Aashiqui- their immortal love FF *Discontinued*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello evry1😉
I m Sanu

I have come wid dis crap of mine. It is the first time I m writing something on this forum. So plz bear this shit of mine
This is my dream story.It was a dream of mine on sum other character when I was in 7th standard and I finally penned it down and I m posting it today here
PLZ DO COMMENT😊






It was a calm and soothing morning. But not everything was calm. It was a silence after a tornado
Sanyukta woke up as the sunrays fell over her face. Her eyes were puffed because of lack of sleep and constant crying.
Anyways she got ready to attend the lectures. She was not the same sanyukta, the lively,chirpy and bubbly Sanyukta. She was growing paler with each passing day.
She got to the class. It was PKC's lectures. She cared not a bit what he was blabbering. She wanted to cast a glance backwards, but she had to be strong, she had to keep her firm
Par dil ne dhokha de hi diya. She lokked back only to find his seat empty.
HE WAS NOT PRESENT
RANDHIR WAS ABSENT
Waise toh he didnot care about PKC's boring classes, but still attended them.
"Sanyukta Aggarwal" came PKC's voice that startled her.
"Y..Yess Sir"she said
"What are you glancing at for so long?? expecting someone??" PKC questioned her
YOYO-"O ji Sir jee maya maam ko khoj rahi thi ' AAPKE LIYE'"🤣
Pkc blushed 😳but maintaining a stern face he said
"Leave the class right now Sanyukta"
She was not in the mood to attend the classes or to argue with PKC. So she quietly took her bag and left the classroom in haste.
It was hard,hard to hold back her tears to hide her vulnerability.
Unable to hold back her tears she rushed towards the terrace
"THE TERRACE"
the only place where she could get some solitude and seclusion. She hurried her steps towards the terrace. As she neared she could hear sounds of sobbing. She was flabbergasted at the rare sight in front of her
'RANDHIR' was crying like hell.There were many spare broken pieces of machines scattered here and there. It looked as if he had broken all the pieces in frustration.
How she wanted to go to him and engulf him in a tight hug . But again she had to be strong.
She quickly moved away from the door and rushed towards her room. She quickly bolted the door and threw herself on the bed crying

"Why me??"
"Why me ?" she screamed

Precap :
Randhir : "I Love You Sanyukta"


There ends the first chapter
Plz ignore the mistakes. After all pehla fic hai

Buddy me for pm😊😆

Updates will not be too frequent. Sorry😊

Love❤️
Sanu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
unres

Oh god I am first...!!
Yepii...!! Happy dance...!!
Tarara Tarara...!
Okay I am done..!! Haha
Coming to update

It was lovely...!
But emotional..!!
Precap is very interesting...!!
Loved it to the core...! Update ASAP
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi


And if possible pm me next time 😛
Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Part 1: Upar tha🤣
Part 2: Page 3
Part 3: ">Pg 5
Part 4: pg 7
Part 5 : Pg 9
Part 6 : pg 10
Part 7 A : pg 11
Part 7 B : Pg 13
Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res..:)

Un-res...😉

First of all,
I LOVED THE TITLE A LOT 😃
my fav. bollywood movie is Aashiqui 2 that's why i loved the title...
and the prologue seems interesting 👍🏼
would really love to read more, keep it up 👏
Thanks for the PM...
and don't forget to send me PMs for further updates okay? 😆😉

Loads of love
Anu ⭐️


P.s. In which standard are u? 😆
u mentioned that this was ur dream fic back in 7th standard...so do tell me your real age..
actually every one in this forum are really elder than me...so i'm finding someone around of my age...Btw i'm in 10th :P
Sorry for this crap! but do tell me ur age 😆😆
Edited by Honey-FLAB - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

Res..:)

Un-res...😉

First of all,
I LOVED THE TITLE A LOT 😃
my fav. bollywood movie is Aashiqui 2 that's why i loved the title...
and the prologue seems interesting 👍🏼
would really love to read more, keep it up 👏
Thanks for the PM...
and don't forget to send me PMs for further updates okay? 😆😉

Loads of love
Anu ⭐️


P.s. In which standard are u? 😆
u mentioned that this was ur dream fic back in 7th standard...so do tell me your real age..
actually every one in this forum are really elder than me...so i'm finding someone around of my age...Btw i'm in 10th :P
Sorry for this crap! but do tell me ur age 😆😆


I m also in 10th
3 saal tak I remembered this dreamy thing and then I wrote it aur phir yahaan post kar diya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshinicool


I m also in 10th
3 saal tak I remembered this dreamy thing and then I wrote it aur phir yahaan post kar diya



OMGEE...
finally i found someone of my age! 😳😆
btw, lets get scrapping? if ur ok with it? just to become friends? 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wah re sanu mast starting hai jaldi update kr me kant wait further..!🤣

Yoyo ka dialogue mast tha🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was nyc would luv to read it yr updte soon wtng n plz pm me keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Paravi

Res
unres

Oh god I am first...!!
Yepii...!! Happy dance...!!
Tarara Tarara...!
Okay I am done..!! Haha
Coming to update

It was lovely...!
But emotional..!!
Precap is very interesting...!!
Loved it to the core...! Update ASAP
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi


And if possible pm me next time 😛


Congo dude
I have PMed you
Yaa ho skta hai bhool gai🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waise I'd like to tell story ek tragedy types hai
Kabhie bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai

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