a manan ff-Damaged soul(NOTE on page-43 27/08/2015)

well i m new to this forum. First time I m trying to write a ff.
Plot - Same as d show but with a slight twist. Is nandini is as sweet as every1 thinks, But what if she is as broken and damaged as manik. What will Manik do when he came to know that maybe nandini is as much shattered in her life as his or maybe worse. But the thing is the path she has chosen to escape her demons. What will happen when fab5 came to realize that there are many ppl like them. What will happen when they realize their mistakes and how they try to be a better human being in their life.

Story starts when nandu land up at manik's house after risabh incident.


sorry guys for my bad english. But if you have like my concept plz press the like option or comment me.IF u guys want then I will cont this ff.

chapter 1 below

Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3a- page 3
Chapter 3b- page 4
Chapter 4- page 5
Chapter 5- page 6
Chapter 6- page 8
Chapter 7- page 12
Chapter 8- page 13
Chapter 9- page 16
Chapter 10- page 19
Chapter 10(a)- page 21
Chapter 11- page 24
Chapter 11(a)- page 25
Chapter 12- page 28
Chapter 13- page 30
Chapter 14 a&b- page 33
Chapter 14c- page 35
Chapter 14d- page 36
Chapter 14e- page 38

I reqlly like the concept
Please continue soon

I liked the concept please give a try...

Plz do write it and plz pm me i love Nandidni and Manik

chapter 1
scene starts when fab 4 went back to their home and manik decided to drive nandini to her house.
Manik: umm nandini i want to say something.
Nandini: What is it manik?
manik: You know I was thinking about...
ok this is not what I want to say to her. I M saying this because it is about my buddy I m doing this for him. Its not like I want to spend my precious time with her. I mean who wants to spend their time with her. Well Dhruv does and I know many of the boys does. Ugh I hv scene them ogling at her creeps they dont hv any other work except looking at pretty girls. This is all her fault why does she have to look so adorable all d time. I just hate her.
Nandini:Manik manik
Manik: what?
Nandini: Nothing its just that you are holding my hand and its hurting.
I looked at my hand and realized i m holding her hand like my whole life depends on it. But it feels good. OH what I m even thinking. OFF i hate her so much she drives me crazy.
Nandini: Manik are you ok?
MAnik: Ofcourse I m ok. I m holding ur hand bcoz I want to
Nandini:WHAT?
MAnik: U want to hear that only right but I m so not sorry to burst ur bubble. I hold it mistakenly.
Nandini: Ok I get it now will you tell me what u want to say.
Oh god I totally forgot what I want to say ahh damn I hate her so much when she is around I become amir khan from ghajini. Oh I rem
Manik: I want to talk about rishabh and dhruv.
NANDU: oh d thing u said that night. Yeah ok I m f9.
MANIK: will U shut ur mouth for one sec I was thinking dat both dhruv and rishabh attacks are same but I think ris has suffered more. FOR one sec I thought she looked scared like she has seen a ghost infront of her. BUT I choose to ignore thatcand continue. I m thinking bout couns she can talk to him and maybe then we will know about d real reason behind his silence. I hv talk about this with dhruv nom also but dhruv never listen to us and we dont want to make him angry so we chickened out. But if rish wil agree to this then maybe we can help both of them. If earlier she looked scared then now she look like I hv accused her of a murder.
Nandini: I i hv to think about this now I need to go.
Manik: but ok you take ur time tell me in d mrng.
Nandini:manik?
manik:hmm
Nandu:my hand
manik :oh right ur hand bye hv bad dreams
nandu: sweet dreams monster she said with a smile. and i watch her as she dissapear in the night all d time I hv a smile on my face oh what I m doing ah I hate her of that i m sure.

It was really nice plz continue soon and loved the part where Manik touched her hands

good that nandu will be different here

Nice concept ... Keep it up :)

CHAPTER 2
She looks outside the window and see Manik disappearing into the night. His words are playing on her mind. She doesnt know what she will do if rishabh will go to a couns then def some pages from past will be revealed and she doesnt know what she will do if any1 come to know about them.
AFTER FEW DAYS
Now Every1 know about Cabir's secret. Fab5 has supported him completely but, now a day's Harshad has got a new weapon to tease Cabir mercilessly. Because of all this somewhere Cabir is losing his confidence he has began to skip classes. Well this obviously cant go well with the other tem members. So they hv decided to teach Harshad a lesson.
Mukti: We have to do something guys. Mukti said while pacing back and froth in Manik's living room.
Mukti: We cant let Harshad win like this. He is just testing my patience. I mean it guys if he said one more time something about cabir I'll kill him.
Alya: PLZ calm down we will think about something.
Mukti: But when?
Alya: I dont know but now we have to think about somthing.
Mukti: If it is in my power i would have make him mute.
Manik: Good idea mukti.
Alya: What we are going to do? We cant stop him from speaking.
Manik: ALYA ALYA just relax you are right we cant stop him. But we can force him to stop his nonsense for once and all.
Alya: What do you mean Manik? You are not thinking of fighting with him. Do you?
Manik: Yes & No he said with an evil smile.
Dhruv: I know what you mean buddy. You are thinking of using Harshad weakness right.
Mukti: wait wait what you guys are talking about?
Manik: Well we all know how much our dear harshad loves to win. Right guys?
Alya: We know that MANIK. But how does that help in this case.
Mukti: Come on both of you stop your this suspense game and spill the beans. Manik what are you thinking?
Manik: Well guys we need to make a bet with him. and we will keep the condition in front of him that if he loses he will ask forgiveness from Cabir in front of every1. Because we all know if we take revenge from him in our ways he will continue to taunt Cabir. BUT he will not back out from a bet.
Alya: But what will be the bet?
Cabir: I know what will make Harshad lose?
Cabir was silently listening to their conversation from the door. But when he hear the plan he know exactly what they should do? He was glad that his friends and his mom love him and support him. But somewhere deep inside him he was afraid abuut what wil happen if they got fed up of him. He doesnt want to be a weak link among them. And for that to happen harshad needs to keep his mouth shut.
Mukti: Cabir! Finally you are here.I m so happy now we all together can teach that loser a lesson.
Cabir: Bang on guys. Harshad you are so dead.
Manik: What you were saying earlier you know how can we defeat Harshad?
Cabir: Yes actually no its not what its who.
Mukti: What do you mean?
Cabir: I know a person who can make Harshad go on his knees.
Every1 together says WHO?
Cabir:TASHA