Vidarth OS (Hot) : Eager Kids *PMs Sent*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay So my first attempt at something a bit more hot than what I usually have attempted. This one is for Ash (hope this lifted up your mood after the Vidarth disastrous track) and to all the Vidarthians who ship them like US. 😳


EAGER KIDS

"Hey, Parth..!!", Rohit's tap on the shoulder jerked him out of the tempting vision he had been enjoying from the last 15 minutes.
"Rohit", he turned around and hugged his friend still looking back.
"Kam se kam ek second ke liye to focus shift kar", Rohit teased him. Laughing, he complied and gave Rohit a bear hug.
"Awesome party. By the way.. Happy Anniversary" Rohit patted his back while hugging.
"Thanks Yaar." Parth broke the hug and looked back. Sitting at the bar and sipping his drink, Parth threw timely glances at the dance area.
"Hmm.. Waise.. Ye idea tera to hoga nahi. Beach party and all." Rohit chuckled gulping down his whisky.
"Yep. This is not my area. Waise bhi what better gift could I get than chilling and having my whisky" Parth chuckled.
"Mmm.. Correction.. Chilling, Having your whisky and GAWKING at your wife" Rohit took a dig eating the snack.
"Yaar... Meri sagi wife hai.. SADDA HAQ banta hai", Parth joked and hi-fived with him as they threw their heads back savoring a hearty laugh.

