitch lagalee."

Ishita "Aap ney mujhey kyon naheen bathaya.Aap janthey hain ney main pareshan hungi."

Raman "Ishita tumhey batha detha to tum panic ho jathee aur sab ko bathathee.Abh main theek hun that is what all that matters."

Ishita "Its not just Raman .Aapko kuch ho gaya hotha tho .Oh god "

Ishita "Raman aapko kyaa jaroori thaa dosron kem mamley mey padney kee."

Raman "Ishita how can you say that .Ek ladkee ko main jaisey Akeley kaisey chod saktha hun.I have to help her .Humanitty naam kee koi ceez hothee hain."

Ishita "Raman aap Akeley mardh naheen hain duniyan mey .Uss ladkee ka koi aur bhee madad kar sakta hain.Aap ko itnaa risk leney ee kya jaroori tha.Abh itna cut huan hain.Unkey pass koi chaku hotha tho aapkey jaan bhee jaa saktey hain."

Ishita breaks down after this and goes running to bathroom.Where she cries non stop.Raman tries to stop her but she goes immediatly.Raman looking at her confused.

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part 7


Scene starts with Ishita realizing that Raman's wound is still uncovered and rushes out side.Raman was trying to dress change the bandage .Ishita comes there and takes cotton from his hands.

Ishita "Raman aap kuch waqt rukhiyen main uss khoon ko saaf kardungi fir patti bandh lungi."

Raman seeing Ishita in angry mode preferred to be silent and let her do her work.

Ishita brings hot water and starts cleaning blood over body beside wound.Raman has pain but it is less over the pain which Ishita is feeling.

Ishita "Raman main ney yeh dekha naheen hotha tho yeh baath aap mujhey kabhee naheen bathathey naa."

Raman was silent and Ishita understood it means yes.

Ishita "Kabhee naheen na Raman?Mujehy kabhee naheen patha chaltha aapkey moo sey."

Raman "Ishita tum iss baath ko itna serious kyon le rahen hon ?"

Ishita "Raman aapkey liyen yeh serious baath nahen ho sakthey lekin merey liye yeh bahuth serious hain."

Ishita "Kyaa jaroori tha aapko uss ladki ka madad karna.Who bhee jab poorey party mey aap Akeley tho nahen hain naa."

Raman was silent.Ishita continues making bandage.

Raman "Ishita iss tarah a key soch galath hain.Yeh tum bhee jaanthee hon.Ek Akeley ladkee ka madad karnaa galath kaisey huan?"

Ishita "Raman uss ladkee ko bachaaney key liyen uss party mey koi aur bhee hoga.Lekin iss ghar mey sirf ek Raman Bhalla hain.Ruhi key liyen ek hee papa hain aur .Merey liyen bhee ek he hai aap."

Raman "Iss taraha tumney Ruhi key baarey mey soch hotha tho tum iss ghar mey naheen hothee.Ruhi kee maa nahen ban pathee."

Raman "Uss din main ney tumhey uss gundon sey bachaya tha shadi sey pehley.Thab mainey isa nahee kiyaa hotha tho.Iss bath karney tum yahan naheen hothee."

Raman "Uss din tum bhee mera kyaa thee kuch naheen naa.Fir bhe main ney tumhara madad kiya.Fir wohi kaam main aaj kiya tho tumhey galath lag rahan hain."

Ishita "Mujhey farak padtha hain Raman."

Ishita starts crying again.

Ishita "Raman aap iss barey mey baath karna bandh keejiyen."

Raman was going for his shirt and notices that it has blood marks over it.Ishita notices this.

Ishita "Aap doosra shirt pehen leejiyen .Main ussey saaf kar dethee hun."

Raman obeys her order.

Ishita who was silently thinking over the thought if some thing happened to Raman .

She gets scared over the thought itself.

Raman notices this and goes to her.

Raman "Ishita tum theek tho hon.Tumhey kuch chahiyen."

