From chapter 11 - 18
Ok, so I tell you this tale at first was boring to me, but since you've written this I decided to give it a try. Earlier when I read 10 chaps, I wasn't sure If I'll read next sooner. But as I read on, I realized those chapters were the base for the FF and now the main plot is taking its shape. The way arnav had gazed at her not only unsettled her but sent weird sensations in me too. Power of your description! Its good to know that she is affected by him as much as he is. Both have this desire for the other, but are afraid of its repercussions. Shantanu, I think is a very simple guy. So is the reason khushi's family likes him. And I think, khushi should talk about their relationship with him, lest things go worse. And now when he's arnav's cousin, I am sure a big twist is coming up!
Rudra, oh well what to say about him? He's like the shyaam oh IPK, A good boy's image but actually a shrewd and dirty person :/. His obsession for power has made him that he's actually been spying on his own family! Didn't gave two hoots about his sister's marriage, did he? :/
And is sleeping around with women just to satisfy his ravenous needs. The perfect villain for any story, he is.
Not only arnav, but even I was surprised to see the calm arnav, while khushi was being her worst and said disrespectful things to him. Instead to giving her a piece of mind, he was joking :O I agree, she's stubborn. God, how much of sexual tension was there in the air.. I mean like.. I felt my heart beating faster when he touched her cheeks with his.. Feelings to things to you, and so khushi slipped momentarily, but I am glad that she thought about shantanu. No matter how much ever
I love ArHi moments, but other character's feeligns are also important!
Now about distractions, this chapter opened up a proper chapter to their feelings. These two fools are undeniably attracted to each other, though I think arnav is lil more than her...And according to them, running away from it is the best solution. They better resolve this soon :p I am happy with khushi
heading boston! I do have a feeling that her leave from work will make arnav question him.
The quote you used in chapter 17 was amazing!
P.S. I was kinda disappointed that he didn't kiss her in elevator
P.P.S Following your advice and reading slowly😃 But had to comment...😛