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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: sunyy
Wow angel that was a sweet gesture by rags. He is comforting her. 😛 so does this mean we can expect a first date sometime in the near future huh with a nice slow dance and all 😉

i have no idea what is happening next...lol

off to bed goodnight

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Chap 9

Fuzz, you have made this chapter so dynamic.

From frustration to anger to anxiety to fooling around to fight to sizzling attraction to softening to making out and finally showing care and love..

Overwhelming, girl. ThanQ for giving me my Maha episode and doing such an amazing job to it. Inspite of such a long update, you are so amazing that I still cant get enough. This Rags and Kalpi are going to play in my mind though out. 😃

After, Rags last show of tender care I am drooling over him yet again.☺️ After witnessing the pregnancy scare evidence he understood, How serious his actions could have been.

OH!! He is falling in Love ❤️.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#363

I don't know what to say!!!!!!! Your're amazing! I love the extende update!! I knew he wud have gotten angry lol this is too awesome!! Paaki knows the truth about priya and rags!! Oh how I loved that convo in the room;) and wow I knew she could t resist!! Lol girl you're awesome!! OMG from the wall then next was in bed!! DAMN!!! You've done it again!! So vivid you write it's like watching a movie!!! I knew that he cares! And him finding the pregnancy test was just to make the care and concerned there so Paaki and Kalpi can see!! At least Paaki knows how he thinks about her!! OMG!! And him tell Paaki he will marry her was icing on the cake!! Him going back just to make sure that Kalpi knows that he knows about what she had to go through is just amazing!! He will be there for her!! And he's gonna tell her right?!! And priya telling Paaki my God!!! What better news is that?! Can't wait for Kalpi to know he's free LOL!!! The she wouldn't hold back LOL
Another amazing update!! You keep outdoing yourself with every update!! Thanks for letting me know that rags is gonna fall in love first!! From his concern for her I cud have tell:) now it's just Kalpi!! You are unbelievable!! Very skilled, talented,creative,original and everything else lol I have no words!! LOL I'm in awe!! I praise you!!!! I cannot resist! I'm going to read from the beginning!!

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#364

You said it Di angels amazing! 😃 this update was amazing... Rags our attitude king was amazing. Totally totally loved it

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Sukanya

@Sukku24

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Awww😳... I loved the update angel

You never miss out showing their emotions 👏, nd u compel me to love raghav and kalpi in every FF❤️

I must say you really gave so many updates this week... Surprised me daily sometimes twice in a day🤗

No one could thank you enough for that, but still a big thank youuu nd a biggg huggg 🤗

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Sukanya

@Sukku24

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Oh yes, i'm dedicating my 100th post here for uuu😳

I love youuu ❤️ Muahhh

It took quite a long time to reach 100 for me 😆 so it's really special for me 😊

Have been waiting since morning to post this... Pheww, finally got time to do so 😉🤗

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Oh yes a Big Bang On this ff is getting more and more interesting by the updates my gosh how do u do it this is impeccable writing my dear well done

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#368

Amazing update👍🏼
continue soon.,..

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

Fuzz this one is brilliant.. so many back to back updates n I enjoyed reading all. This Raghav and Kalpi are making me fall for them. i love ur writing style and started admiring u more. i wish someday I could write like u.. Once u asked about ur opinion on publishing a book n I dint reply coz I was not reading any of ur FF but now i can say that u can be a professional writer. u r too good in it.

Now it's clear that Raghav will fall first but I do not want him to regret what all he did coz I think we should never regret what we have done as at one time it was exactly what u wanted... He was wrong in misunderstanding Kalpi but than she was the one who gave lap dance to Sammy... Neither I want Kalppi to feel guilty for spending night with him or the kiss as she is equally enjoying it but I deffo want them to tone down and realize that this is just not the physical attraction but something else which is affecting them. I want Kalpi to be more stronger and want her to make Raghav's life hell but becoming a tough nut to crack. Though I won't mind whatever u will show as u r convincing writer n I like all ur ideas.

Thanks dear for this light n wonderful story as I can enjoy it without thinking what will happen next n what are they going to do now... i m fine with it's pace and loving it.