Ishita "Main theek hun Raman."

Then looking at him. Then looking at his eyes face to face.

Ishita "Raman mujhey kuch chahiyen aap mujhey de saktey hain."

Raman "Kyaa chahiyen?"

Ishita "Pehley boliyen de saktey hain ya naheen?Main aapkee jaan nahe leney waaley hun."

Raman "Theek hain bathao kyaa chahiyen?"

Ishita "Aap mujhsey wada keejiyen kee aap zindagi mey kabhee merey saamney jhoot naheen bolengey."

Raman was shocked over the promise she asked .

Ishita "Mujhey wada keejiyen Raman."

Ishita then removing a bracelet from his bag which she brought from shopping maal with out knowing to Mihika.It was shinning golden one withR.I.Rembradded over the face.

She makes him wear it by herself .

Ishita "Raman jab thak yeh bracelet main khud na utaru aap kabhee merey saamney jhoot naheen bolengey.Kissey sey bhee naheen."

Raman agrees seing Ishita more serious over the matter.

Then Raman leaves the room while Ishita was still serious over the matter.

Raman then starts thinking over what happened inside.

Raman "Ishita itney serious ho gayee iss baath sey.Ussey itnaa kyon farak pad rahan hain."

Raman "Main ney koi galthee tho naheen kardee Ishita ko door rakh kar."

Raman then realizes that Ishita is in love with Raman as much as Raman is in love with her.

Raman "Tho mujhey Ishita ko waqt dena hoga iss baath ko samajhney key liyen.Mujhey bhee itna waqt laga samajhney."

Raman smiles realizing that Ishita loves him.

Inside Ishita thinks

"Mujhey itnaa kyon farak pad rahan hain iss baath sey.Aur who waada main ney kaisey aur kiss haq sey poocha."

Then she remembers Bala's words over when he asked are you in love with him.

Then Ishita realizes that yes she is in love with Raman .

Ishita "Main Raman sey pyaar "and a silent smile graces her face.

Ishita "Yes I am in love with Raman."

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part 8



Scene starts with Ishita realizing that she loves Raman and smiles with the though itself.

Then her mind goes toward what is Raman thinking .

Ishita "Raman merey baarey mey kyaa sochta hain.Raman bhee mujhsey pyaar kartha hain ya uskeyy liyen main sirf ek samjhotha hun."

Ishita "Ussney kal hee mujhey kaha kee yeh shaadi sirf ek deal hain.Ussney teen din mey kitney baar bola yeh baath."

Ishita "Ya Raman bhee mujhsey pyaar kartha hain lekin bol naheen rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman ko bhee mera fikar hain.Lekin mujhsey itnee bade baath chupaya kaisey."

Ishita gets plenty of doubts over whether Raman loves her or not.

Ishita "Mujhey patha karna hoga yeh baath."

Ishita "Mujhey Akeley karna hoga.Mihika ya kissi aur ko bathaongi tho .Ussko sab cheez ek mazaak ban hayee hain."

Then shifts to Raman's side he was damn happy just by realizing the fact that Ishita loves him .

Raman "Main ussey kuch time doonga realize karney key liyen .Main seedha boldunga tho yeh baath complex bhee ho saktee hain."

Raman reaches office and while entering his cabin he notices Mihir is in tension.

Raman "Mihir kyaa ho gaya tum itnaa pareshaan kyon ho?"

Mihir "Kuch naeen bhai.Mihika ke wajaha sey."

Raman "Kyaa kiya ussney."

Mihir "Kall mujhey kuch kaam bola ussney aur tab sey har adhey ghantey phone karkey pooch rahen hain kee kaam huan ya naheen."

Raman "Main todi madad karoo."

Mihir realize he cant use Raman as he was finding about him and how he got accident.

Mihir "Bhai main karlonga.Yeh meri problem hain.Main ney hee ussey mere life mey invite kiya naa propose karkey bhugatna tho padega hee."

