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Posted: 11 years ago
A partner's Res!
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Oh my gosh.. I am left aching now..😆

What a masseur haina?
Khushi is truly lucky to have such hot n supportive husband in her life to take care of her every ache. *ahem*

Blayde ji, you are truly brilliant with your words and imaginations, well who had thought that the crappiest Mrs. India track would be recreated like this?! So beautiful n sensuous.

The bubble bath and the following massage just left me speechless n blushing n I dont have words to describe what else. ☺️
She boldly stepped in front of him, haaa...I loved that move and sure that left Arnav spellbound.. right? His thought process were too hot to read.. haaye...

I was like, damn dont end this OS soon..lol..
It was a brilliant read with all elements.
Cuteness, hotness, romance, trust, support and an "ahem"

Meko aur kya chahiye.. I am so Khush after reading this!


So whats next? The Fatigue I guess..😆

Will be back soon with my nautanki.

Love you partner..😳

Stay blissed like always.

Muchoo Pyar 🤗
Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarunfanatic_Ji

A partner's Res!

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Oh my gosh.. I am left aching now..😆 *EHEM!*🤣

What a masseur haina? Tell me about it sista. If only all of us had one of those! 😛😉
Khushi is truly lucky to have such hot n supportive husband in her life to take care of her every ache. *ahem* Right?! Partner ji, I agree hands down...or up...or wherever those skilled hands want to go!! 😆

Blayde ji, you are truly brilliant with your words and imaginations, Haiii shukriya ji!! *warm and fuzzies* 😳
well who had thought that the crappiest Mrs. India track would be recreated like this?! So beautiful n sensuous. You know, the end of the show was just horrendous. A complete injustice to the show we had fallen in love with. And knowing it was nearing the end, I just gave into the reality and tried my best to weed out any inspirational moments I could. They were spare, but I found them...and then a light bulb went off in my head and I thought...hmmm...what if this would've happened instead?! I wanted to share my alternate endings to that mess of a track to try to salvage that swoon worthy Arshi chemistry! And It is for people like you for whom I continue to write! ❤️

The bubble bath and the following massage just left me speechless n blushing n I dont have words to describe what else. ☺️ I am sure your hubby was happy (or curious as to what you were reading). 😛😆
She boldly stepped in front of him, haaa...I loved that move and sure that left Arnav spellbound.. right? His thought process were too hot to read.. haaye... That water droplet scene was one of my favorites to write to this day. I still don't know how I came up with that! I wish I could think of something like that now, I think I am starting to lose my touch! 😕

I was like, damn dont end this OS soon..lol.. Aww! You're just too cute.
It was a brilliant read with all elements.
Cuteness, hotness, romance, trust, support and an "ahem" Thank you for recognizing all those emotions! I do always try to convey what I envision the characters feeling, and this just validates it. And of course, we can never forget the *ehem* 😉😆

So whats next? The Fatigue I guess..😆 Hanji!! 😃

Will be back soon with my nautanki. Can't wait!! 😛

Love you partner..😳 Pyaar you more Partner ji!! 🤗

Stay blissed like always.

Muchoo Pyar 🤗 Mucho x Mucho!! ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
arnav so cute sweet and romantic
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Posted: 11 years ago
the care and love is beautiffully expressed
good one
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, loved it so much, ur arnav and khushi seem real to me and as perfect as they were on the show. i so like where u went with the track, his worry and care and concern for her. and what a sweet way to make her feel better 😳 and i absolutely loved that u had equal parts of romance and passion, all overlaid beautifully by sweetness and tenderness and their utter utter love for each other ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

That was such a pasionate yet lovely OS...

Indeeded Arnav taking care of Kushi's all aches...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just loved this story!!...loved the way he cared for her in this one...and gave her aches n pains precedence...it was so sweet and latest so hott...phew!!!
Only u can manage that combination!!!... Great writing!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayeee😳
that was superb dear as always

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