Balika Vadhu 16-10-14 written update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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KB / GH :-

A sees a man standing outside when she draws the curtains , A hopes that its not Palash . The man flashes the torch light on her face . A is afraid , she draws the curtain thus closes it.

Shiv comes there , A says Palash is standing near the tree outside ! Shiv goes out to check out but finds no one . Shiv comes and says there was no one . A says she's not lying .

Shiv says he believes her and it can possible that he ran away on seeing him as he's a coward . Shiv asks A how can she be scared of a man like Palash ? She faced tougher and more dangerous people in her life and she is much more stronger than she think .

Shiv comforts her and shows her outside that no one is there . A is in her bedroom alone doing some work . Palash calls her , A lifts it . Palash asks her why did you shut the window , A is stunned .

Palash says she looked beautiful when she stood near the window under the starry sky . He says he was intoxicated from far itself . A yells what nonsense he is speaking !? She warns him not to call her again .

She cuts it . Palash says what should i do for you ? He says anyhow i have your number . He calls her again . A reluctantly lifts again . She says hi , Palash says a hi wont work , you will have to be with me . A shouts what do you want !?

Palash says he wants her and on Diwali he will abduct her and Shiv wont be able to do anything . A cuts once again . Palash says Venus that why cant A understand that now she has to live with him as he will take her to Paris , so they spend their lives together .

A sees one more call , she lifts it and yells , its known that its a call from Baili . The lady asks what happened ? A says someone was just disturbing her by calling her repeatedly and asks what's the matter . A gets the required information .

Hospital :-

N is conscious , Gehna cries . DS and NJ are in room . DS asks how's he feeling now . N asks why he is in hospital ? Gehna says somehow he fell in the pond and NJ saved him risking his own life .

N remembers the incident with FBs shown . N thanks him and says who would've taken care of his mother if he lost his life ? Gehna says him nothing will happen to him , Devi maa will protect him .

DS says if N's father was alive today , then he would've done the same thing as NJ . Gehna cheers N that they will be back home soon and all are waiting for him .

BH :-

G shows J that she got a letter when MK cleaned the place . J reads the letter by NJ . It reads that he is thankful to them for the help they provided but now its time for him to go and he will always remember them and their warmth .

J says G that NJ was about to leave Jaitsar but he didn't leave . G says when DS kept the proposal of Gehna to NJ , he refused without giving any reason . J says not even 1 month is completed of NJ's job . How will he survive ? G suggests him to talk to NJ so his decision might change .

*Break*


Hospital :-

NJ says he will bring it from the shop , he goes out . He meets J , NJ says he's going to get apples for N as he wants them . J and NJ decide to go together . J apologizes to NJ and says that because of them he was forced to be in Jaitsar for some more time .

NJ tries avoiding it , he is about to say something . J says he didn't even thought of N who became so attached to him . NJ apologizes and says he didn't wanted to hurt Gehna and he is feeling uncomfortable from the day DS said about the proposal .

So that's he decided to leave them for Gehna's sake . J asks does he feel Gehna isn't fit to be his partner ? Or its something else ? NJ says its nothing like that and in these matters force never works .

J says what's the need to leave us ? Now N should be at rest and he would like to have you around . NJ agrees to stay but says he will leave after N becomes alright .

KB / GH :-

A is folding clothes , she thinks Palash is trying to scare her . Shiv is right , i will have to be strong and i should tackle this problem like the other ones i faced already . Her phone rings , she picks it up .

Its Palash who says Shiv isn't fit for him as he left her alone to attend the job . He doesn't value art and beauty . A shouts that he knows how to respect women and talk to them .

Palash callously says he loves it and calls A 'his A' . A says she doesn't care about his opinion . Palash says he will take her to Paris by abducting her .

A says even the greatest power cannot separate them . Its revealed that this all was A's imagination , the phone rings .

*Break*


KB :-

A runs downstairs , there's no one in house , A is scared . She drinks a glass of water with trembling hands . She sits on the couch , she hears multiple phones ringing , A closes her ears . She screams no !! and runs upstairs .

