My story of NBTNMKK- chapter7 filler update pg 5 24th jan

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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys i am writing my part of Na Bole Tum Na Maine Kuch Kaha and if possible I would also like to turn the same into the book. it was my long time wish to write a book on the very unique show na bole tum na maine kuch kaha and so i decided to first try it on the forum and then if possible go to some publishers and try out my luck. 😃
so here i post the first chapter. If you like the same story written by me i will post the rest of the parts or else i will forget the idea of writing the book. 😭

So here it goes- 😊

This is a story of Mohan and Megha. It is a type of usual love story with unusual twists. A story of two equally strong individuals who are very different yet the same by heart. Let's see whether Mohan accepts Megha as she is or will there be lots of twists and turns in their usual story in the unusual way.

Chapter-1

Megha- a girl of mind but works with heart is a mother of two very cute kids Navika and Aditya aged 8 and 5 respectively. Both who are well mannered very cute children. Problems seem to never leave them alone but optimism is their best shield. Firstly the cute little kids had to go through the trauma of losing their father at a very young age. Two years ago everything the world doomed for them when they got to know about their father and husband's death. Megha could not fall down and could not end the world because her kids awaited her. She still had a reason to live; she had to live for her kids. Whereas her kids, they thought they had become mature enough to share their mother's sorrow and so they had to live happily for her. But problems did not end here there were many more to come. She went back to Indore to live with her husband's family consisting of his elder brother, his wife, his son, her husband Amar's parents and Amar's bua who was sweetly called gigi bua. The society never left a chance to call Megha a widow, a curse, a bad omen. But her family was her best support. Seeing them she never tried to break and gigi bua was the best of all. She had such positivity which had the zeal to conquer the hearts of everyone in the family and keep them happy. Financial crisis was very common in their family due to which 67 year old Amar's father had to work. Then the society once again was blessed on them who never left a chance to tell them spick and span about their dead son and his deeds.

One fine night when the trio that is Megha, Navika and Aditya were in their room, Aditya also called by his pet name Addu was remembering his father. Megha and Nanhi saw this and decided to cheer him up because it was his birthday the next day. They knew that tickling could be the only medicine at this time so they tickled him up and soon the trio was having a hearty laugh but in their hearts all three of them knew that none of them as happy. The next morning they went to visit the very famous Khajrana temple of Indore to get blessings for addu. The trio and gigi bua went there. Though the temple priest was again after them telling them all sorts of things, they happily took the blessings. Navika had a belief that if she tied a knot in a hanky and wished something, the wish would always come true and many times this belief of hers had come true. The little girl of 8 wished something which maybe someone very mature would wish. All she wanted was to make her mother laugh and smile once again as she used to with Amar. She wished for someone to come in her mother's life who could make her smile again, who could make her happy, and who could make her the old Megha Vyas. This was what she asked for in front of Ganpatiji and tied the knot.




P.S - your comments are very important for me because i m telling you that i am thinking of converting it into a book so please comment guys and give me your true views. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice...You should carry on 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks i surely will now 😃
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here is the second one :D


Chapter-2

On the other hand someone came running; a person who ran with open shoe laces, who ran not from others but he was running behind someone from all the gullies of Indore. And the someone whom he was running behind was a girl. She entered Khajrana temple screaming onto the top of her voice for help. When all were too shocked to react there came Mrs. Vyas like a hero and stood on the temple door stretching both her hands in front of the person who was running behind a girl. The person was none other than Mohan Bhatnagar the famous crime reporter Mohan Bhatnagar. As we move on ahead you will surely understand his nature. Now from here starts the real story Na Bole Tum Na Maine Kuch Kaha. Mohan who was running behind his lead Koel for his news was shocked to see someone interfering in his work and that too someone whom he did not know and whom he had no relation with. On the other hand Megha was filled with anger because she could never see something wrong happening with a girl whether she was connected to her in some way or not. Both were not wrong with their perceptions but out of shock both of them started to argue with each other. The headstrong individuals kept on arguing until gigi bua came there to stop their fight which was being witnessed by all the people who came to visit the temple. Gigi bua's first reaction on seeing mohan was that she as so beautiful so why couldn't all the handsome boys come to her. *Rofl* right. J A cute little smile was passed between both of them and then the fight subsided with Mohan losing his very precious lead. All went to their homes. On the other hand Mohan's wife Guru as we all say called him up and instructed him to come back home right now and help him in shifting things in their new home. Mohan reached home and firstly scolded Guru for troubling him up. Oh sorry I forgot to tell about Guru. Guru is a very sweet and subtle person though he works for Mohan but is like a brother to Mohan, his only support, his best friend and the most important he also acted as a wife to Mohan. All the things were arranged in the new home rented by Mohan and Guru which was situated in Juna Mohalla.