Raman "Mihika ko pehley tum ney propose kiya tha kyaa."

Mihir "Han bhai.Yeh meri life kee sabsey badi galthee thee.Mihika ney kiya hotha tho mera upper hand hotha."

Raman leaves from there as Mihir gets a call from Mihika again.

Raman in his cabin.

Raman "Main propose nahee karney wala hun.Ishita ko hee pehley bolney dena hoga."

Raman "Main kyon karu who bhee karthee hain.Pehley ussey hee karna padega ."

Raman "Mihir ke taraha main bhee pehley propose karonga tho."

He goes to imagination and imagines Ishita scolding him on phone while he is trying to calm down.

Raman "Main yeh naheen honey doonga.Ishita you must do it."

Raman "Yeh khatam naheen huin."seing bracelet around his hands.

Raman then remembers about the promise which Ishita asked and he gave.

Raman kisses bracelet and for first time notices the embrading in it.

RIR -Raman Ishita Ruhi

Raman "Pagal pyaar karthee bhee hain aur manney key liyen bhee tayyar nahen hain." Smiling.

Raman "Main Ishita key samney jhoot nahen bol saktha abh."

Raman "Yeh maamla tho pora theda pad gaya.'Who mujhey seedha pochey tho tab mujhey sach bathna padega.Chupa bhee nahen paonga .One liners bhee kaam nahen ayengey."

Raman "Main tab sach kaisey chupauga.Main tho abh ussey koi surprise bhee nahen de paonga abh."

Raman "Uss Madrasan ko bhee yeh ghatia idea kaisey ayya."

Raman "Main abh jhoot bol bhee nahen saktha aur Sach nahen bolna chahtha hun."

Raman "Abh kaisa hoga ?Soch Raman soch tum CEO hain tum kuch raasth nikal paogey."

Raman "Jhoot key alaawa sach chupaney key kitney tareekey ho saktey hain.Dhoondho Raman dhoondho."

Raman then types How to hide truth with out lying' on google.He gets many solutions but none mathing his situation.

Then he kisses his bracelet again and say

"Main kar paonga.For you Ishita.I love you " seeing her photo on his phone.

Then in other side Mihika was speaking to Mihir as Mihir was telling what happened in Hyderabad in party.

Mihir then tells him to come to a caf to discuss the matter.She then calls Bala and tell him to come there.

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part 9

Scene starts with Mihir ,Mihika and Bala meeting in caf.

Mihika "Jeeju akka kall bahuth pareshaan thee.Bahuth gussa bhee."

Bala "Kya huan tha.Tumney mujhey bathaya naheen ?"

Mihir was silent spectator as he don't understand anything.

Mihir "Chal kyaa rahan hain yaha?Bhabhi pareshaan hain tho bhai ko kyo nahen bola?"

Mihika "Kyaa hain naa pareshaani ka kaaran bhee jeeju hee hain issliyen ."

Mihir "Explain ."

Mihika then tells Mihir everything what happened all these days.

Mihir "Tho humeyb abhee kyaa karnaa hain."

Mihika "Mihir tumm uss ladkey key baarey mey patha kar saktey hon jissney jeeju ney bachaaya thaa."

Mihir "Easy hain.Employee hain aur MD kee behen bhee.Kyon?"

Mihika to Bala "Jeeju Raman Jeeju ney Hyd. mey kissey ladkee ko bachaya thaa kuch goondon sey.Aur bachate t bachatey ussey ek chot lagee.Jeeju ney kissey ko naheen bathaya kyon kee koi panic naa hon.Aur akka ney jeeju ko pakad lee."

Mihir "Kaisey?"

Mihika "Jassosi.Jeeju ka koi shirt missing thaa aur room mey dawaai ka smell.Pakadlee."

Bala "Fir kyan huan ."

Mihika "Wha kyaa huan main naheen janthee lekin who poorey din moodout thee.Kuch patha nahee Gussa ya dard donon ek saath dekha mainey."