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Rohit waved back, with a broad smile, at a grinning Vidushi waving at him from the dance area. He raised the toast and showed her thumbs up looking around. Vidushi raised her chin and pulled up her collar with a chirpy smile on her face. Rohit chuckled and opened his mouth to speak.
"No don't praise her more. I am a possessive husband. Doesn't go down well with me." Parth cut him with a smirk.
"Nautanki Saale" .. Rohit hit his shoulder laughing while Parth resumed to his previous gawking.
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AND THE HOST IS FINALLY ON THE FLOOR.. The DJ announced as Parth yanked around Vidushi and grabbed her waist pulling her close. The dance area erupted into deafening cheers and wolf whistles as Parth snaked his hand in her hair and pulled her into a searing kiss. Nibbling her upper lip, he swayed on the sand trying to get the most of her lips that played havoc with his already destroyed senses. Mashing his nose into hers, he angled his head deepening the kiss. Vidushi clutched his shirt as he bit her lower lip hard dissolving her moan in the music. Taking her lips back into an urgent kiss, he engulfed her waist in his arms reducing every distance. Vidushi dug her nails more into his shirt, as Parth lifted her off the ground and took a swirl, on the spot, with her lips still sealed.
NOW THAT'S SOME INTENSE DANCE MOVEEE.. The DJ announced again as Parth came back to the spot and broke the kiss putting Vidushi down. The cheering increased and Vidushi took hold of his hand trying to steady herself and her erratic breathing. She looked up and found him grinning and breathing heavily.
"Whoaa.. Okay.. What was that for?" Vidushi asked panting.
"You were giving too much attention to the guests." He breathed heavily.
"So?"
"So.. I am an Eager Kid. I snatched the attention back." He laughed, still breathing heavily, as Vidushi gaped at him.
"Kid..??!!.. High on whisky haan?" Vidushi chuckled. Holding her waist, he pulled her back to him.
"Nope.. I am immune to that. You are the one that takes me to a high. Top it with a knotted shirt and hot pants. Have Merrrcyyy" Parth whispered in her ear. Vidushi blushed and kissed him lightly near his lips.
"Lets go..!!" Parth murmured against her cheek.
"The guests?"
"They are not KIDS. They can entertain themselves. It's me who need special attention." Parth winked.
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Vidushi blushed and entwined her fingers in his as their friends gave teasing howls seeing them leave the dance area. Walking through the cottages, Parth cornered Vidushi behind a cottage. Trapping her against the wall, Parth cupped her face intensely and breathed, "You know I love you right?"
"Hmm" Vidushi nodded her head rubbing her nose on his cheekbone.
"Hell.. I even lust you" Parth murmured along her jaw line as Vidushi arched her face more towards her lips. Moving his index finger down her neck through her heaving chest, he brushed her navel. She took a sharp breath as his finger travelled to the right. Vidushi grabbed his face as Parth groped her waist tightly. "Parth" Vidushi whispered breathlessly, as she gave in to her desire and pulled his face towards her.
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Her eyes snapped open in desperation as she could feel his breath but not his lips. Her heart beat accelerated as Parth had stopped at a thumb distance from her lips. His gaze intense and steady on her lips, he brushed his thumb on them. Stroking her lips, he looked hungrily into her eyes. Vidushi closed her eyes as he leaned in.
"What?.. What the hell?" Vidushi breathed exasperated as Parth had moved away from her with his back on her.
"Parth" she whispered breathing heavily. "Are you okay? What's wrong?" she asked as he just stood there breathing heavily with no response. Tensed with the sudden change, she moved towards him. His body stiffened as Vidushi touched his shoulder.
"Par... Mmm", Vidushi moaned as Parth had sharply turned around and pulled her into an aggressive kiss. Breaking the kiss, Vidushi asked stunned, "What.. what just happened?" Grabbing her waist to painful tightness, he pulled back her head and bit the hollow of her neck hard. "Ouchhh", she moaned. Licking all the way upto her chin, he pulled her head back and smirked, "Pay back time. You always tease me and make me crave. This time it's my turn." Before she knew, Parth had clamped her mouth into a hard rough kiss. Walking back he pushed her to the wall and grabbed her face. Vidushi opened her mouth to match up the intensity but things got worse as Parth invaded her with a desperate need to taste her. Everything seemed futile, from clutching his shirt to pulling his hair, as Parth pulled her lower lip and bit it hard.
"Parth".. "Vids" .. he rasped as he picked her up and Vidushi wrapped her legs around him. Stretching her shirt down her shoulder, Parth gave open mouthed kisses on her chest and collarbone. His stubble had always unleashed torture on her senses but his intensity was screwing up everything this time. Unable to take it anymore, she pulled back his collar and bit him hard on his shoulder.
