KRISHNA AND RUKMINI OS - 'LOVE REBORN'

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Hi everyone!😊 thought to write an OS on the celebration of becoming a groupbie!! 😆😆 hope you like it... i have no intention of hurting anybody's feelings😲... this is just a fictional work😃... god knows what the truth is...😛
But one thing i would like to say is, THE ART OF WRITING IS MYSTERIOUS, THANK YOU TO ALL OF THEM WHO HAVE WRITTEN SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORKS, I KNOW ITS REALLY HARD JOB!👏👏

special thanks to Yagyaseni for helping me... thank you jiji!!😳😳

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INTRODUCTION

Vishnu and Laxmi share a unique bond of love. Laxmi is considered to be Vishnu's Shakti. Krishna believed to be the reincarnation of Lord Vishnu and Rukmini, the reincarnation of Godess Laxmi, in the dwarpar yuga too Rukmini was Krishna's Shakti.

This is the story of their marriage.😳

hope you enjoy reading it😆😃😊😳🥱🥱

Edited by ayu_8 - 11 years ago
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forgive me for any spelling mistakes.. hope u enjoy it!!😳 do comment and like... it will be appreciated😃😆😳

A dark and tall figure appeared near the stairs of the Parvathi mandir, gold crown was shimmering in the beautiful light of the setting sun and a peacock feather was tucked in the right side, it seemed as though the crown was blessed to be held up on the head of a godly person.

"Mere arya aa gaye, mere rakhshan ke liye... Mujhe purn vishwaas tha ke woh aaenge, ve apna vachan kabhi nahi todenge" thought Rukmini with a sigh of relief!

It was her brother's ambition to earn the wrath of Jarasandha, therefore he proposed that she be married to the crown prince of Chedi- Shishupal, but all was against her will, Rukmini was already in love with Krishna whose greatness, virtue, character and charm she had much heard of.

As a part of their plan, Rukmini had called Krishna to the Parvathi temple from where he should kidnap her. The couple rode off when Shishupal noticed them and all of Jarasandha's forces started chasing them just when a beautiful lady with a bow in her hand appeared before them, blocking their path of chase. She was accompanied by Balram, Krishna's elder brother.

"Yeh kaun hai arya?" asked Rukmini to Krishna while they were riding a two-horse chariot.

"Yeh! Yeh toh Parth hai! Pritha ka putra!" answed Krishna naughtily smiling and looking at Parth who was wearing a lady's outfit.

Rukmini tried to guess why Krishna had made Parth appear like a woman but she finally gave up stating, "aap ki leelayein toh koi nahi samaj sakta arya!" and both gave out a soft laugh.

Suddenly a voice full of anger said, "Murkh Krishna! Meri behen ka vivah Shishupal ke saath nishchit ho chuka hai! Kisi aur ki sampatti leke bhagte huye tumhe lajja nahi aati?" it was Rukmi, brother of Rukmini.

Krishna stopped the chariot at those harsh and insulting words for a lady, yes, he did not feel angry because he was insulted, but because women were not respected, thus he spoke, "Laxmi sampatti ka daan karti hai! Woh swayam sampatti nahi hoti!"

"Laaut jaao Rukmi, mai tumhe samman se keh raha hun, shashtra uthaunga toh tumhari mrityu nishchit hai!"

"Mujhe tum jaise murkh se koi bhay nahi, aao shatra uthao!" said Rukmi

Krishna and Rukmi duelled with the inevitable result of Krishna's victory.

Krishna called upon his Sudarshana Chakra and was just going to kill Rukmi when Rukmini fell on his feet and pleaded for her brother's life. So Krishna spared Rukmi after shaving his half head and half moustache. He said, "There is no greater shame for a warrior than a visible sign of defeat."

From there Krishna took Rukmini to Madhavpur Ghed and eloped with her. Afterwards, they returned to Dwarka and married with great pomp and ceremony.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome, dear!!! Loved the GovNi part!!!! Thanks for the PM and write more!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Awesome, dear!!! Loved the GovNi part!!!! Thanks for the PM and write more!!!


Thanks jiji 😳
I do hope I'd get time to write more stuff 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayu_8


Thanks jiji 😳
I do hope I'd get time to write more stuff 😉

Waiting for more!! And thanks for the credit!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow di it was so good liked it very much and naughty Krishna turning out to an angry one was even fantastic it shows how much Krishna respects women and loved the statement "laxmi sampati ka dan karti hai who swayam sampati nahi hoti"
It is true and congrats for being a groupbie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ayu,govind ki love stories hamesha sabki favourite hot I hai!!!
Samay mile toh avashya aur likhna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Texie

Wow di it was so good liked it very much and naughty Krishna turning out to an angry one was even fantastic it shows how much Krishna respects women and loved the statement "laxmi sampati ka dan karti hai who swayam sampati nahi hoti"

It is true and congrats for being a groupbie


Thank you soo much!! 😳 no need to say di 😛 maybe I am smaller than you 😕
Thanks anyways 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asu129

Hey ayu,govind ki love stories hamesha sabki favourite hot I hai!!!
Samay mile toh avashya aur likhna


Thanks yaar!! 😆 thank u for reading and appreciating it 😉 I will try my best
You can call me Ayushi 😳
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