Picture Frames.. AY Five-shot - Page 2

It's aweshum shreyasi... I loved it... Loved the way you introduce ashi😆 A mature ashi...nice😳😳😳 but senior chemical researcher 🤣🤣🤣 Well aktually she can be one... coz i am sure she loves to mix the chemicals and create different things😆 Well things to you know...😆😆😆 Neways loved the way you described Ashi.😳😳😳 And no msgs at 5 AM🤣🤣 I am sure ashi would have wanted to smash that person's face 🤣🤣

And Yuvi... you need to ask me??☺️ Just loved it☺️ Yellow shirt with white open-collar suit and jeans!! ☺️☺️ Lovely!😳 And loved the 2nd part of the 1st part of shot😳 AY fighting 🤣🤣🤣 That was way too hilarious😆😆😆 but like harshu said... emotinal too...but it was perfect AY!☺️☺️ And now w/o doing any delay... pleej continue to next part😳😳 Its aktually fun to read your ur fics😳

[Quote= Super Super Crazy Gurl]Great beginning shreya! 😃 It's nice to read somethng where the background and all the little details are taken care of too. It's nice to see a sorta different and mature Ashi..who works hard and wears executive clothes

So great job in showing some changes in te characters...which is...obviously gonna come if you're fast forwarding 10 years. The catalyst in the change in Ashi must have been a powerful one to change her so much..and yet n the whole...she remains the same.

The morning blues is typical Ashi behaviour 😆 😆 😆 And so is her hot temper 😉

Coming to Yuvi...the kind of look you have given to his character is intersting...the clothes e'sshown wearing reflect his current personality...not stiff n formal...and yet not a lazy scrounger like Ashi believed 😆 😆

Both Ashi ad Yuvi's outbursts were interesting, emotional and yet in a way...funny! Though I dunno why!

Great Job...update soon!
And i agree with all what harshu said😛😳

PS: I'm still wondering about the title and why it was named so!😉 I agree with this too

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Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Great beginning shreya! 😃 It's nice to read somethng where the background and all the little details are taken care of too. It's nice to see a sorta different and mature Ashi..who works hard and wears executive clothes

So great job in showing some changes in te characters...which is...obviously gonna come if you're fast forwarding 10 years. The catalyst in the change in Ashi must have been a powerful one to change her so much..and yet n the whole...she remains the same.

The morning blues is typical Ashi behaviour 😆 😆 😆 And so is her hot temper 😉

Coming to Yuvi...the kind of look you have given to his character is intersting...the clothes e'sshown wearing reflect his current personality...not stiff n formal...and yet not a lazy scrounger like Ashi believed 😆 😆

Both Ashi ad Yuvi's outbursts were interesting, emotional and yet in a way...funny! Though I dunno why!

Great Job...update soon!

PS: I'm still wondering about the title and why it was named so!😉

my comments ditto 😳 loved the way u started off......btw imagining ashi as senior resercher is getting me in splits 🤣 n then as harshu has said the convo btw ay was emotional yet funny......so typical of ay btw 😳 luved yuvi in yellow shirt n white suit n jeans ☺️ i can actually imagine him 😍 .....gr8 part 👏👏👏 nd now cont soon baby 😳

shreyasi... pleej continue yaar...dont keep us all in suspense... i am eagerly waitingg to read more and more 😳 😳

plzzz continue it...its relly relly guddddd!!!!!


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nice part... really well written...

nice part. please continue soon. really loved it!!!!

awesum part....luvd every wrd....luvd the precision...quite a nice style of writing i shud say...5 shot..hmm...wnderin whts in store next...nd i was quite amazed by uvs assumption ki ashi ws scared nd inside longed fr a knight....that ws lyk wow...if i was in place of ashi i wud hav had tht 1 minute reminder thing u noe...has my whole lyf been a lie kinda thing...cuz the way he said it ws too imposin....awesum yaar.....