"Arrghh.. Vidsss", he groaned and pulled her head off with her hair. "You shouldn't have done that." he rasped before attacking her neck with wet kisses. Parth bit the pulse of her neck as Vidushi dug her nails into his shoulder. Still kissing her neck, he moved to the right and grazed her near the ear lobe. Vidushi bit his ear lobe hard trying to survive his assaults.
"Ahh.. Dammit you don't learn.. Do you?" Parth put her down and pushed her more into the wall. Turning her around towards the wall, he attacked her nape. Biting and sucking it hard, he pushed his hand into the pockets of her shorts and pulled her to him. "Aaahh.." Vidushi moaned surrendering her head on his shoulder as Parth rubbed his lips on her neck. Turning her around to him again, he kissed her with pure unabashed hunger. "We are going home", he managed to speak against her lips.
"Wh.. what?.. That's 11 kms from here." Vidushi looked at him baffled.
"So.. We are on the beach behind some random cottage. We Are Going Home", he said and moved away.
"Whattt.. This is .. okay shameful of me to say.. But I am an Eager Kid and this is TORTUROUS", she complained.
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"Sit at the back seat", he ordered opening the car.
"What?"
"Sit at the back seat. God, don't you get it.. Distraction" he said frustrated.
"Okay. Fine. Did they mix something in your whisky or what?" she complained sitting in the back seat.
The car rushed on the road and the temperature of the car rose to dangerous levels as Parth and Vidushi exchanged loaded glares through the rear view mirror. His pressure to the accelerator would increase and so would Vidushi's breathing the moment their eyes would collide.
"Umm..".. Vidushi opened her mouth.
"Not a word." Parth said through gritted teeth and a dark gaze at the mirror.
Vidushi let out a frustrated breath and looked outside the window.
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The car took a sharp turn and Vidushi screeched, "What's happening?.. Where are we going Parth?" Ignoring her, he took the car further and stopped at an isolated place. Getting out of the car, he moved ahead checking the street.
"What the hell?... What is this place? Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hai Parth?" Vidushi asked getting out of the car totally frustrated. Moving back to her, he smirked "We Are Home". Vidushi looked at him trying to understand the meaning. And then her eyes widened as the meaning dawned at her. Holding his collar in her fists, she accussed, "You.. bloody.. You played me all this while. Damn, you were teasing me in the car."
Grinning broadly, he pulled away her hands. Clutching her wrists in his hands, he pushed her against the back door of the car. As she tried to free herself from his grip, Parth captured her lips into a heated kiss. He deepened the kiss as Vidushi twisted her wrists. Licking her lower lip, he reduced the distance between them. Vidushi didn't know when she stopped struggling. Need of oxygen made her gasp and Parth sneaked into the contours of her mouth. Stroking her tongue with his, he let go of her wrists. Forgetting everything, Vidushi pulled him more into the kiss clutching his hair. Tightening his grip on her waist, Parth opened the door of the back seat.
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Still kissing her, he pushed her back and down into the car. Laying her down, he broke the kiss and twisted back to shut the door. And the moment he turned back, Vidushi grabbed his face and smashed her lips on his as the tease had been hazardous to her patience. Smiling, he let her take over and pulled her up with him on his lap. Parth growled and opened the knot of her shirt as Vidushi bit his tongue. "Damn.. That was.." Parth said breathlessly. "Just the start.." Vidushi said intensely as she ripped apart his shirt. The window glasses tinkled lightly as the buttons flew apart. Parth's head went back in sheer pleasure, as Vidushi went all catty on him. Kissing his chest, she bit his nipple hard and moved up giving sharp bites on his neck and jaw.
Holding her face back Parth pushed her on her back and attacked her navel. "Sorry babes... Tonight, it's my night", he said before grazing her naval with his teeth. Vidushi arched as he gave a hard bite to it and marked it in deep red. Kissing up all the way through her waist, she moaned and giggled lightly at the same time, as his stubble rubbed at her weak spot. Pulling her shorts down, he pulled her up and latched the valley of her chest with kisses.
"They seriously mixed something into your whisky. I am gonna give them extra tip. What's got into you hubby?" she chuckled panting as she opened his fly. Holding her face possessively, he pushed her back on the seat. Vidushi gasped as Parth arched her hips towards him. "You get into me every time we make love. You are my second chance in love. I can love you all my life. I can lust you all my life." And Parth captured her lips and moans into an eager kiss.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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m so glad my Parents are not home!!

