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Posted: 10 years ago
Yess!! I love the turn this story has taken...
Let Raghav be the one to cry in pain...
I dont want Kalpi to give in at all even if she falls in love with this crazy obsessive stud.
Stallion he maybe but I want him to trot and prance around Kalpi for a decade before she decides to forgive him.
If you want to make it dark from here on make it. Now that its clear to him who she is, lets get back into the brooding, sadist zone that you love and adore so much. 😉

ps- I kind of love your crazy intensity and the blunt pains that you exert through your story plots. Rags is obsessive and I want him to be obsessive.. totally go crazy and bonkers. I want Kalpi to keep pinching him about thinking her to be a hooker. she was pole dancing damn it. there is a difference. How could he just come to such brash conclusions?? Now there needs to be some repercussions to his actions. I know, kalpi will also suffer along with Rags but lets play this crazy game of love for a while.
PPS- I hope you have already started typying out Chapter 8.

Dil hai ke manta nahi, Yeh bekarari, kyun ho rahi hai, yeh janta hi nahi ❤️☺️❤️
Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ragnaheaven

Holy cow... I was laughing non stop at the end of part 4 ' only if I had condom'... The story is superb.

I love the way kalpi gave rags money back and thanking him for the service... Waiting for the time when rags knows that kalpu is not a hooker. What will he do... Hahaha...

Only one thing I'm sad u left out the details of the love making😉

mee too...shud hv updated that too...u can edit it...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really Happy with Pace of the 'Updates' ... :P 😆 3 Updates in 24 hours.. am I dreaming??/
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Posted: 10 years ago
one ?...why raghav didnt realized it...priya has to make him undstand...lol...😆
nice update...now waiting for raghavs next step...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg totally totally totally loved this chap. And priya you go girl! Rags got what I call a rude awakening. So now what is majnu dear going to do? I hope he finds her! Thanks for no pregnancy track. She's young these things happen so why bring a baby into the mix. I m excited to see how our obsessed lover makes this up to the girl of his dreams! Waiting for next part so so so so so impatiently. Love u girly and ur brilliant ur mind. I originally didn't want kalpi to give in to rags because I wanted him to feel rejection but I gotta say I love ur approach more this silent slap is worth more than a real one and priya is the sugar on top. 😃 girl I can't stop laughing. Love this love this love this. 😉
Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG Fuzz, this is my fav update so far. Loved Priya so much, must say she is a strong and honest lady. 😃👏 Now that Raghav has finally realised what has he done, I am very happy. Looking forward to him doing rounds of Kalpi for forgiveness. Though I really think this is something unforgivable, not so easy. No girl will forgive it so easily, on top of that he hurt her more by paying her. It seems I shall never get tired of saying this, but so curious and eager for next update please. 😃 Must say you are doing a fab job by updating so soon! n I am loving it. 😃 Looking forward to see a repenting Raghav, and also curious to see will Pakhi and Prem find out real reason of Kalpi's return and her tears.Plz-2 try to update soon. 😃
P.S.: Thanks for doing away with the pregnancy and unnecessary pain track. 😃🤗
Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmm lovely now rags will know wat he done t a young girl n make him realise he love kalpi you take your time t show it as it will be fun t see him doing crazy things in rag singhania style t win kalpi
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved this update. Especially the way Priya questions Raghav and makes him realize that he was more attracted to her without having the feeling that she was a hooker or nor. Now he will realize his mistake and it would be interesting to see how he goes about and apologizes to Kalpana.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear❤️❤️love priya and how she relaises rags what he has donewating how raghav repends for his mistakes and how he comfort kalpi👍🏼update soon🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Simply loved Priya even though she felt bad for breakup but she made Raghav realised his mistake, now I Raghav should be in guilt and try hard to get forgiveness frm Kalpi. Waiting to see what Raghav does to rectify his mistake.

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