She reaches her room , Shiv touches her shoulder . A screams thinking that its Palash . But its Shiv , A hugs him and cries bitterly . Shiv asks her what happened ?

A says that Palash is troubling her by calling her repeatedly . A says she is becoming insane because of this and she cant be strong anymore ! She continues crying .

Shiv thinks that thank god i came here to take my cell which i forgot otherwise A would've made a bad state of herself by crying .Shiv consoles A and says nothing can happen to her due to Palash as no one has enough strength to hurt her .

VO :- A person behaves like vikshit when they get so much of junoon . They become a danger for everyone and they lose common sense .

Precap :-

Baili :-

A is informed of a new customer , A wonders about the customer and asks from where he is ?. Its Palash who says i was from Paris but my new location is your heart .

A is afraid , Palash is near her and says she should be ready to come as there are already 2 flight tickets booked on Diwali day .


Kind regards

Sumitra :-)

Edited by -Have.a.dream- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Sumi for the super fast update 🤗 Liked both the Ansh scenes today ⭐️ Dialogue writers are back with a bang 👍🏼 Shiv telling Anandi that you have faced morw dangerous people than Palash was a very true line 👍🏼

Kill Palash 😡 Poor Anandi is getting so scared 😭 Harsh chaya is doing a fab job and I can actually feel that he is Palash

Wonder what Anandi will do now 😕 And why didn't Anandi tell Shiv about Paris

Feel Palash already telling Anandi that he is taking her to Paris will lead to his downfall 😛 Painter track is getting interesting 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for update Sumi 😊

uff when we will get rid of this Niranjan 😡Cvs are using Jagya and Ganga to tell substandard story of Gehna Niranjan 🤢I think after Sanchi this is second story on whom all forum stands united this forced Gehna Niranjan track should end Why don't cvs end it and pack this Niranjan off 😵Kyun paka rahe ho yaar 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another maha maha irritating and maha maha boring episode .no proper revelant social msg bv cvs showing now days
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the quick update Sumi 😊
Missed the initial part 😭 Shiv's dialogues seem to be good ⭐️
So true, Anandi has tackled more dangerous people before. But at this moment, the thought of separation from Shiv is making her weak
Precap 😡 Palash doesn't seem to leave even a single chance.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@sumi thanx 4 the update!! i skipped again almost whole epi. watched only JaGan part & J wid NJ part.
btw why A is picking up the phone wen she knew that palash is calling?? or is he calling from difft nos. that she thot sum1else is calling??
i mean wen she knew that pvt no. is of palash's then why she again picked up the phone??landline we can understand but on mobile??😕
but on the whole its 2 irriataing 2 watch both the tracks going on in KB & BH.
CVs plz spare us from these tortures.
pre-cap again yawnworthy & tacky.🥱
Edited by tiny15 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the update 😊
Harsha Chaya and Toral seem to have competed to bring out their best ⭐️ they are truly living their roles!!

Ansh scene - loved the way Shiv was trying to address Anandi's fears!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for update.
Did not know that there are some phones which show "private number" as caller. All the phones I used just show the name if the caller is from my phone book and only number if it is from some unknown number.

What social message in the track? It is time to finish this and show a meaningful track - and if they want remarriage of Gahana - better do it quickly instead of showing details how Gahna and Niranjan will be convinced. We have seen enough marriages in this serial.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Sumi for the superfast update. You're truly fast 😊
Loved the KB part. Both the AnSh scenes were mindblowing. The CVs are doing a fabulous job in depicting the intense emotional bond that AnSh share 😳
Shiv trying to comfort Anandi like a small scared kid was a treat to watch.😳

Toral was outstanding today as well as Harsh ⭐️
AnSh scenes come out so beautifully because ToSid are living their respective characters.
Kodos to them!!!!⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you
Why don't Creatives show us some Jagya Ganga scenes with their kids , their family life After many days they were in one frame without Dadisaa and Niranjan Gehna Nandu forced there but they were talking about stupid Niranjan. Niranjan Dadisaa Niranjan Dadisaa Fed up of these two 😡BV is so irritating these days Don't feel like watching

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