I swear I'm blushing so badly that if my mom saw me she'd ask me if I'm chatting with my crush or something!!!!
Ahhh!!!!
Whiskey?
Lol!
I love the title.
Eager kids?
Now that made me giggle naughtily.
Mom not here so I'm on laptop.
Long review for you.



EAGER KIDS

"Hey, Parth..!!", Rohit's tap on the shoulder jerked him out of the tempting vision he had been enjoying from the last 15 minutes.
"Rohit", he turned around and hugged his friend still looking back.
"Kam se kam ek second ke liye to focus shift kar", Rohit teased him. Laughing, he complied and gave Rohit a bear hug.
"Awesome party. By the way.. Happy Anniversary" Rohit patted his back while hugging. Happy Anniversary eh? Hehe!
"Thanks Yaar." Parth broke the hug and looked back. Sitting at the bar and sipping his drink, Parth threw timely glances at the dance area.
"Hmm.. Waise.. Ye idea tera to hoga nahi. Beach party and all." Rohit chuckled gulping down his whisky.
"Yep. This is not my area. Waise bhi what better gift could I get than chilling and having my whisky" Parth chuckled.
"Mmm.. Correction.. Chilling, Having your whisky and GAWKING at your wife" Rohit took a dig eating the snack. I laughed at this, imaginig Parth drinking and staring at Vidushi with a smoldering look!

"Yaar... Meri sagi wife hai.. SADDA HAQ banta hai", Parth joked and hi-fived with him as they threw their heads back savoring a hearty laugh. SADDA HAQ!! lol! I see what you did there !!
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Rohit waved back, with a broad smile, at a grinning Vidushi waving at him from the dance area. He raised the toast and showed her thumbs up looking around. Vidushi raised her chin and pulled up her collar with a chirpy smile on her face. Rohit chuckled and opened his mouth to speak.
"No don't praise her more. I am a possessive husband. Doesn't go down well with me." Parth cut him with a smirk.
"Nautanki Saale" .. Rohit hit his shoulder laughing while Parth resumed to his previous gawking. OHHH! Naughty possessive Parth is my favourite kind of PARTH!!
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AND THE HOST IS FINALLY ON THE FLOOR.. The DJ announced as Parth yanked around Vidushi and grabbed her waist pulling her close. The dance area erupted into deafening cheers and wolf whistles as Parth snaked his hand in her hair and pulled her into a searing kiss Somebody likes PDA!😆
. Nibbling her upper lip, he swayed on the sand trying to get the most of her lips that played havoc with his already destroyed senses.(Typo- changed sense to senses!) Mashing his nose into hers, he angled his head deepening the kiss. Vidushi clutchedat his shirt as he bit her lower lip hard dissolving her moan in the music. Taking her lips back into an urgent kiss, he engulfed her waist in his arms reducing every distance. Vidushi dug her nails more into his shirt, as Parth lifted her off the ground and took a swirl, on the spot, with her lips still sealed. That's me 😲 gawking at my laptop screen!
NOW THAT'S SOME INTENSE DANCE MOVEEE.. The DJ announced again as Parth came back to the spot and broke the kiss putting Vidushi down. The cheering increased and Vidushi took hold of his hand trying to steady herself and her erratic breathing. She looked up and found him grinning and breathing heavily.
"Whoaa.. Okay.. What was that for?" Vidushi asked panting.
"You were giving too much attention to the guests." He breathed heavily.
"So?"
"So.. I am an Eager Kid. I snatched the attention bac." He laughed, still breathing heavily, as Vidushi gaped at him.😆 I'm gonna die!
"Kid..??!!.. High on whisky haan?" Vidushi chuckled. Holding her waist, he pulled her back to him.
"Nope.. I am immune to that. You are the one that takes me to a high. Top it with a knotted shirt and hot pants. Have Merrrcyyy" Parth whispered in her ear. Vidushi blushed and kissed him lightly near his lips.😳
"Lets go..!!" Parth murmured against her cheek.
"The guests?"
"They are not KIDS. They can entertain themselves. It's me who need special attention." Parth winked.😳 Attention eh? *GIGGLE*
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Vidushi blushed and entwined her fingers in his as their friends gave teasing howls seeing them leave the dance area. Walking through the cottages, Parth cornered Vidushi behind a cottage. Trapping her against the wall, Parth cupped her face intensely and breathed, "You know I love you right?" 😳😳 Aww! he said the L word!
"Hmm" Vidushi nodded her head rubbing her nose on his cheekbone.
"Hell.. I even lust you" Parth murmured along her jaw line as Vidushi arched her face more towards her lips. And the other L word too!😆 jackpot!
Moving his index finger down her neck through her heaving chest, he brushed her navel. She took a sharp breath as his finger travelled to the right. Vidushi grabbed his face as Parth groped her waist tightly. "Parth" Vidushi whispered breathlessly, as she gave in to her desire and pulled his face towards her.😳 I'm a tomato now!