Mihika "Uss chot kee baath Akka ko nahen bathaney key wajaha sey ussko itnaa gussa ayan .God my baal baal bach gayee nahen tho who gussa mujhpar nikaltha."

Bala "Abh tumhaara kyaa plan hain."

Mihika "Jeeju yeh socho uss chot ney akka ko itnaa hurt kiyan.Abh akka ko patha chaley kee iss chot koi ladkee ke wajaha sey hon tho kyaa hoga.Fir uss ladkee jeeju ka peechey karey tho."

Mihir "Ussko hum kahan sey layengey.Aur who hummaree madad kyon karengi?"

Mihika "Main ussey baath karongi aur request karongi kee hummarey madad karey."

Bala "Fir bhee who Hyd mey hain."

Mihika "Jeeju main janthee hun.Issliyen tho Mihir ko hummarey plan mey involve kiyan."

Mihir "Mathlab.Mera koi bali chadaaney ka plan tho naheen banaaya tumney."

Mihika "Just shutup Mihir.Tumhey kuch bhee karkey uss ladkee ko Delhi transfer karwaana hain."

Mihir "Kyaa.Who office abhe abhe khuli hain aur itnaa jaldee transfer."

Mihika "Tum kar paongey yaa nahen seedhe bathao naheen tho main jeeju sey pooch kar karwaongi."

Mihir "Bhai madad karega nice joke.Pehley tum ussey convince karo main fir transfer karwaonga."

Mihika "Usska number chahiyen."

Mihir then calls someone and then few more and then he finally gets the number and he gives it to Mihika.

Mihir "Ladkee ka naam Maya hain.Wha ka MD kee behen hain.BA poorey kee aur network section mey employee hain."

Mihir "Transfer easy hojayega .Hummarey pass uss division mey employee kam padey hain naye projesct kee wajaha sey."

Mihika the calls that number.Some lady picks the call .

Mihika "Am I speaking to Miss Maya Phadnis."

Maya "Han .Sorry I don't recogonize you."

Mihika "Actually aap mujhey jaanthey nahen lekin humey aapke madad kee jaroori hain."

Maya "Pehley aap apnaa naam tho bathayiye."

Mihika "Mihika .Main delhi sey call kar rahen hun.Aap jiss company mey kaam kar rahen hain usska CEO hummarey relative hain."

Maya "Aap Raman sir ko jaanthee hain."

Mihika "Hummara jeeju hain.Actully main unkey liyen aapko phone kiya."

Then she explains everything to Maya and she was ready to help the moment she understood the situation.

Mihika "Aapka transfer order kall milega aur aap yahan meray ghar mey rukhiyega,Main sabko yeh boldoongi kee aap merey dosth hain."

Maya "Bol rahen ho dosth lekin abhee bhee aap bularahen hon.Call me Maya."

Mihika "Did you agree with plan."

Maya "Han .Main baath mey phone karongi.I am ready to come."

Mihika then gives thums up to others and all feel happy.

Mihika "Ussney bahuth simply accept kar diyan.Mihir abh tumhaari baari."

Bala "Fir hummara aglaa meeting Maya key saath hoga."

Mihika "Jeeju main akka so direct sach bolun yaa kuch spice add karo."

Bala "Jitnaa Raman ka involvement hain ussmey jhoot math boolna.Hum risk nahen ley saktey "

Mihir "Risk mathlab"

Bala "Raman almost har baath Ishita ko batha detha hain.Shaayad yeh haatsa bhee bathaya hoga.Issliyen hum ladkee key taraha sey game khel rahen hain.Issliyen yehi better hoga kee Raman key side kuch change math karo.Theek hain?"

Both Mihir and Mihika agrees and they part their ways.

On other side Ishita is making plans on how to find what is in Raman's mind.

