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Posted: 10 years ago
muje to aj kafi padne wale as m again late😔
realy m sowie i 4get dat u update nxt part of dis story as well i only read vicious😔 sowie.

Fabulous update vishu😳
dis update is painful still have sum happiness, romantic still seperation, sadness still smiles exist, love still hateness and last anger but needed calmness.

Dis update is full on mixure emotions.
First car drive wer rags try his best to make kalpi easy and cheerful by d help of ria, n evn kalpi widout saying anything she is happy 4 father daughter duo. But alas at the tym of back drive rags again stick wid his cell n ruin his effort.

At hall rags did his best 4 ria, she is alws with him n he protect his princess frm evry bad shadow n yes it positively affected on kalpi.

Wow prem ki entry ho gayi. Nyc to see premna frndship, m just hoping evn prem wl play any cupid to bring ragna back. Kalpi's ans to PK "MYSELF" is like sumthing pinch in heart, so much sorrowful.

By seeing rags geting angry kalpi put her hand on his shoulder, dats show hw much she care for rags, n her ltl touch make rags calm show rags afect with her ltl touch.
Ragna dance oh my god i cnt believe it vishu u make is so much romantic whith kalpi's inner turmoil. Its beyond description, i dnt find any perfect for ragna dance😳

kalpi bump into her father n she instantly hug vithal bt vithal just jerk her its so painful bt i just hope dis party bring father daughter together. Kamla selfish women, she came to kalpi's home n gossiping on her diuorce shamless women😡

gauri stop kalpi knwing wat she is goin through. Kalpi seeing maya get happy is shown true sis relation.
Last reporter que hoping sumthing best cming 4 ragna.
Fabulous update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Today is a Black Day for us.
Many of the writer friends are so busy with their schedules and they have completely ignored us.
We are not getting updates from the latest and the old ones.
And u are also in that list.
PLS DON'T MAKE US TO WAIT FOR LONG.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls update asap.
We are so curious to know both Raghav's success story and the unforgettable blunder.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am extremely sorry that I am not able to reply individually this time. But ur comments means a lot to me n I promise from now onwards I will try my best to reply to each of u...Though I am not replying to any of u but I have read all ur comments... So thank u so much for such generous comments and the encouragement...

Please keep showering ur love in forms of comments... As I am trying to improve constantly and ur honest feedback might help me a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys... finally the next update. Hope u will like it. As always it's unedited.
One more thing i want to tell u... i am not going to pm u after every update but surely either at the end of day or after updating all the FFs so that I can merge all links in one pm. Hope u guys won't mind it.

Now enjoy the update. Please please comment as this FF is very special to me... i do not know why but i feel attached to it.

"Success story?? Well that's not as interesting as u guys think it is. Still if u ask me than I will give the credit of my success to two important women of my life...one is My beautiful wife Kalpana and other is my lovely daughter Rihanaa aka Riya. One was my unconditional support while other is the lucky charm. I still remember the day when I dint had the money to pay my school fees... I used to give tuitions to the child and worked under a real estate agent.. assistant to property broker in local language. I earned enough to complete my studies and join a job as salesman in one of the firm but the interest in properties was never away from me... I always wanted to start my own firm but dint had enough money. One night I shared my same dream with my wife, I told her how I have suffered for money in my life and do not want my child to suffer for that. I want him to enjoy all the luxuries of life and more of that I want to make my name... I want people to recognize me as Raghav Singhania. She handed me a sum of 1 lakh rupees which she had earned in 2 years of our marriage by doing some part time teaching job. I denied using it as it was the amount we were saving for our child who was about to born in 6-7months but it was Kalpana's support and trust on me that I started a small office along with my job which was that of a sales head that time. In day Kalpana used to sit on the office to attend the client... she was studying that time.. completing her ph.d. and along with her studies she looked after my clients... I just had to tell her the location and she did all the efforts to do the field work despite being pregnant. I used to feel guilty for her as coz of me instead of resting she was working but she never let me feel low. It was her love and support that we were earning decent money to spend a beautiful life with our baby. Soon my luch entered in my life... with my baby being a year older...we broke the biggest deal of our life... And as commission we got a decent sum to open a new office at prime location... I left my job and started working as full time estate agent... Kalpana too completed her ph.d. n became professor.. With my efforts slowly I became a builder and started my other businesses as well. Invested money in lands.. restaurants.. fashion house and many more. I faced many odds in the process... but Kalpi never let me broke and today I am standing in front of u with the trophy of best CEO. On this day, I just want to thank Kalppi for being my side when I was alone... Thank u Kalpana. U r best thing that happened to me. Thank u so much for being there when I needed u the most." Raghav said with moist eyes while remembering the old days with Kalpi.

