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Hello loveliesss... 😊 Really I am being so addicted... And its because of you guys... 😛 Your precious comments are encouraging me to write more and more... Thank you so much... 😊 So again I came with an OS... 😉
Today I was listening a bengali song from where I got this idea and wrote on it...
The title only indicates its end... But still please do read... 😆
NOTE : There are some past and present scenes.. Past scenes were wrote in RED and present were in BLUE... I hope it will not confuse you...
So enjoy!!!!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Pune, 10PM
"No... I can't marry anyone..." Madhu yelled on her mother and ran out from their house... She was sitting near the sea beach when she felt a touch on her shoulder... She looked up and found her elder sister Trishna was standing behind her...
"Don't try to convince me..." She said while turning her face in front... Trishna sat next to her...
"No... I am not... But Madhu what happen??? I am noticing you... You behaved so weird till you came back from Mumbai... Is everthing okay???" She asked her worriedly..
"Yes everything is fine... Didu please leave me alone for sometime..." She said looking at the sea... Trishna looked at her for sometime and then got up to leave when Madhu caught her hand and said "Didu I want to go Mumbai..." She looked at her shocked and again sat next to her...
"Madhu will you please explain... What happen???" She asked again...
"Didu I love him... I can't live without him... I.. I want to go back to him..." Tears escaped from her eyes...
"Who?? Who is he Madhu..." She asked her sarcastically...
"Rishabh... I love him didu... I met with him in MUmbai..." She said...
"But how will you find him in Mumbai?? Do you have his address??" Trishna asked her..
"Yeah... I want to go didu for his search..." She was sobbing badly so Trishna hugged her tightly "Okay!! I will talk with maa..."
Mumbai, 11:00PM
RK and his friends were sitting in sea side... RK gulped the drink in one go... "Rishabh stop it yaar!!" One of his friend stopped him from drinking... But he didn't stop...
"If you really want her back then go and get her back... Why are hurting yourself hun??" His friend asked him when he looked at them and said "Get her back?? Arey I don't know anything about her... I don't know she love me or not... Even I don't know her name..."
"So what!! At least you go and tell about your feelings who knows she has the same feeling for you..." His friends trying to convince him and finally he agreed for it...
Pune Bus Stop, 10AM
"Madhu take care of yourself and call me when you reach... I called your Maasi you will stay there..." Padmini said her everything...
"Okay.. Mother India... Don't worry now..." She bid a bye to them and bus left from there... Madhu settled herself on her sit and closed her eyes in relief...
The bus stopped at Mumbai bus stop... Madhu was very much afraid... She never go anywhere alone... She got down from the bus and looked all around, it was huge crowd there... "I have to call Maasi..." She thought and went to the phonebooth...
"Hello Maasi..."
"Yeah Madhu... Did you reach??" She got answer from opposite...
"Yeah... But where are you..." She asked worriedly...
"Woh Madhu... I can't come beta... Some guests suddenly arrived so I have to attend them... Okay you take a cab and ask the driver to drop you at XYZ place..." Her maasi sadly said...
"Okay maasi..." She hang up the call and came out from booth... She was looking for a cab "Taxi..." But the taxi didn't stop suddenly she heard someone whistling... She turned and found some boys were noticing her... She got so scared so she started walking and the boys followed her... Slowly she speeding up her walking speed and the boys did "Oh girl... Why are you getting panic.. We will help you... Come..." The boys started teasing... Madhu was almost running while looking behind when she hit with someone "Hey.." She heard his voice and without looking at him she buried her face on his chest and clutched his shirt tightly "Please save me..." The man could feel her fear so he looked at the boys angrily and the boys left...
"They have gone..." His husky voice brought her back and she pushed herself back and looked at him... She felt so awkward that she hugged some unknown guy...
"I.. I am..." Her voice was trembling...
"Relax..." He said... Madhu felt that he was a nice guy... He can help her... Before she ask anything when he asked "Are you new here??" She nodded yes in reply...
"Anyway.. Hi.. I am Rishabh and you??" He introduced himself and forwarded his hand...
"I am not going to tell my name to any unknown person..." She turned her face...
"As you wish.. When you feel say then.." He replied smilingly when she smiled back..
