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Posted: 11 years ago
chap 13,14,15,16
Anjali is not happy in her married life (strange)
Arnav is obsessed with khushi but he is yet to realise his feelings..
KK's intuition is true...it is bound to happen when their is Arshi...
ch 14- so khushi is also affected by Arnav... intersting
ch 15- Rudra chaturvedi i don't know what to write abt him... he is so full of himself (selfish) Arshi would be a big blow to him...
ch 16- confrontation ...5 & half months ... their is lot more that can happen ... looking forward for next updates...
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Posted: 11 years ago
chap 17
oh how sweet of Arnav ...he helped khushi parking her car...
Arnav & khushi are experiencing feelings for each other ... khushi is shocked & surprised by her own behaviour...
chap 18
Both Arnav & khushi are trying to run away from the feelings... they both are are trying to ignore love which is not at all possible
beautifully written ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across your story, its really interesting. Will be reading other threads now 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
One of the best ff ever read
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Posted: 11 years ago
So that I don't loose this thread & need to stalk you again😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
From chapter 11 - 18
Ok, so I tell you this tale at first was boring to me, but since you've written this I decided to give it a try. Earlier when I read 10 chaps, I wasn't sure If I'll read next sooner. But as I read on, I realized those chapters were the base for the FF and now the main plot is taking its shape. The way arnav had gazed at her not only unsettled her but sent weird sensations in me too. Power of your description! Its good to know that she is affected by him as much as he is. Both have this desire for the other, but are afraid of its repercussions. Shantanu, I think is a very simple guy. So is the reason khushi's family likes him. And I think, khushi should talk about their relationship with him, lest things go worse. And now when he's arnav's cousin, I am sure a big twist is coming up!
Rudra, oh well what to say about him? He's like the shyaam oh IPK, A good boy's image but actually a shrewd and dirty person :/. His obsession for power has made him that he's actually been spying on his own family! Didn't gave two hoots about his sister's marriage, did he? :/
And is sleeping around with women just to satisfy his ravenous needs. The perfect villain for any story, he is.
Not only arnav, but even I was surprised to see the calm arnav, while khushi was being her worst and said disrespectful things to him. Instead to giving her a piece of mind, he was joking :O I agree, she's stubborn. God, how much of sexual tension was there in the air.. I mean like.. I felt my heart beating faster when he touched her cheeks with his.. Feelings to things to you, and so khushi slipped momentarily, but I am glad that she thought about shantanu. No matter how much ever
I love ArHi moments, but other character's feeligns are also important!
Now about distractions, this chapter opened up a proper chapter to their feelings. These two fools are undeniably attracted to each other, though I think arnav is lil more than her...And according to them, running away from it is the best solution. They better resolve this soon :p I am happy with khushi
heading boston! I do have a feeling that her leave from work will make arnav question him.
The quote you used in chapter 17 was amazing!

P.S. I was kinda disappointed that he didn't kiss her in elevator
P.P.S Following your advice and reading slowly😃 But had to comment...😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome... I love Arnav in this story ... His calmness ... His feelings are really passionate !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful. Read till chapter 17..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have just got started with it (9 chapters). I'm hoping to finish it before you remove it.
For a moment I thought Arnav was painting another girl (his wife) but I'm glad it was Khushi.
Shantanu is Shaan, isn't he? Uh-oh they're going to be tangled if that happens.
Why KK & no Shashi, just curious 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Naaz was undercover agent 😲
I hope Arnav tells Anjali about shyam & Amrapali questions Rudra. It's time for womanpower..
Now talking about women Khushi also needs to decide what she wants or rather whom she wants. Shantanu is a nice guy. So it won't do her any good if she keeps delaying the inevitable. The guy will be hurt.

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