Ishita "Mujhey maximum Raman key saath Akeley bithana hoga Koi ndisturbance nahee.Tab main kissey tarah sach bulwa saktee hun.""Abh who jhoot bhee nahen bol payega."

Ishita plans for a dinner with Raman.Raman here is thinking of ways to hide truth without telling lie and he made a big list on his own.Scolding Ishita for that oath.

Raman "Mujhey maximum Ishita sey Akeley milney kaa chaces kam karnaa hoga."

Ishita calls Raman and Raman picks the call scolding himself

Ishita "Raman aap kya kar rahen hon."

Raman "Dimak kyaa clinic mey chodkar aye.Phone pey baath kar rahan hun abhee "

Ishita smiling "Abh naheeh phone karney sey pehley."

Raman "Galiyan de rahan tha tumhey uss wada key lien."

Ishita laughs at this as Raman is really not telling any lie.

Ishita "Raman aap free hon aaj shaam 8 bhajey ."

Raman almost stops tellin no "Han free hun .Kyon?"

Ishita "Raman hum dinner par jaa rahen hain.Bahuth din huen humey Akeley bahaar jaakar."

Raman "Theek hain.Merey pass koi option bacha hain kyaa."

Ishita cuts the call smiling .Raman with worn out face .


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part 10


Scene starts with Raman thinking about dinner.

Raman scolding himself.

Raman "Abh Ishita key saath Akeley jaana pad rahan hain."

Raman "Kyaa time chal rahan hain mei pehley Ishita sey Akeley milney key liyen bahana dhondh raha tha.Abh jab ussney khud bulawa diya mujhey ussey rokhney kee planning karna pad rahan hain."

Raman "Kyaa karna hoga abh main jhoot nahen bol sakta kee koi meeting hain."

Raman "Aaj koi meeting kyon naheen rakha yaar.Sab din tho mera plan kharaab karney koi naa noi meeting athee thee.Aaj kya ho gaya."

Raman "Abh mujhey hee kuch karnaa hoga.Kyaa karon?"

Raman "Think Think think.Idea"

Raman "Ishita mujhsey yeh sawaal pooch saktey hain.Who kissey aur key saamney yeh sawaal kar payegi kya."

Raman "Ruhi.Yes Ruhi key saamney who aisey baath kar naheen paayegi."

Raman "Abh mujhey kissey bhee taraha Ruhi ko bhee saath le jaana hoga."

Raman feels happy for the solution he got.

Raman "Mujhey ek backup plan bhee karna padega."

Then he calls Mihir and tells him something .

Raman "Mujhey yeh kaam theek hona chahiyen kuch bhee gadbad huin naa tho main tumhey chodunga nahee."

Here Ishita is making planning for dinner.She is checkin all sarees and combinations before mirror and she is not liking anyone now.

Now her motto is to impress Raman and stay with him and keep his eyes fixed on her.

She finally selects a combination and is quite impressed with it.

Ishita then remembers about Mihika.

Ishita "Main abh Mihika ko sach bathaungi tho who meri taang keechti rahegi.Kuch naheen bolungi tho ussey shak ho jayega .Mujhey ussey is belief mey rakhna hooga kee abh bhe problem chal rahan hain."

Ishita then goes to Mihika .

Ishita "Mihika tumhey kuch patha chala uss chot key baarey mey.Mihir ney patha lagaaya."

Mihika "Han Akka .Opening party mey huan tha sab."

Mihika "Party mey koi bahaar waaley ayen they .Aur daaru peekar koi ladkee ko ched rahen they aur jeeju ney unhey rokhney kee koshish kee aur who log jagada karnaa suru kiyan.Jeeju ney sabko achey taraha handle kar rahen they fir kissey ney beer bottle sey marney kee koshish kiya tab slit huein thee.Jeeju ney sabko police key hawaaley kar diya thaa."

Ishita "Kyaa jaroori tha Raman ko doosro ko maamlo mey involve honey kee.Ussey kuch ho gaya hotha tho."