"Will you please help me... Actually due to some urgent work my maasi couldn't come to receive me..." She helplessly asked him for help...
"Hey dude... Come we are getting late..." His friends called him... He once looked at her and said "You wait here... Don't go anywhere..." And he went to his friend and after sometime he came back to her "Let's go... I will drop you at your place..."
They were walking on road... "Thank you for helping me..." She said to him..
"No... Its okay.." She smiled at him...
"Where are we going??" She asked him as they were walking from last 15mins...
"Going to railway station..." He replied...
"But why??? By maasi informed me we can go by cab..." He glared at her once and "Look... I don't have so much time... I missed my interview for you so now you will do which I will tell you... And if you okay with it then come... Otherwise you can go on your way..." She gulped as she remembered what happen just few minute before.. So she helplessly said "Okay..." And started walking when her feet stumbled and she about to fall when he caught to by her waist... She closed her eyes due to fear...
Madhu opened her eyes and smiled remebering her first meeting with her Rishabh... "I am coming Rishabh..." She thought...
Mumbai to Pune Bus, 11AM
RK was looking outside from window... Then he turned at his opposite side where a newly married couple were sitting hand in hand... He smiled seeing them...
At Mumbai station...
"Get in fast..." He shouted as the train already started and Madhu didn't ride on it still... She was running... "Hold my hand damn it!!" She tried to hold her hand... But she couldn't so he got down from train... "Can't you hold my hand..." He asked furiously...
"How can I?? The train was running fast..." She sighed... He gave her whatever look and said "Now wait for the next train..."
After sometime the next train arrived and they climbed... It was huge crowd inside... But he had protect her... They reached at their station...
RK jerked when the bus stopped at somewhere... He smiled remembering past days... "Bhaiya please take this doll..." A kid was buying some showpieces...
"Hey stop stop..." Madhu shouted when he turned at her and found her standing near a shop...
"What happen..."
"Look.. So nice showpiece no!!" She was looking at the showpieces... "Bhaiya how much it is???" She bought it...
RK smiled and bought two dolls from the kid and gave him some money...
Pune to Mumbai Bus,
The bus was stopped at a place... The passengers were having their lunches... Madhu ordered food for herself....
"Hey girl... Lets go... We are travelling from morning... I am hungry now... I can't walk anymore..." He said while rubbing his empty stomach...
"But I don't have so much money..." She replied...
"Its okay!! I am here... Lets go..." He dragged her in a restuarant...
"Here everything are so expensive... Lets go somewhere..." She said while checking the menu card...
"You just order what you like to eat..." He said...
After 30minute the bus's passengers started climbing... And left the places... The driver from Mumbai to Pune bus was drunk so he was driving the bus little harshly... "Arey what are you doing..." The passengers shouted...
Mumbai to Pune Bus,
Suddenly RK was feeling so restless... So he just lit up his cigaratte...
They were walking on road when he stopped near a shop "One cigaratte please..."
"Cigarrate is injurious for health..." Madhu politely said when he smiled and threw it...
Finally they reached at the place where Madhu's maasi said...
"Now where??" He asked...
"I don't know..." She replied...
"What do you mean by you don't know... Call her and ask her..." He offered his phone...
"Hello maasi... I reached where you said..." She informed... When her maasi informed how to reach her home... But Madhu didn't get it so she blankly looked at RK...
"Maasi I didn't get you... You talk with him, he helped me to reach here..." And she handover the phone to him... After hanging up the phone he said "Let's go.." She smiled...
Finally they reached at Madhu's Masi's place...
"Thanks for everything.. You really helped me... Please come inside..." She offered him...
"No... I have to go... May be next time..." He said...
"Okay... Take my address... If you go to Pune please visit our place..."
"Yeah... Sure... And this is my address..." They exchange the address... Both were sad as they knew they will never meet again... Madhu bid a bye and started walking towards her home when RK lit up a smoke and she turned at him and said "Cigaratte is..."
"Injurious for health..." He completed and threw it and smiled...
"Take care... And yeah from next time don't miss any interview for someone's help..." She said sadly and bid a bye...
