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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

awesome update...raghav to thodi akkal de do...😕

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome update❤️

hope raghav knows truth soon
continue soon🤗

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

OMG!! I read last 3 updates together n trust me I dint want it to complete... This is not the first time when I am reading Raghav's anger.. his forced kisses and one night stand but this is the first time m loving it... Everything is just perfect.. Kali feels attracted to him and it's common for young girls.. But Raghav paid for it!! Holy shit!! how can he not observe that she is not the hooker... He saw the blood on the bed sheet... Is it too hard to realize that it's her first time?? I guess his anger took over his brain.

It hurts when relationships break but its better to move on than being in a loveless marriage.. The passion was missing in priya-Rags relationship.. M glad she realized it n freed Raghav...

I want Pakhi to find out what happened with Kalpi.. after all they r twin sisters by heart n I am liking their friendship. More than that I do not want Kalpi to forgive him so easily... i liked her attitude of paying him back. She is a killer girl... i wish she doesn't give in now n doesn't forgive Raghav so easily.

Prem is a sweetheart but why the hell he asked money from Raghav.. is it to create more misunderstandings?? I hope it's just to annoy Raghav more n nothing more to it.

Ohh Fuzz u r awesome writer...Right now i was supposed to study n hence i have decided that I will read only one update n will comment later after reading all... but this awesome story forced me to comment not... Now I have to read all ur stories coz I am sure they will be as awesome as this one is. But will read them after 12th.

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diya

@ragnaareangel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

awesome update

ragz is so disgusting he paid her for night

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Oh gosh I am afraid to look... 😆

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U n me thinking on the same lines while u were updating wow!!!! Makes me feel spl!! Hmm so now I think I can enter ur head!! Sigh wish I could do that then all i had to do was enter ur brain in my sleep and read the updates from there. Would not have to bug you then!

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UBMNP6x3PA4#t=10[/YOUTUBE]

I love bugging you because you are so buggable oops i meant lovable!!!! He He😆

Edited by priya_remix - 11 years ago

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Give me moreee!!!!! Or else I'm gonna keep on bugging you!

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Why did you have to leave it here! 😭 Loved Kalpi's reaction/action to Raghav's action. It was hilarious to see Raghav paid for his own services! 😆 Now please update it asap, and let him now what he did! BTW its the height of dumbness not to realise he did it with a virgin!😲 I mean...really!!!! I have never come across such a stupid man! 🤢 The part where Kalpi is emotional and on the verge of tears was written so beautifully. hope Raghav bears the brunt of his actions soon; and I doubt since he is addicted to Kalpi now, he can live without her.

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Give me moreee!!!!! Or else I'm gonna keep on bugging you!

Am at work... Will update at lunch break

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Why did you have to leave it here! 😭 Loved Kalpi's reaction/action to Raghav's action. It was hilarious to see Raghav paid for his own services! 😆 Now please update it asap, and let him now what he did! BTW its the height of dumbness not to realise he did it with a virgin!😲 I mean...really!!!! I have never come across such a stupid man! 🤢 The part where Kalpi is emotional and on the verge of tears was written so beautifully. hope Raghav bears the brunt of his actions soon; and I doubt since he is addicted to Kalpi now, he can live without her.

Charu am heading towards heartache and sentiment stuff...

Rags ego is gonna get hurt... N he does not want to hear anything about her.

Am thinking along the lines... She gets pregnant... He does not believe he is the father

Prem steps in

She has a miscarriage

What do you think

Priya u too... What do u think