Mihika "Akka aap jeeju key baarey mey itnaa sochna bandh karo.Jab sab kuch theek hain aap fir wohi baath ko pakadkar baith gayee kee jeeju ney aapko nahen bathaya.Aur aap itna negative kyon soch rahen hain kee kuch huan hotha tho."

Ishita "Yeh simple see baath lag rahen hain tumhey.Fir bhee ussey mujhey bathana chahiye thaa.Mujhey yeh hatsa tumhaarey mu sey sunna pad rahan hain.Had hain yaar."

Mihika "Akka mujhey jaana hoga .Bye baath mey mikengey."

Mihika in her mind "Thank God jeeju ney akka ko kuch nahen bathaya .Accha huan mujhey mauka mila.Jeeju ney bathaya hoth tho gussa wahee nikalthee aur sab kuch khatam ho jaatha.Abh yeh sabh gusaa ikkatta karkey ek hee baar nikaalna hoga" leave s smiling at Ishita.

Ishita reciprocated it with a smile and in mind "Sorry Mihika mujhey tumsey jhoot bolna pad rahan hain.Maian jaanthaa hun kee main Raman sey pyaar karthee hun ,Yeh baath main sabsey pehley Raman ko hee bolungi aur kissey sey bhee nahee."

Raman comes home and is watching TV in his room.

Ishita comes there and looks at him smiling from door and blushes.

Raman "Ishita tum pehley Ruhi ko rady karo aur tum bhee ready ho jaon.Fir hum chaltey hain."

Ishita "Ruhi ko kyon?"

Raman "Ishita hummarey dinner mey tum Ruhi ko kaisey bhool saktee hon."

Ishita "Sorry main bhool gayen.Abh kaisey mainey reservation sirf hum donon key naam mey kiyan."

Raman "Han jaantha hun manager ney phone kiyaa tha.Thab main ney bol diyan kee teen logon key liyen kare."

Raman "Ruhi ko gussa ayega kee hum dono Akeley chaley."

Raman "Mainey Ruhi ko batha bhee diya who bahuth excited hain."

Raman "Main ready hokar atha hunt um merey kapadey nikaal lena."

Raman goes to bath room and Ishita signs as if he is going to hit him.

Ishita "Kitnaa accha mauka thaa.Raman ney Ruhi ko bhee buladiyan." Smiling as her plan failed.

She then removes new shirt which she brought for Raman and places it over his bed and she then goes and makes Ruhi ready.She then gets ready in complete attempt to fix Raman's gazes on herself.Which she never fails even without trying .

Raman gazes are as planned by Ishita fixed on her and she is happy with this and is smiling and then Ruhi is happy with plan of dinner along with family.She don't know that she became Kabaab mey Haddi for Ishita and Shield for Raman.

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Scene starts with IshRaRu going in their car .Ishita was looking at Raman and Raman looking at Ruhi.Ishita notices this and asks Ruhi to sit along with her over her lap.Ruhi readily agrees.

Ishita "Raman aapko yaad hain Raman.Jab hum pehlee baar miley they jab Ruhi Akeley bhaitney key liyen kitnaa Ro rhee thee.Thab mainey ussey godh mey bhitakar issey seat pey bhathee tee."

Raman smiles remembering it "Han yaad hain.Ruhi bahuth ro rahee thee daanth ka dard sey aur mujhey tumhaara hee number mila help service sey."

Ishita "Hummari kitnaa jhagada hotha thaa naa .Abh bhee kam naheen huyen lekin abh sab kuch theek lagtha hain jagada kartey waqt bhee."

They reach a mall in which Ishita has reseved for dinner.They were going for restaurant and they were stopped by a person.

Rp "Sir aaj hummarey shop kaa anniversary hain .Humney issliye kuch competition rakha hain couples key liyen.Aap participate kar saktey hain."

Raman and Ishita were silent and both wanted to participate but they don't know how to initiate for others .But that problem was sorted as Ruhi was there.

