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Posted: 18 years ago
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ASHU WAHA PER AATA HAI WITH TEAM AUR SUYESH MEHRA KO SAVE KARTA HAI PARVATI WAHA SE CHALI JATI HAI SUYESH WANT 2 STOP HER BUT NARANI DEVI SAYS US KO JANE DO ASHU SUYESH SE MAFI MAGTA HAI PARVATI WALKS ON ROAD AND REMEMBER KAY MAIN NAY SUYESH KO KIA KIA KAHA AT GARAWEL HOUSE EVERY ONE WORRIED 4 PARVATI SUYESH NAD ASHU COME RAJESWARI ASK TO SUYESH DARLING😔 KIA HOYA TUM KO HE SAY NOTHING AACIDENT HIYA THA ASHU WAHA SE CHALA JATA HAI RAJESWARI ASHU SE KAHTI HAI KAISA HO BETA HE SAY IAM NOT YOUR SON IAM SON OF ONLY PARVATI MAA SHE SAY MAIN NAY TUM KO JAANEM DEYA HAI HE SAY IS HEE BAAT KA PAIN HAI MUJHAY AND HE LEFT RAJESWARI APNE MAAN MEIN KAHTI HAI MAIN TUM KO CHORO GEE NAHI TUM NAY MUJHAY SE MERA BETA DORE KIYA HAI NA MAIN TUM SE TUMHRA PARVIAAR DOR KAR DO GEE NARANI DEVI PARVATI KAY PASS AATI HAI AUR KAHTI HAI MAIN JANTI HO TUM MUJHAY SE NARAZ HO PER MAIN KIA KARTI MAIN NAY SUYESH SE WADA KIYA THA AND THEY HUG RAJESWARI SAB KO 48 HOURS MEIN GHAR SE JANE KO KAHTI HAI ALL R WORRIED TANU PARVATI SE MISS BEHAVE KARTI HAI BUT MALISKA US KO WAHA SE JANE KAY LIYE KAHTI HAI SHE TAKE PARVATI SIDE RAJESWARI PARVATI KAY KAHNE MEIN KUCH MILTI HAI GHAR MEIN POOJA HOTI HAI PARVATI AATI HAI AUR SAAS KAHTI HAI BETA TUM KUCH KAHA LO SHE SAY NO WOH KATI HAIN BETA POOJA KA PERST KAHA LO RAJESWARI SUYESH SE KHATI HAI YEH PARVATI KA LAST KHANA HAI MALISHAKA NAY IS MEIN POISON MIL DEYA HAI MAILSHKA PARVATI KAY LIYE KAHNA LATI HAI SUYESH DIL MEIN KAHTA HAI MAT KAHYA PARVATI JEE PLZZ AND PARVATI SPOON UTI HAI EPISODE END

THIS IS MY FIRST UPDATE TELL ME KIASE HAI IF U LIKE THAN ITS MY DUTY TO GIVE U UPDATES😊

~Viewbie's Note: Please don't post in All CAPS as it's considered shouting on the net. Thanks....~

Edited by natasshafan - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Thanx 4 the update 😊 but couldn't understand properly šŸ˜•
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can u give the updates in english plzzz?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 4 the update šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Sara for the update..... Just a suggestion.... Put them in small letters and please divide the scenes properly....... Had a little problem understanding šŸ˜› But you are doing a great job...... šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx for the update 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
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can u please give the updates in english please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks it's very nice update šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Please do not post in all caps - it indicates shouting on the net.

Secondly, if you are going to post an update, please ensure that the readers can clearly understand it - this may mean writing in English and separating the update into the scenes, so that it is clearer.

Hope you understand šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx for the update but just for the heads up put scenes in a different paragraph šŸ˜†

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