RK threw the smoke from the bus's window... They both travelled a long journey... Both their busses coming from opposite side... Suddenly a car overtake Madhu's bus... Some college friends were enjoying and a girl from them threw a scarf on air and it landed on the mirror of Madhu's bus... The driver was already drunk and lost his balance... And the buses collide head-on, creating a devastating accident... People from all around came for aid... Soon the ambulances reached... RK ended up with severe head injury... The rescue people forced him to go hospital but he refused and helped the people, still he was feeling dizzy but didn't care... He then went in Madhu's bus where he found her injured, her head was bleeding badly...
"Hey... Wake up... Look I am Rishabh.. Listen..." But she was unconsious... He immediately took her in his arm and left in an ambulance... After admitting her he fainted...
RK gained his consious... He was lying on bed... The oxygen musk was on his mouth... But he only remembered about his love... So he removed his oxygen musk and tried to wake up when nurse said "What... What are you doing??"
"Where.. Where is she... I want to meet her..." He was taking deep breaths...
"Doctor!! Doctor..." The nurse shouted as she couldn't control him... Soon the doctor came...
"Doctor where is she?? I admitted her... I want to see her..." He pleaded..
"You please take rest..." Doctor said...
"No doctor please..." He pleaded... He was taking deep breath...
Soon the doctor shifted his bed next to Madhu... She was lying, the mechines were connected with her body... The oxygen musk was on her mouth too... The doctors were checking her pulses each and every time...
"Hey..Girl.. Open.. Open your eyes..." RK said still fighting with himself... Madhu slowly opened her eyes and turned at his side and smiled...
"Remember I am Rishabh..."
"Madhu!!! Madhubala..." She uttered her name...
"Madhu!!! I... I... I want to tell you something... I.. Love you... Madhuuu..." He was struggling but still tried his best to confess... She smiled...
"Do... Do you love me..." Suddenly her breathing speed became faster and same as RK's... "Madhuuu!!!" She looked at RK...
"Love me??"
"I... I... I love you... Rishabh..." She smiled...
"I... Love... You... Too... Madhu..." They entangled their fingures and closed their eyes...
"Doctor!!!" The nurse shouted...
Rishabh and Madhu were walking hand in hand smilingly... That indicating the two souls were in so much love... With this Rishabh and Madhu's "journey" will continue to the "eternity"...
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Now leave your comments...😛
Thank you in advance..😊
Today I was listening a bengali song from where I got this idea and wrote on it...
The title only indicates its end... But still please do read... 😆
NOTE : There are some past and present scenes.. Past scenes were wrote in RED and present were in BLUE... I hope it will not confuse you...
So enjoy!!!!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Journey - Till the Eternity
Pune, 10PM
"No... I can't marry anyone..." Madhu yelled on her mother and ran out from their house... She was sitting near the sea beach when she felt a touch on her shoulder... She looked up and found her elder sister Trishna was standing behind her...
"Don't try to convince me..." She said while turning her face in front... Trishna sat next to her...
"No... I am not... But Madhu what happen??? I am noticing you... You behaved so weird till you came back from Mumbai... Is everthing okay???" She asked her worriedly..
"Yes everything is fine... Didu please leave me alone for sometime..." She said looking at the sea... Trishna looked at her for sometime and then got up to leave when Madhu caught her hand and said "Didu I want to go Mumbai..." She looked at her shocked and again sat next to her...
"Madhu will you please explain... What happen???" She asked again...
"Didu I love him... I can't live without him... I.. I want to go back to him..." Tears escaped from her eyes...
"Who?? Who is he Madhu..." She asked her sarcastically...
"Rishabh... I love him didu... I met with him in MUmbai..." She said...
"But how will you find him in Mumbai?? Do you have his address??" Trishna asked her..
"Yeah... I want to go didu for his search..." She was sobbing badly so Trishna hugged her tightly "Okay!! I will talk with maa..."
Mumbai, 11:00PM
RK and his friends were sitting in sea side... RK gulped the drink in one go... "Rishabh stop it yaar!!" One of his friend stopped him from drinking... But he didn't stop...
"If you really want her back then go and get her back... Why are hurting yourself hun??" His friend asked him when he looked at them and said "Get her back?? Arey I don't know anything about her... I don't know she love me or not... Even I don't know her name..."
"So what!! At least you go and tell about your feelings who knows she has the same feeling for you..." His friends trying to convince him and finally he agreed for it...
