Gosh...Fuzz loveeed the update. 😃 🤗 Sorry for being late, but I have my guests and hardly any time to manage everything. I did read it yesterday only but could not comment. It was my birthday and guests,and write my own FF and other commitments. The moment I read your update, all I wanted to tell you was "girl you are doing amazingly good again in a lighter version of your writing skills as well!" 😃👏 Well done. Please do keep it balanced always, not too intense. This much I loved, and loved a light FF also by you. I loved Raghav's reaction, his new version, he surprised me by showing understanding and some emotions for Kalpi; and even more by caring and worrying for her pregnancy! Not to mention I loved the way you showed them getting intimate again; especially that dialogue "Damn you, kiss me back!" I don't know why but I was stuck at this dialogue!
Then Raghav scared me by telling Kalpi to be ready from next week; either he'l bring protection or tells her to start on pills! Now that is scary, I don't know why!But then, his feelings and worry, understanding for what Kalpi might have gone through because of him and pregnancy scare, and telling Pakhi that he'd have married Kalpi had she been pregnant made me fall in love with him. He is already showing care for her. My most favourite part, actually one of the most favourite parts was when Raghav hugged Kalpi in the last. 😃
I am loving this new Raghav and Kalpi is still a mystery. She still seems to be in shock and in awe of whatever has happened and is happening between her and Raghav. Being a girl, she cannot accept all this so easily; but Raghav is a guy; it is much easier for him to accept their passionate & physical intimacy wala relation! I wanna say so much, but words fall short. 😃
P.S.: Thank you so-so much for counting me amongst your favorites. 😃🤗❤️ love you so much. 😃😊
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