Ruhi without any timewaste "Han Mama Papa participate karengey."

That man smiles at excitement of Ruhi.

Rp "Beta aapka mama papa kaa naam bathao."

Ruhi " Papa ka naam Raman Kumar Bhalla.Mama ka naam Ishita."

Rp "So Mr and Mrs Bhalla.Aap thoda wait keejiyen program adey ghantey mey suru hoga.Aap chahey tho wait kar saktey hain yaa aapka kaam pura kar saktey hain."

Raman "Hum dinner key liyen aye they .Dinner karkey ayengey."

Rp "Theek hain sir."

They go for the restaurant and were having their dinner.

Ruhi was super excited and we know what she wants .Raman and Ishita should win it at any cost.

Ruhi "Papa humey jeethna hain."

Raman "Tum sirf mujhey kyo bol rahen hon.Ishita ko bhee bolo naa."

Ruhi "Papa Ishima ko patha hain mujhey kyan chahiyen.Issliyen sirf aapko batha raheen hon."

Ishita gets a plan and continues.

Ishita "Raman aap comfortable hain naa.Aapko participate karnaa chahtey hain naa."

Raman understood he was locked but then remembers about his promise seing his bracelet.

Raman "Ruhi chahtey hain naa kee hum participate karey.Tho mujey bhee manjoor hain isss competition.Abh main bhee chahtha hun"

Ruhi was happy with answer.

Ishita was confused with answer as it is not as straight forward she expected.Now she is confused of two meanings as it gives statement that Raman wants to participate because of Ruhi and other is he want to participate and even Ruhi wants same.

Ishita in mind "Raman kiss matlab sey bola ussney.Ruhi key liyen ya khud key liye."

Raman smiles at his victory as he was able to handle situation and Ishita in confusion.

Ruhi "Papa who bracelet nayeen hain?"

Raman "Han tumhaari Ishima ney diyya.Tumhey accha laga."

Ruhi "Bahuth pretty hain papa mujhey chahiyen."

Ishita now comes out of confusion and gets a new shock as Ruhi was asking that bracelet.

Raman "Han bahuth pretty hain naa.Dekho yahan "showing their initials."Ruhi Ishita Raman.Ishima ney hummarey initials bhee embrae karvaaya."

Ruhi "Han .Bahuth pretty hain."

Raman "Ishita Ruhi ko accha laga Ishita ussey dey do naa.Main khareed lunga."Raman forwarding his hand.

Ishita got a situation to handle now.She remembers the scene where she told him that he should not tell lie before her until she remover brace let by her own hands.

Ishita now struck between Ruhi and Raman.She is thinking how to deal with this now.

Ishita in mind "Main bracelet nikaalongi tho .Itnaa accha mauka fir nahee ayaga.Aur Ruhi ."

Ishita "Ruhi .Beta chod do naa.Main tumhaarey liyen nayee khareedoongi.Yeh aapkey liyen loose ho jaayega.Ha naa Papa."

Raman now unable to tell lie and understood his plan spoiled withdrawing hi hand "Han."

Raman fumes silently while Ishita smiles.

Then they get a call from the competition and they go their to attend it."

Anchor then announces the couples name who are participating .

Anchor "Iss competition mey jiss couple jeethega ussey hum.Iss shop say apney pasand ke kapdey ley saktey hain aur hummarey maal kaa coustomer card free mey milega."

Ruhi gets excited.Ishita was not interested in gifts but she want to check her co ordination with Raman.Raman was silent as he will be before a challenge.

Anchor "Theek hain pehley aap apney gifts decide keejiyen.Fir hum competition key liyen agey bhadengey."

Raman feels it strange even Ishita.

Anchor "Theek hain sarey gets iss taraf ayiyen aur aurat uss taraf."

Anchor "Aap yahan sey.Ek Casual wear ,Ek party wear aur ek normal use key liyen lena hoga."