"U r ryt Raghav... I was always there with u till u succeeded but after that I was left long behind... u included that u faced many hardships but u dint mention the bribes u gave.. the mean methods u used to achieve this success. I was with u till u were a builder but u left me behind when u became a corrupt businessman." Kalpi thought.

Everyone claps on hearing Raghav's speech... Vitthal's eyes were most on listening the difficulties Kalpi faced in her life despite having a father who earned a decent amount. His heart wrenched on hearing that in Kalpi's pregnancy she had to do the field work while Kamla was making faces on hearing Raghav praising Kalpi in front of media.. In hushed voice she said, "If she is so good than why is he divorcing her?" Vitthal glared at her angrily and with weird expression she replied, "I was just wondering what's wrong with them." Maya who was standing by Raghav was clapping whole heartedly but tears were forming in her eyes... She wipes them silently so that no one can notice her.

"Thank u sir for sharing ur story with us... but u said u were alone and Kalpana madam supported u... so sir u dint used to leave with ur mother and sister??" The reporter asked.

Raghav was dumbstruck on thequestion.. On not knowing what to answer he starts looking here and there.. Gauri who heard the question lowered her face to hide the tears and the pain of her face.

"They were not living together." Came the voice of Kalpi who was standing just away from Raghav... She moves forward and stands beside him and continued, "After Mr. Singhania's death, Gauri mom shifted to her brother's house. Pakhi was too small to face the hardships of life hence they had to take this decision. Raghav wanted to made his own identity and hence they were not living together. Anyways, they are together now and we should be happy about it instead of hovering in past."

Raghav glanced at Kalpi with gratitude.. but she just avoids his gaze and stand there in his support. Gauri silently thanks Kalpi with her head for saving her reputation in public.

"But mam... we have heard of ur divorce... What would u like to comment on that?? Is it true that Raghav sir has filed divorce case against u or is it just a rumor?" Another reporter asked.

"I wish I could tell them that I have filed divorce case but I can't as it will affect my child." Kalpi thought. She was tongue tied and don't know what to reply when Maya came to rescue... "Enough of this questionnaire... this is my sister's personal life and I think u should respect that. Anyways.. their separation is just a rumor and I hope u won't budge them again with such questions. Neways I think you should enjoy the party now.. No more questions please." She said with a stern face.

Few reporters still tried to take some of the bytes but Maya and Neha strictly stopped them. Kalpi goes to the garden area to check on kids and their facilities. Riya was dancing in the mid with kids around her... They were enjoying with eddy teddy and mickey mouse... Raghav to comes out after her to thank her for supporting in the interview.. he looks at smiling and admires her beauty.

After a long time he was seeing her smiling and do not want her smile to fade away coz of him... He hides behind the pillar so that she can't see him as he knows that his presence will bring back her sadness once again. Kalpi's smile fades away on seeing Sammy entering the party.. Sammy waves hi to her.. with courtesy she too replies but wonders who called him there... raghav's anger rises on seeing him but he controls it on seeing Pakhi coming out of the hall...

"Sammy sir.. M glad u came on my insistence... Kalpi bhabi... u forgot to invite him but see how sweet he is... just a phone call and he came here for me." Pakhi said while receiving Sammy with a smile.

Kalpi smiles back in reply and tell Sammy to enjoy the party. Raghav angrily storms inside. Pakhi and Sammy joins the party... Raghav was fuming afterwards while Kalpi was not feeling comfortable. The party ended on mixed emotions... The adults were either uncomfortable of guilt ridden while the younger like Pakhi and Ria were happy.

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Aftr the party finishes Kalpi storms in her room.. The hectic day has ended for her and now she wants to be back in her comfort zine... From Mrs. Singhania, she wanted to be Kalpana again. She decides to take shower as it would help her in washing out the memories of the day.. She switches on the music and starts the shower... As the water droplets were falling on her... She was felling the touch of Raghav was still fresh on her body and feeling dwelling inside her on his touch... She wants to end it with the drops of water. Song starts playing..

khoyi khoyi si hu mai
kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
dhundli sari khwab hai
ulja har khayal hai
sari kaliya murja gayi
rang unke yaado me beh gaye
sare gharande reet kelehre aayi,
lehro me beh gayi