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Her eyes snapped open in desperation as she could feel his breath but not his lips. Her heart beat accelerated as Parth had stopped at a thumb distance from her lips. His gaze intense and steady on her lips, he brushed his thumb on them. Stroking her lips, he looked hungrily into her eyes. Vidushi closed her eyes as he leaned it. 😆😆😆 He's being a tease!
"What?.. What the hell?" Vidushi breathed exasperated as Parth had moved away from her with his back on her.
"Parth" she whispered breathing heavily. "Are you okay? What's wrong?" she asked as he just stood there breathing heavily with no response. Tensed with the sudden change, she moved towards him. His body stiffened as Vidushi touched his shoulder. Vids's concern for him😭 so beautiful!
"Par... Mmm", Vidushi moaned as Parth had sharply turned around and pulled her into an aggressive kiss. Breaking the kiss, Vidushi asked stunned, "What.. what just happened?" Grabbing her waist to painful tightness, he pulled back her head and bit the hollow of her neck hard. "Ouchhh", she moaned. Licking all the way upto her chin, he pulled her head back and smirked, "Pay back time. You always tease me and make me crave. This time it's my turn." Before she knew, Parth had clamped her mouth into a hard rough kiss. Walking back he pushed her to the wall and grabbed her face. Vidushi opened her mouth to match up the intensity but things got worse as Parth invaded her with a desperate need to taste her. Everything seemed futile, from clutching his shirt to pulling his hair, as Parth pulled her lower lip and bit it hard.*fanning myself* Boy is it hooot in here!!
"Parth".. "Vids" .. he rasped as he picked her up and Vidushi wrapped her legs around him. Stretching her shirt down her shoulder, Parth gave open mouthed kisses on her chest and collarbone. His stubble had always unleashed torture on her senses but his intensity was screwing up everything this time. Unable to take it anymore, she pulled back his collar and bit him hard on his shoulder. She bit him?😆😉 God for her. Teasing btard! HA!
"Arrghh.. Vidsss", he groaned and pulled her head tugging her hair. "You shouldn't have done that." he rasped before attacking her neck with wet kisses. Parth bit the pulse of her neck as Vidushi dug her nails into his shoulder. Still kissing her neck, he moved to the right and grazed her near the ear lobe. Vidushi bit his ear lobe hard trying to survive his assaults. 😆😆😆 LOL! Fighting for control!! Vids!!
"Ahh.. Dammit you don't learn.. Do you?" Parth put her down and pushed her more into the wall. Turning her around towards the wall, he attacked her nape. Biting and sucking it hard, he pushed his hand into the pockets of her shorts and pulled her to him.Intense visual!!
"Aaahh.." Vidushi moaned surrendering her head on his shoulder as Parth rubbed his lips on her neck. Turning her around to him again, he kissed her with pure unabashed hunger. "We are going home", he managed to speak against her lips. 😳😳
"Wh.. what?.. That's 11 kms from here." Vidushi looked at him baffled.
"So.. We are on the beach behind some random cottage. We Are Going Home", he said and moved away.
"Whattt.. This is .. okay shameful of me to say.. But I am an Eager Kid and this is TORTUROUS", she complained. 😆
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"Sit at the back seat", he ordered opening the car.
"What?"
"Sit at the back seat. God, don't you get it.. Distraction" he said frustrated.
"Okay. Fine. Did they mix something in your whisky or what?" she complained sitting in the back seat. 😆Obedient kid!
The car rushed on the road and the temperature of the car rose to dangerous levels as Parth and Vidushi exchanged loaded glares through the rear view mirror. His pressure to the accelerator would increase and so would Vidushi's breathing the moment their eyes would collide. 😳This is so hot! I sighed! I want this!!
"Umm..".. Vidushi opened her mouth.
"Not a word." Parth said through gritted teeth and a dark gaze at the mirror. 😆😆
Vidushi let out a frustrated breath and looked outside the window. Angry Kid!😆
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The car took a sharp turn and Vidushi screeched, "What's happening?.. Where are we going Parth?" Ignoring her, he took the car further and stopped at an isolated place. Getting out of the car, he moved ahead checking the street. 😳😳
"What the hell?... What is this place? Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hai Parth?" Vidushi asked getting out of the car totally frustrated. Moving back to her, he smirked "We Are Home". Vidushi looked at him trying to understand the meaning. And then her eyes widened as the meaning dawned at her. Holding his collar in her fists, she accussed, "You.. bloody.. You played me all this while. Damn, you were teasing me in the car."😆 Naughty kid!
Grinning broadly, he pulled away her hands. Clutching her wrists in his hands, he pushed her against the back door of the car. As she tried to free herself from his grip, Parth captured her lips into a heated kiss. He deepened the kiss as Vidushi twisted her wrists. Licking her lower lip, he reduced the distance between them. Vidushi didn't know when she stopped struggling. Need of oxygen made her gasp and Parth sneaked into the contours of her mouth. Stroking her tongue with his, he let go of her wrists. Forgetting everything, Vidushi pulled him more into the kiss clutching his hair. Tightening his grip on her waist, Parth opened the door of the back seat.😳😳
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Still kissing her, he pushed her back and down into the car. Laying her down, he broke the kiss and twisted back to shut the door. And the moment he turned back, Vidushi grabbed his face and smashed her lips on his as the tease had been hazardous to her patience. Smiling, he let her take over and pulled her up with him on his lap. Parth growled and opened the knot of her shirt as Vidushi bit his tongue. "Damn.. That was.." Parth said breathlessly. "Just the start.." Vidushi said intensely as she ripped apart his shirt.😆😉 GO VIDZZ!!
The window glasses tinkled lightly as the button flew apart. Parth's head went back in sheer pleasure, as Vidushi went all catty on him. Kissing his chest, she bit his nippled hard and moved up giving sharp bites on his neck and jaw. 😳
Holding her face back Parth pushed her on her back and attacked her navel. "Sorry babes... Tonight, it's my night", he said before grazing her navel with his teeth. Vidushi arched as he gave a hard tug to it and marked it in deep red. Kissing up all the way through her waist, she moaned and giggled lightly at the same time, as his stubble rubbed at her weak spot. Pulling her shorts down, he pulled her up and latched the valley of her chest with kisses.😳
"They seriously mixed something into your whisky. I am gonna give them extra tip. What's got into you hubby?" she chuckled panting as she opened his fly. Holding her face possessively, he pushed her back on the seat. Vidushi gasped as Parth arched her hips towards him. "You get into me every time we make love. You are my second chance in love. I can love you all my life. I can lust you all my life." And Parth captured her lips and moans into an eager kiss. 😳