Anchor "Fir jho kapdey aapney select kiyaa ussey hummarey attendant ko deejiyan.Aap competition jeeth gayen tho who kapdey aapkey."

Raman don't like this but seing Ishita excited he also gets interested in it.

Then attendants lead them to shop.But they get shocked when they realize gents were taken to ladies corner while ladies to gents.

Then anchor announce in mike.

Anchor "Abh aapko apney better half key liyen kapadey select kar hee saktey hain naa."

Raman then goes through the flow and selects dresses fot Ishita in order of their pattern and gives them to attendant and comes out before everyone.Even Ishita came outside early.But they were not allowe to meet.

Then they wait for competition waiting for anchor to announce the competition.

Anchor "Abh competition kee baarey.Ok abh gents gets corner mey aur ladies ladies corner jaayengey."

Anchor "Aapko pehachaana hoga .Kee aapkey partner ney aapkey liyen kiss kapadey select kiyan."

Anchor "Jiskey match hothey hain who jeethega."

All the couples gets shocked including IshRa.

The problem is they have to trace one pair among hundreds of others in each format.

Ishita and Raman have a distance eyelock before parting and they go to corners.

Here Raman gets struck over thought which clothes would Ishita would have selected for him and same does Ishita over the clothes their.

Raman slowly looks at them and reduces three pairs in each format.Same does Ishita.

Raman "Abh in teenon mey kissie ek ko select karna hoga .Ishita apney choice ka select kiya hoga tho yeh ho saktey hain.Mera choice tho yeh aur Ruhi kee choice par yeh."

Raman "Abh problem yeh hain kee Ishita kisskey choice pey select kiyan.Mera ya Ruhi ya apnaa."

Raman was trying to break the code here.

Ishita was equally confused "Raman kisskey choice pey liyan hoga."

Then they think for few minutes and they select on others choice.

Raman selects clothes which he assumed Ishita would have selected on her choice.Ishita does same on what shee assumed would be of Raman's choice.

They come out taking the clothes they selected.Both Ishita and Raman are shocked seing dresses in others hands.

Then attendants comes and takes clothes from them.

Then after few minutes anchor comes.

Anchor "Mainey kabhee naheen socha kee.Do insaan ek hee taraha soch sakte hain."

Raman and Ishita are waiting for results.

Anchor "Humey yahan do couples ney clean sweap kar diyan."

Anchor"Mainey socha bhee nahen kee koi itnaa perfect kar paayengey.Lekin yahna hummarey pass do couples hain.Aap jaana chahtey hain who kaun hain."

Then after a pause he announces it suddenly

Anchor "Mr and Mrs Bhalla and Mr and Mrs Mathur."

Raman and Ishita jumps with happiness and Ruhi was beyond happy.

Raman and Ishita had made a clean sweap they selected others selection perfectly.Ishita's happiness was beyond limit.She got Raman's choice correctly and and same did Raman.She have drops of tears in her eyes with happiness.

Anchor "Lekin humey ek hee couple chahiyen.Issliyen humey aap donon ke beech ek competition rakhrahen hain."

Raman and Ishita were allowed to meet now and Ishita was happy .

Anchor "Abh Mr Bhala and Mr Mathur aap yahan ayiyen."

Anchor "Aapney apney bewiyon ko bahuth baar gifts diyen hongey aur gifts dekar propose kiyan hongey."

Anchor "Abh aapko hum sabkey saamney apney pyaar key baarey mey bathana hoga.Aur uss speech key result sey hum winner decide karengey."

Thunder struck on Raman after listening this.Smile erupt in Ishita's face.

Now Raman is supposed to give a speech on his love .Now Raman is struck.

Raman is not supposed to tell lie and telling the truth will reaveal about his love for Ishita which he don't want.

Ishita is now sure ball is in her court and she will get her answer.

Anchor "Mr Bhalla aap stage pey ayiyen."

Raman goes on stage still thinking on how to handle this situation.


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