Pune Bus Stop, 10AM
"Madhu take care of yourself and call me when you reach... I called your Maasi you will stay there..." Padmini said her everything...
"Okay.. Mother India... Don't worry now..." She bid a bye to them and bus left from there... Madhu settled herself on her sit and closed her eyes in relief...
The bus stopped at Mumbai bus stop... Madhu was very much afraid... She never go anywhere alone... She got down from the bus and looked all around, it was huge crowd there... "I have to call Maasi..." She thought and went to the phonebooth...
"Hello Maasi..."
"Yeah Madhu... Did you reach??" She got answer from opposite...
"Yeah... But where are you..." She asked worriedly...
"Woh Madhu... I can't come beta... Some guests suddenly arrived so I have to attend them... Okay you take a cab and ask the driver to drop you at XYZ place..." Her maasi sadly said...
"Okay maasi..." She hang up the call and came out from booth... She was looking for a cab "Taxi..." But the taxi didn't stop suddenly she heard someone whistling... She turned and found some boys were noticing her... She got so scared so she started walking and the boys followed her... Slowly she speeding up her walking speed and the boys did "Oh girl... Why are you getting panic.. We will help you... Come..." The boys started teasing... Madhu was almost running while looking behind when she hit with someone "Hey.." She heard his voice and without looking at him she buried her face on his chest and clutched his shirt tightly "Please save me..." The man could feel her fear so he looked at the boys angrily and the boys left...
"They have gone..." His husky voice brought her back and she pushed herself back and looked at him... She felt so awkward that she hugged some unknown guy...
"I.. I am..." Her voice was trembling...
"Relax..." He said... Madhu felt that he was a nice guy... He can help her... Before she ask anything when he asked "Are you new here??" She nodded yes in reply...
"Anyway.. Hi.. I am Rishabh and you??" He introduced himself and forwarded his hand...
"I am not going to tell my name to any unknown person..." She turned her face...
"As you wish.. When you feel say then.." He replied smilingly when she smiled back..
"Will you please help me... Actually due to some urgent work my maasi couldn't come to receive me..." She helplessly asked him for help...
"Hey dude... Come we are getting late..." His friends called him... He once looked at her and said "You wait here... Don't go anywhere..." And he went to his friend and after sometime he came back to her "Let's go... I will drop you at your place..."
They were walking on road... "Thank you for helping me..." She said to him..
"No... Its okay.." She smiled at him...
"Where are we going??" She asked him as they were walking from last 15mins...
"Going to railway station..." He replied...
"But why??? By maasi informed me we can go by cab..." He glared at her once and "Look... I don't have so much time... I missed my interview for you so now you will do which I will tell you... And if you okay with it then come... Otherwise you can go on your way..." She gulped as she remembered what happen just few minute before.. So she helplessly said "Okay..." And started walking when her feet stumbled and she about to fall when he caught to by her waist... She closed her eyes due to fear...
Madhu opened her eyes and smiled remebering her first meeting with her Rishabh... "I am coming Rishabh..." She thought...
Mumbai to Pune Bus, 11AM
RK was looking outside from window... Then he turned at his opposite side where a newly married couple were sitting hand in hand... He smiled seeing them...
At Mumbai station...
"Get in fast..." He shouted as the train already started and Madhu didn't ride on it still... She was running... "Hold my hand damn it!!" She tried to hold her hand... But she couldn't so he got down from train... "Can't you hold my hand..." He asked furiously...
"How can I?? The train was running fast..." She sighed... He gave her whatever look and said "Now wait for the next train..."
After sometime the next train arrived and they climbed... It was huge crowd inside... But he had protect her... They reached at their station...
RK jerked when the bus stopped at somewhere... He smiled remembering past days... "Bhaiya please take this doll..." A kid was buying some showpieces...
"Hey stop stop..." Madhu shouted when he turned at her and found her standing near a shop...
"What happen..."
"Look.. So nice showpiece no!!" She was looking at the showpieces... "Bhaiya how much it is???" She bought it...
RK smiled and bought two dolls from the kid and gave him some money...
Pune to Mumbai Bus,
The bus was stopped at a place... The passengers were having their lunches... Madhu ordered food for herself....