Cheered me up yaar !! I love you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg chandu
its too nice dear
parth and vidu anniversary
and their love for each other
thnks for this chandu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
I wish I could show you my expressions write now. This is exactly what all Vidharth fans wanted. Parth's intensity here is to die for. This bold version of Parth and Vidushi is so well suited. I just can't imagine any other couple here.
You have seriously taken this to another level of hotness.
Love 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Damn you girl!! What was that!! Ye kya padh liya maine!! 🤪 you made my mind open all the gutters it collected till now!! I could picturize each of their moves,each of the scenes,dialogues!! Damn I am feeling 🤬 now!!! Gosh it's the hottest one on VidArth till now!! 🤬 Damn it was too good!! 😈 waha pe kyu ruk gayee..I know you could have written further!! 🤣
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Typing from my mobile.Hats off to u gal.U never disappoint me!! 🤗 🤗 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-DeViLiA-..

Damn you girl!! What was that!! Ye kya padh liya maine!! 🤪 you made my mind open all the gutters it collected till now!! I could picturize each of their moves,each of the scenes,dialogues!! Damn I am feeling 🤬 now!!! Gosh it's the hottest one on VidArth till now!! 🤬 Damn it was too good!! 😈 waha pe kyu ruk gayee..I know you could have written further!! 🤣
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Typing from my mobile.Hats off to u gal.U never disappoint me!! 🤗 🤗 👏


Heheh.. Thanks Deviliaa.. 😆.. Yaar.. I mean isse aage likhne ki meri creativity nahi hai.. LOL

Is tak hi visualize kar sakti hoon main.. 😆.. Thank you.. I am so honoured to have polluted your mind.. 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: romi_2014

I wish I could show you my expressions write now. This is exactly what all Vidharth fans wanted. Parth's intensity here is to die for. This bold version of Parth and Vidushi is so well suited. I just can't imagine any other couple here.

You have seriously taken this to another level of hotness.
Love 😳


Heheh Romi.. 😆😆.. My pleasure my pleasure.. 😳😳😳.. I wish to see him intense in the show.. 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chand! Tu Itna hot kyu likh rahi h??
I mean pehle se hi itni garbi h yahan aur itna sweat kar rhi hun mai!
You and purple bird, dono ne mujhe Vidhart shipper finally bana hi dala na! 😛
Chalo, acha kiya tum dono ne kuch toh! 😆
Anyways, coming to the us, I was just staring at the screen and reading the lines you wrote, were like amazing!
I just felt like saying "How f*king much more? Are you gonna stop?" Hehe, Matlab itna acha tha!
Damn Vidharth is so hot, I'm just flattered over them, I am just floating in air!
Write more, ab toh mai Vidhatere ban gaye ! Bale bale! 🤗🥳
Write more ... Love you Chand ! 😳
love, suma.
Edited by -Infinity- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SREE93-

omg chandu

its too nice dear
parth and vidu anniversary
and their love for each other
thnks for this chandu


Love you Shree.. Glad that you loved it.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

m so glad my Parents are not home!!

I swear I'm blushing so badly that if my mom saw me she'd ask me if I'm chatting with my crush or something!!!!
Ahhh!!!!
Whiskey?
Lol!
I love the title.
Eager kids?
Now that made me giggle naughtily.
Mom not here so I'm on laptop.
Long review for you.



EAGER KIDS

"Hey, Parth..!!", Rohit's tap on the shoulder jerked him out of the tempting vision he had been enjoying from the last 15 minutes.
"Rohit", he turned around and hugged his friend still looking back.
"Kam se kam ek second ke liye to focus shift kar", Rohit teased him. Laughing, he complied and gave Rohit a bear hug.
"Awesome party. By the way.. Happy Anniversary" Rohit patted his back while hugging. Happy Anniversary eh? Hehe!
"Thanks Yaar." Parth broke the hug and looked back. Sitting at the bar and sipping his drink, Parth threw timely glances at the dance area.
"Hmm.. Waise.. Ye idea tera to hoga nahi. Beach party and all." Rohit chuckled gulping down his whisky.
"Yep. This is not my area. Waise bhi what better gift could I get than chilling and having my whisky" Parth chuckled.
"Mmm.. Correction.. Chilling, Having your whisky and GAWKING at your wife" Rohit took a dig eating the snack. I laughed at this, imaginig Parth drinking and staring at Vidushi with a smoldering look!

