guy's this is just a short story which i thought i would write .Please tell me how it is and give me your feedback,Please.
It was the month of june and all the 11th grade classes had begunđ.5 friends meet and they became great friends and were a popular gang in the collegeđ.Aliya,Nidhi,Pari,Sanam,Humera,Seema were very happy with each otherđ.Aliya was well known for her intelligenceđ¤,Nidhi had a passion for foodđ,Pari was the glam queen of the collegeđł,Sanam was always happy helping other's,this was how she used to be happyđ,Humera was a bubbly lively girlđ and Seema loved drawingđ˛.All 6 of them spend excellent moments with each other.Sanam and Humera were best friends which the whole college knewđł.Everything they used to do together.they loved each other alotâ¤ď¸.All 6 of them used to have fights but they sort them out very fast. Then the day came were everyone had to choose their own pathđ˛.Boards were over and they all did good.Ofcourse the topper was Aliyađ,and then Sanam but the last was Humera.As all 6 were in science stream they wrote their entrance exams for medical but none of them could qualifiy mbbs.Aliya got into a top most engineering college and even Seema joined her college.Nidhi and Pari joined in a B.s.c college.Sanam got a dental seatđ and she had no other option than to take it as she didn't want to do engineering and her dad didn't allow her to take B.s.c nor he wanted to pay and get a m.b.bs seat for her.Sanam and Humera wanted to join the same college Sanam knew before her exams that this could not happen but Humera cried and begged and promised Sanam that she would join whichever college Sanam would join at any cost.Sanam was very happy and thought that her future is filled with happiness.
That was the biggest mistake Sanam did,believing Humerađđ.When time came Humera left Sanam.Humera paid money and took a seat in a medical college.Sanamwanted to join with Humera but she couldn't pay so much money so she Humera infact begged her to join in the dental college which she got as it would be less fees and they both could study together,and also dental is not as stressful as m.b.b.s.But Humera didn't listen,Humera never liked science so much and she was very scared of everything.Sanam was very upset but Humera never caredđĄ.To Sanam it seemed like everything changed in a second as she could see alot of difference in Humera's behaviour and Sanamdidn't like it. Sanam knew this was not the ending of their friendship if they both didn't join in the same college but it hurted her alot and also the change in Humera's behaviourđ.But Sanam knew that just because her friend changed she can't change maybe things can't be good as before but still considered Humera as her best friend after all Sanam loved and cared for Humera more than anyone. đĽą
So what's your opinion about the short storyđ,what should have Sanam done?Please give your comments,as i will be waiting for them.Thanks in advance.đ.Sorry,This is not to hurt anyone or any character.đ
Edited by cutivenika - 11 years ago