Juna Mohalla can be known as a place of love, fun, fights and every sort of thing which can keep someone entertained while sitting at home. Then there was Renu, Sanjay's wife (elder brother of Amar) who can also be called the joker of the Mohalla. She loved to spied on everyone's homes and the first thing she did after coming to know that there were new neighbors home, she went out to spy on them. The common Indian idea to visit someone's home that is the sugar or wheat trick was used by her. She went to Mohan's home saying that she wanted some sugar. Entering the house she looked around and saw no one except Mohan. Her instant question was "where is your wife? Can I meet her please?" Mohan as his usual Mohan answered her back "no actually the tempo traveler driver took her away". Oh my god and you did let her go but why, came her instant reply. Actually I did not have money to give to the driver so he asked for my wife and so I told him that he could take her away, said Mohan. Hearing this Renu freaked out and ran away from his home. Mohan had this such big victorious smile on his face, as a child gets when he is able to get a chocolate out from his mother's hands.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really Good ...very well written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its very nice 👏
Carry on... 👍🏼 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏👏👏
Gud one... I cud actually imagine every thing Nani, Khajrana temple, indore... N our kunaksha...
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pls keep commenting guys. here u go with the next one-

Chapter - 3

That night Nanhi asks Megha that why did the priest in temple say that Addu should not be like their father. Megha says that she should have faith on their father and she wants both of them to become honest like their father. When the children slept, Megha felt like crying but could not because she knew that she had to stop because of her children. Just then she saw Mohan standing outside her window.

Next morning Nanhi is seen doing her homework whereas Gigi bua and Renu are watching some serial and emoting themselves according to the scenes going on. Just then she sees that a guy was telling a widow to start a new life, lead a good life and a life full of happiness, forgetting her past. The widow fought against him asking him that who would accept a widow? Just then he said that he will accept her as his wife. Seeing this Nanhi was excited thinking about her knot in the hanky and her dear mother.

Just then Renu's son Tanu is seen on the other side who falls down from the only bike present at their home. Seeing this Sanjay got furious and started scolding Tanu but Renu stops him and takes Tanu away. Just then Nanhi sees that her school shoes have been spoilt by Tanu and she informs Megha about this. Nanhi then goes to school wearing other shoes.

Megha after sometime was buying tomatoes and they fall down. While picking them up she finds out Prerna her school best friend. They bioth talk to each other and tell each other about their respective lives. Just then Megha gets a call from Nanhi's school and she goes there. On reaching the school she finds that Nanhi's plaits are all opened up and two other girls with their parents are standing there. Nanhi says that those girls were speaking very ill of her father so she hit them up. Then the other girl exclaimed that her father told him that Nanhi's father was not a good man. Hearing this Megha and Nanhi are shocked and sad. Then the principal tells them that if this is repeated by Nanhi then she will be suspended from the school.

They move away from the school. While coming back home Mohan and Megha witness each other and start fighting again. They reach back home and Megha informs all about happenings in Nanhi's school. Gigi bua is very happy and calls her very brave. Amar's dad then tells them about the notice from the court which states that Megha and him need to go to the court for the case hearing. They are worried but everyone consoles them.

Next morning Mohan came out of his house to go to his office with a piece of bread stuffed in his mouth. On the other hand Mr. Vyas and Megha were going for the hearing. Just then Mohan almost had hit Megha with his bike but he stopped at the right time. Megha tells her father-in-law that Mohan is like a black cat infact he is worse than a black cat.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼 good going 👏
har ek scene mere aankhon ke saamne aa raha tha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You going good visualising things if you can concentrait on diliaougs it would be awesome cause diliaouge was the soul of #NaBoleTum

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