"Yaar... Meri sagi wife hai.. SADDA HAQ banta hai", Parth joked and hi-fived with him as they threw their heads back savoring a hearty laugh. SADDA HAQ!! lol! I see what you did there !!
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Rohit waved back, with a broad smile, at a grinning Vidushi waving at him from the dance area. He raised the toast and showed her thumbs up looking around. Vidushi raised her chin and pulled up her collar with a chirpy smile on her face. Rohit chuckled and opened his mouth to speak.
"No don't praise her more. I am a possessive husband. Doesn't go down well with me." Parth cut him with a smirk.
"Nautanki Saale" .. Rohit hit his shoulder laughing while Parth resumed to his previous gawking. OHHH! Naughty possessive Parth is my favourite kind of PARTH!!
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AND THE HOST IS FINALLY ON THE FLOOR.. The DJ announced as Parth yanked around Vidushi and grabbed her waist pulling her close. The dance area erupted into deafening cheers and wolf whistles as Parth snaked his hand in her hair and pulled her into a searing kiss Somebody likes PDA!😆
. Nibbling her upper lip, he swayed on the sand trying to get the most of her lips that played havoc with his already destroyed senses.(Typo- changed sense to senses!) Mashing his nose into hers, he angled his head deepening the kiss. Vidushi clutchedat his shirt as he bit her lower lip hard dissolving her moan in the music. Taking her lips back into an urgent kiss, he engulfed her waist in his arms reducing every distance. Vidushi dug her nails more into his shirt, as Parth lifted her off the ground and took a swirl, on the spot, with her lips still sealed. That's me 😲 gawking at my laptop screen!
NOW THAT'S SOME INTENSE DANCE MOVEEE.. The DJ announced again as Parth came back to the spot and broke the kiss putting Vidushi down. The cheering increased and Vidushi took hold of his hand trying to steady herself and her erratic breathing. She looked up and found him grinning and breathing heavily.
"Whoaa.. Okay.. What was that for?" Vidushi asked panting.
"You were giving too much attention to the guests." He breathed heavily.
"So?"
"So.. I am an Eager Kid. I snatched the attention bac." He laughed, still breathing heavily, as Vidushi gaped at him.😆 I'm gonna die!
"Kid..??!!.. High on whisky haan?" Vidushi chuckled. Holding her waist, he pulled her back to him.
"Nope.. I am immune to that. You are the one that takes me to a high. Top it with a knotted shirt and hot pants. Have Merrrcyyy" Parth whispered in her ear. Vidushi blushed and kissed him lightly near his lips.😳
"Lets go..!!" Parth murmured against her cheek.
"The guests?"
"They are not KIDS. They can entertain themselves. It's me who need special attention." Parth winked.😳 Attention eh? *GIGGLE*
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Vidushi blushed and entwined her fingers in his as their friends gave teasing howls seeing them leave the dance area. Walking through the cottages, Parth cornered Vidushi behind a cottage. Trapping her against the wall, Parth cupped her face intensely and breathed, "You know I love you right?" 😳😳 Aww! he said the L word!
"Hmm" Vidushi nodded her head rubbing her nose on his cheekbone.
"Hell.. I even lust you" Parth murmured along her jaw line as Vidushi arched her face more towards her lips. And the other L word too!😆 jackpot!
Moving his index finger down her neck through her heaving chest, he brushed her navel. She took a sharp breath as his finger travelled to the right. Vidushi grabbed his face as Parth groped her waist tightly. "Parth" Vidushi whispered breathlessly, as she gave in to her desire and pulled his face towards her.😳 I'm a tomato now!