She remembers her first fight with Raghav...It's 12 pm in night... She was waiting for Raghav to come for dinner... But Raghav came home all drunk.. She argues with him for being in such position but he justifies himself saying he had to drink for being the part of society which they have just entered. He was in a party and everyone was drinking how would he look without a glass in his hand. She was disgusted on the argument and cried but instead of asking sorry he just left the place. She too went to sleep without having the dinner... From then onwards Raghav used to skip dinner very often coz of some or the other business meetings.

raah me kal kitni chirag the
saamne kal phoolon ki baag the
iss se kahu kaun hai jo sune
kante hi kyu maine hai chune
sapne mere kyu hai kho gaye
jage hai kyu dil me gumm naye
sari kaliya murja gayi
rang unke yaado me beh gaye
saare gharande reet ke
lehrein aayi, lehron me beh gayi

She hears a noise from the bedroom and wonders whether Raghav came.. she remembers the time when they were new in this mansion.. Though the distance between them has increased but the love was still there... Raghav was taking bath and had forgotten the towel.. she went to give it to him when he pulled her inside... Raghav was only wearing a cloth on his body while Kalpi was in while negligee.. which had become almost transparent at the shoulder coz of water droplets that fell on it... Raghav pulls her closer to him and locks the door.. Kalpi was blushing badly and requesting Raghav to let her go as Ria might enter the room anytime but Raghav was in no mood to listen. He hugs Kalpi tightly and increases the pressure of the shower panel.. now water starts flowing from all the direction... Now Raghav can look at Kalpi's entire body without any difficulty.. kalpi hides herself in Raghav's broad chest. Raghav lifts her head and pressed his lips against her... They shared kiss passionately... he takes her to bath tub and takes out her clothes... She kissed him profusely and passionately on his wet body... He too was kissing her weak points to increase her passion... He starts playing with her breast and she lost the control... Finally they made love in the bathtub..

Another noise from the bedroom pulls her to the present... She wonders who it could be and asks loudly when a servant replied that she is taking some books for the sir.

kya kahu kyu ye dil udaas hai
ab koi door hai na paas hai
chhu le jo dil wo bate ab kaha
wo din kaha rate ab kaha
jo bita kal ab hai khawab saa
ab dil mera hai betab sa
sari kaliya murja gayi
rang unke yaado me beh gaye
sare gharande reet ke
lehre aayi, lehro me beh gayibeh gaye

Kalpi feels guilty on realizing that she still wants to feel Raghav around her... The past intimacy still affects he.. She is angry on herself for still remembering the moments she spent with Raghav... She wears her bath robe and comes out. She has understood that this flowing water is also not able to wash away the memories which were imprinted on her heart... She promises herself that she will be strong and won't forgive Raghav for the way he behaved with her.

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P.S. : Sorry for mistakes but i am sure by now u r used to it.

Love u all
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update dear..so raghav choose wrngs ways for business & this create a differeance between them.why raghav angry when sammy come..so when he see prem with kalpi how will be he react??? and kalpi is such good wife she still think about raghav's reputation in society.now want to no what will raghav do for win kalpi again and kalpi forgive him??
update soon...soon...soon dear...plz...😊
Edited by Aru18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
love will be always btwn ragna...but what took them far from each other...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update the way rag thank kalpi n thought of their live making lovely
I njy ur story thnk
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vish! I don't know, but this ff caught my attention becasue of its depth! You know, that strong bond between two lovers, yet there is this 'so called status' in life that keeps them apart! Still you haven't reveal to us why rags wants to divorce Kalpi! After all the support she has give him!! I know he loves his wife dearly and she him! I know from getting into business in order to get you have to give! It's a fact!! But I see the character you made kalpi to be is of standing for what one believe in and not having to change because of status in life!! She longs for him just as he her, and yet there is something so strong that keeps them apart!! What can it be?? Can one be so powerful and wrong at the same time?! Cause I'm seeing rags now, where he is the position he is in society is only becasue of Kalpi and he said so!! Now, how can he file for divorce from someone who made him whom he is today?! Then why the divorce? And now Sammy is in the picture!! What more you have for us?! I can't help but think that something happened with maya and rags!! Don't know if I'm reading too much into this but for me I feel there is so much you still need to reveal!! All the emotions are there, the support, the care, the need, the longing and yet this one thing is holding them back!! This is really deep vish!! I really love this ff!! It's gloomy also especially when you describe the house and it's contents! The distance is there, but they are still seeing the love for eachother!! It's truly amazing! Hats off to you!! I do intend to read your other ff!! In time I will but for now you have gottene undivided attention with this one!! Truly awesome!! In love with it!!
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear. I really liked when raghav appreciate kalpi & when she come to support him but why raghav become angry when he saw sammy.👍🏼

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