"Hey girl... Lets go... We are travelling from morning... I am hungry now... I can't walk anymore..." He said while rubbing his empty stomach...
"But I don't have so much money..." She replied...
"Its okay!! I am here... Lets go..." He dragged her in a restuarant...
"Here everything are so expensive... Lets go somewhere..." She said while checking the menu card...
"You just order what you like to eat..." He said...
After 30minute the bus's passengers started climbing... And left the places... The driver from Mumbai to Pune bus was drunk so he was driving the bus little harshly... "Arey what are you doing..." The passengers shouted...
Mumbai to Pune Bus,
Suddenly RK was feeling so restless... So he just lit up his cigaratte...
They were walking on road when he stopped near a shop "One cigaratte please..."
"Cigarrate is injurious for health..." Madhu politely said when he smiled and threw it...
Finally they reached at the place where Madhu's maasi said...
"Now where??" He asked...
"I don't know..." She replied...
"What do you mean by you don't know... Call her and ask her..." He offered his phone...
"Hello maasi... I reached where you said..." She informed... When her maasi informed how to reach her home... But Madhu didn't get it so she blankly looked at RK...
"Maasi I didn't get you... You talk with him, he helped me to reach here..." And she handover the phone to him... After hanging up the phone he said "Let's go.." She smiled...
Finally they reached at Madhu's Masi's place...
"Thanks for everything.. You really helped me... Please come inside..." She offered him...
"No... I have to go... May be next time..." He said...
"Okay... Take my address... If you go to Pune please visit our place..."
"Yeah... Sure... And this is my address..." They exchange the address... Both were sad as they knew they will never meet again... Madhu bid a bye and started walking towards her home when RK lit up a smoke and she turned at him and said "Cigaratte is..."
"Injurious for health..." He completed and threw it and smiled...
"Take care... And yeah from next time don't miss any interview for someone's help..." She said sadly and bid a bye...
RK threw the smoke from the bus's window... They both travelled a long journey... Both their busses coming from opposite side... Suddenly a car overtake Madhu's bus... Some college friends were enjoying and a girl from them threw a scarf on air and it landed on the mirror of Madhu's bus... The driver was already drunk and lost his balance... And the buses collide head-on, creating a devastating accident... People from all around came for aid... Soon the ambulances reached... RK ended up with severe head injury... The rescue people forced him to go hospital but he refused and helped the people, still he was feeling dizzy but didn't care... He then went in Madhu's bus where he found her injured, her head was bleeding badly...
"Hey... Wake up... Look I am Rishabh.. Listen..." But she was unconsious... He immediately took her in his arm and left in an ambulance... After admitting her he fainted...
RK gained his consious... He was lying on bed... The oxygen musk was on his mouth... But he only remembered about his love... So he removed his oxygen musk and tried to wake up when nurse said "What... What are you doing??"
"Where.. Where is she... I want to meet her..." He was taking deep breaths...
"Doctor!! Doctor..." The nurse shouted as she couldn't control him... Soon the doctor came...
"Doctor where is she?? I admitted her... I want to see her..." He pleaded..
"You please take rest..." Doctor said...
"No doctor please..." He pleaded... He was taking deep breath...
Soon the doctor shifted his bed next to Madhu... She was lying, the mechines were connected with her body... The oxygen musk was on her mouth too... The doctors were checking her pulses each and every time...
"Hey..Girl.. Open.. Open your eyes..." RK said still fighting with himself... Madhu slowly opened her eyes and turned at his side and smiled...
"Remember I am Rishabh..."
"Madhu!!! Madhubala..." She uttered her name...
"Madhu!!! I... I... I want to tell you something... I.. Love you... Madhuuu..." He was struggling but still tried his best to confess... She smiled...
"Do... Do you love me..." Suddenly her breathing speed became faster and same as RK's... "Madhuuu!!!" She looked at RK...
"Love me??"
"I... I... I love you... Rishabh..." She smiled...
"I... Love... You... Too... Madhu..." They entangled their fingures and closed their eyes...
"Doctor!!!" The nurse shouted...
Rishabh and Madhu were walking hand in hand smilingly... That indicating the two souls were in so much love... With this Rishabh and Madhu's "journey" will continue to the "eternity"...
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