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Her eyes snapped open in desperation as she could feel his breath but not his lips. Her heart beat accelerated as Parth had stopped at a thumb distance from her lips. His gaze intense and steady on her lips, he brushed his thumb on them. Stroking her lips, he looked hungrily into her eyes. Vidushi closed her eyes as he leaned it. 😆😆😆 He's being a tease!
"What?.. What the hell?" Vidushi breathed exasperated as Parth had moved away from her with his back on her.
"Parth" she whispered breathing heavily. "Are you okay? What's wrong?" she asked as he just stood there breathing heavily with no response. Tensed with the sudden change, she moved towards him. His body stiffened as Vidushi touched his shoulder. Vids's concern for him😭 so beautiful!
"Par... Mmm", Vidushi moaned as Parth had sharply turned around and pulled her into an aggressive kiss. Breaking the kiss, Vidushi asked stunned, "What.. what just happened?" Grabbing her waist to painful tightness, he pulled back her head and bit the hollow of her neck hard. "Ouchhh", she moaned. Licking all the way upto her chin, he pulled her head back and smirked, "Pay back time. You always tease me and make me crave. This time it's my turn." Before she knew, Parth had clamped her mouth into a hard rough kiss. Walking back he pushed her to the wall and grabbed her face. Vidushi opened her mouth to match up the intensity but things got worse as Parth invaded her with a desperate need to taste her. Everything seemed futile, from clutching his shirt to pulling his hair, as Parth pulled her lower lip and bit it hard.*fanning myself* Boy is it hooot in here!!
"Parth".. "Vids" .. he rasped as he picked her up and Vidushi wrapped her legs around him. Stretching her shirt down her shoulder, Parth gave open mouthed kisses on her chest and collarbone. His stubble had always unleashed torture on her senses but his intensity was screwing up everything this time. Unable to take it anymore, she pulled back his collar and bit him hard on his shoulder. She bit him?😆😉 God for her. Teasing btard! HA!
"Arrghh.. Vidsss", he groaned and pulled her head tugging her hair. "You shouldn't have done that." he rasped before attacking her neck with wet kisses. Parth bit the pulse of her neck as Vidushi dug her nails into his shoulder. Still kissing her neck, he moved to the right and grazed her near the ear lobe. Vidushi bit his ear lobe hard trying to survive his assaults. 😆😆😆 LOL! Fighting for control!! Vids!!
"Ahh.. Dammit you don't learn.. Do you?" Parth put her down and pushed her more into the wall. Turning her around towards the wall, he attacked her nape. Biting and sucking it hard, he pushed his hand into the pockets of her shorts and pulled her to him.Intense visual!!
"Aaahh.." Vidushi moaned surrendering her head on his shoulder as Parth rubbed his lips on her neck. Turning her around to him again, he kissed her with pure unabashed hunger. "We are going home", he managed to speak against her lips. 😳😳
"Wh.. what?.. That's 11 kms from here." Vidushi looked at him baffled.
"So.. We are on the beach behind some random cottage. We Are Going Home", he said and moved away.
"Whattt.. This is .. okay shameful of me to say.. But I am an Eager Kid and this is TORTUROUS", she complained. 😆
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"Sit at the back seat", he ordered opening the car.
"What?"
"Sit at the back seat. God, don't you get it.. Distraction" he said frustrated.
"Okay. Fine. Did they mix something in your whisky or what?" she complained sitting in the back seat. 😆Obedient kid!
The car rushed on the road and the temperature of the car rose to dangerous levels as Parth and Vidushi exchanged loaded glares through the rear view mirror. His pressure to the accelerator would increase and so would Vidushi's breathing the moment their eyes would collide. 😳This is so hot! I sighed! I want this!!
"Umm..".. Vidushi opened her mouth.
"Not a word." Parth said through gritted teeth and a dark gaze at the mirror. 😆😆
Vidushi let out a frustrated breath and looked outside the window. Angry Kid!😆
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The car took a sharp turn and Vidushi screeched, "What's happening?.. Where are we going Parth?" Ignoring her, he took the car further and stopped at an isolated place. Getting out of the car, he moved ahead checking the street. 😳😳
"What the hell?... What is this place? Hum yahaan kya kar rahe hai Parth?" Vidushi asked getting out of the car totally frustrated. Moving back to her, he smirked "We Are Home". Vidushi looked at him trying to understand the meaning. And then her eyes widened as the meaning dawned at her. Holding his collar in her fists, she accussed, "You.. bloody.. You played me all this while. Damn, you were teasing me in the car."😆 Naughty kid!
Grinning broadly, he pulled away her hands. Clutching her wrists in his hands, he pushed her against the back door of the car. As she tried to free herself from his grip, Parth captured her lips into a heated kiss. He deepened the kiss as Vidushi twisted her wrists. Licking her lower lip, he reduced the distance between them. Vidushi didn't know when she stopped struggling. Need of oxygen made her gasp and Parth sneaked into the contours of her mouth. Stroking her tongue with his, he let go of her wrists. Forgetting everything, Vidushi pulled him more into the kiss clutching his hair. Tightening his grip on her waist, Parth opened the door of the back seat.😳😳
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Still kissing her, he pushed her back and down into the car. Laying her down, he broke the kiss and twisted back to shut the door. And the moment he turned back, Vidushi grabbed his face and smashed her lips on his as the tease had been hazardous to her patience. Smiling, he let her take over and pulled her up with him on his lap. Parth growled and opened the knot of her shirt as Vidushi bit his tongue. "Damn.. That was.." Parth said breathlessly. "Just the start.." Vidushi said intensely as she ripped apart his shirt.😆😉 GO VIDZZ!!
The window glasses tinkled lightly as the button flew apart. Parth's head went back in sheer pleasure, as Vidushi went all catty on him. Kissing his chest, she bit his nippled hard and moved up giving sharp bites on his neck and jaw. 😳
Holding her face back Parth pushed her on her back and attacked her navel. "Sorry babes... Tonight, it's my night", he said before grazing her navel with his teeth. Vidushi arched as he gave a hard tug to it and marked it in deep red. Kissing up all the way through her waist, she moaned and giggled lightly at the same time, as his stubble rubbed at her weak spot. Pulling her shorts down, he pulled her up and latched the valley of her chest with kisses.😳
"They seriously mixed something into your whisky. I am gonna give them extra tip. What's got into you hubby?" she chuckled panting as she opened his fly. Holding her face possessively, he pushed her back on the seat. Vidushi gasped as Parth arched her hips towards him. "You get into me every time we make love. You are my second chance in love. I can love you all my life. I can lust you all my life." And Parth captured her lips and moans into an eager kiss. 😳



Cheered me up yaar !! I love you :)


Anything for you girl.. This was your idea of dominating Parth.. I guess we should write more intense Parth.. 😆

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