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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: fairylover
OMG!! I read last 3 updates together n trust me I dint want it to complete... This is not the first time when I am reading Raghav's anger.. his forced kisses and one night stand but this is the first time m loving it... Everything is just perfect.. Kali feels attracted to him and it's common for young girls.. But Raghav paid for it!! Holy shit!! how can he not observe that she is not the hooker... He saw the blood on the bed sheet... Is it too hard to realize that it's her first time?? I guess his anger took over his brain.
It hurts when relationships break but its better to move on than being in a loveless marriage.. The passion was missing in priya-Rags relationship.. M glad she realized it n freed Raghav...

I want Pakhi to find out what happened with Kalpi.. after all they r twin sisters by heart n I am liking their friendship. More than that I do not want Kalpi to forgive him so easily... i liked her attitude of paying him back. She is a killer girl... i wish she doesn't give in now n doesn't forgive Raghav so easily.
Prem is a sweetheart but why the hell he asked money from Raghav.. is it to create more misunderstandings?? I hope it's just to annoy Raghav more n nothing more to it.

Ohh Fuzz u r awesome writer...Right now i was supposed to study n hence i have decided that I will read only one update n will comment later after reading all... but this awesome story forced me to comment not... Now I have to read all ur stories coz I am sure they will be as awesome as this one is. But will read them after 12th.

Thanks Hun... Glad ur enjoying it.

Babes studies come first... Stories are not going anywhere... They will be here... Waiting😆

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

no plz not pregnant.

Its not fair.

some other route.. not this one.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Charu am heading towards heartache and sentiment stuff...

Rags ego is gonna get hurt... N he does not want to hear anything about her.
Am thinking along the lines... She gets pregnant... He does not believe he is the father
Prem steps in
She has a miscarriage

What do you think

Priya u too... What do u think

You show emotions very beautifully so I know whatever you'll show will be good and beautiful. it shall be enjoyed by us. Rags does seem to be egoistic at the moment, so I guess his ego hurting might be reasonable.

But only doubt I have, you were supposed to keep it light; will it remain so then? I mean I am confused since as a writer you have a better vision of the story and characters than we have. So you have a better idea how to portray it. I'll only say do as your heart says, it will come out right. Though I do want Raghav to repent for his mistakes as soon as possible, he must know he spoiled an innocent girl; and he should bear the punishment by whichever means; even if it is Kalpi ignoring him, or anything better. if you go ahead with the pregnancy track then too I guess repentance shall happen, but later.

Besides this way it is only Kalpi again who shall be bearing the punishment and pain without any fault of hers. At the moment, it is Rags who deserves this, not her. 😊 Love you always, and with you.

Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Charu am heading towards heartache and sentiment stuff...

Rags ego is gonna get hurt... N he does not want to hear anything about her.
Am thinking along the lines... She gets pregnant... He does not believe he is the father
Prem steps in
She has a miscarriage

What do you think?

Priya u too... What do u think

I have replied to you of what I think in PM. Hope you like my suggestion! However would prefer not to make it too intense! As we are already still struglin with HMTLMT

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

I hope he thinks back on Maria's word about the bedsheets having blood stains, and I really hope he must feel guilty, and I hope Kalpi ignores him when he sees her, she must not fall weak in front of him, please do not make pregnant, wonder if she will tell Prem the truth, but I am sure she would not want the cousins fight because of her

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rythmicrhea

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Plz dnt make Kalpi pregnant n let Raghav know the truth now n try to patofying Kalpi 😉

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

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Hamsa Anbuselvan

@Ragnaheaven

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Holy cow... I was laughing non stop at the end of part 4 ' only if I had condom'... The story is superb.

I love the way kalpi gave rags money back and thanking him for the service... Waiting for the time when rags knows that kalpu is not a hooker. What will he do... Hahaha...

Only one thing I'm sad u left out the details of the love making😉