KR ss...Living without life (completed)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys, trying my hands at the first ever kr ss. pls feel free 2 cmmnt even if u dislike it.



"Kriaaa" he shouted from the bedroom. The person came running..."what is it Rey? why r u shouting i was just trying 2 put Ronu to sleep"
"you still havent packed my bag, u know i have 2 leave early 2mrow" answered Kria's husband and the business tycoon Reyaansh Singhania. He was going 2 a business trip to U.S d next day.
Kriyaansh were happily married for 2 years and have a son named Ranveer whom they lovingly called Ronu.


Do let me know if i should continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good concept, pls continue it and pm me.
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nice start... do continue soon
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Nyc concept loved it
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Next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks 2 all 4 ur suppor 😊

The thing that connected Kriyaansh more than anything was dance. while Kria was a professional dancer teaching in a dance institute for Rey it was his passion. But something unexpected was about to disrupt their perfect world.

Chapter 1

Kria was very angry, "u should hve checkd twice before complaining Mr. Singhania. i have arranged everything and now u have woken up Ronu"...who started crying frantically 4 his mother.
On hearing this Rey pouted ..."u only worry abt Ronu and not his father" Kria smiled "This is so not true Rey and u know that".
"Really Kria? prove it" Saying this he pulled her closer by the waist and closed his eyes but Kria clevery gave him the butterfly kiss and fled from there. This time Rey wasnt able to stop her bcoz his 6 months old son was bringing the whole house down.

In the beginning Kria thought he must be very busy actually she tried to convince herself. He did called her after reaching California but that was the last call and it was whole one day ago. "Kria u r being unreasonable he has work 2 do" Neha her bestie told her. But Kria reasond, "its not like that Neha, he should have called to ask abt Ronu if not me. its very unlike him. i dont know what 2 do"
"Just relax am sure he will call by tonite"
Neha suggested that she and Ronu should come and stay with her till Rey is back.
"Sorry Neha i cant becoz if not on my cell Rey could use the landline".

Kria's troubled sleep was disrupted by the ringing of the phone
"Hello Rey why havent u called? have u any idea how scared i was. this is height of irresponsibility"
"Kria Kria relax. this is Maasi what happened is everything ok where is Rey?"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx for pm i would surely add u in buddy list, interesting chapter continue soon n pm me also, r u new in this forum
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks amaira... yeah i am new joined recently...surely will pm u
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Intresting chapter... Continue soon n do pm me when u update :-)
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HAPPY DUSSHERA TO ALL 😊
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Hi frnds ready with the end of chapter 1 and beginning of chapter 2 hope u enjoy

After narrating the whole incident 2 her Maasi and the fact that Rey isnt answering her calls and messages Kria decided that she will go to California in search of Rey and while there would stay with her Maasi.
It took her a few more days to make all the arrangements. those days seemed like years to Kria. "Universeji please show me the way..! please bring Rey back" she cried bitterly.

Chapter 2

Kria opened the sliding doors of the hugely expensive office building belonging 2 Mr. Dinesh Kapur of Kapur Construction.
The receptionist, a young girl asked her "How can i help u?"
"I am here 2 meet Mr. Kapur who is a business partner of my husband Reyansh Singhania" Kria said.
"Pls wait here while i inform sir" she said and went inside while Kria prayed to Universeji "plse universeji this is my last hope help me find my love my life my Rey"
A few mins later the girl came back and informed Kria "Sorry mam sir doesnt know any Reyansh Singhania there must have been a huge mistake".
"But how is that possible i know he was working with this company" kria panicked but no one was ready to listen 2 her.
"No Maasi if u really want 2 help me tk care of Ronu but i have 2 find a job. We cant be a burden on u" Kria argued.
While making regular trips to the California Police Dept Kria managed 2 secure a job at the East West Dance Institute as a dance teacher.

Will update nxt part shortly

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