Daag 1 : Woh Lamha(That moment)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an eeventful day it was, Sahir pondered over the happenings of that day, and took out his journal and made an entry.
"Aakhir kya tha us Lamhe main, kya khaas baat thi us ajeeb o ghareeb ladki main, us ka woh sehma sa chehra, woh pak aur masoom dua, kyon mere zehan main bas gayi.Mujhe pata hai ki har masoom chehra ke peeche sirf fareb aur kalik hoti hai lekin kuch Muqtalif tha us manzar main, dil ne ek baar phir aitbaar karne ki guzaarish ki hai. Aaj phir kalam uthane ki sifarish ki hai."

Rafta Rafta zindagi ne bana diya mujhe Faqeer.
Mohabbat aur Sahir Jaise mutawazi lakeer.
Baaqi hai na koi Hasrat na Aarzoo,
Sahir dafna chuka hai , woh chahat, woh justujoo.
p.s. Mutawazi Lakeer =Parallel lines
Justujoo= desire, search or quest.
I will try to translate, :)
" What was so special about that moment? what was so special about that weird girl? her worried face, that pure and innocent prayer, made an impression on my mind. I know that behind every innocent face there is duplicity, deception and darkness. Yet there was something different in that scene. Heart wants to trust once more, it wants me to write today."
Slowly slowly I have become a faqeer(Beggar)(Though he is very rich, yet a beggar in love and other non materialistic things in life)
Love and Sahir are like parallel lines(He will never fall in love, it will defy logic)
He doesn't have any desires or wishes.
He has buried them all.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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After a fascinating turbulence the flight finally LANDED.

Aarzoo LANDED in hot water after Sahir caught her white lie.

And Oh Boy, what was with the looks that he gave her, those, soft curious looks... Will these emotions LAND him in trouble?

Sarfaraz LANDED up with a lady like Farah, Just for a male child? I hope Humsafars doesn't LAND in copyright trouble because that story has ZGH written all over it.

What a LANDING(I mean entry) of SAC it was, HC emotes with his eyes, his body language says it all, Those menacing looks of shark can kill.

Jahanaara's dress LANDED with SAC, so we already have ArSa's wedding dress. <3

Humsafars LANDED with some new characters. So Far, So good. They are good actors. Plus they have a role to play.

So Arzoo also LANDED in the auction and saw the shark in action.

The guy LANDED in trouble for asking unnecessary questions to shark, It's none of their business.

Aarzoo somehow LANDED at NARIMAN POINT while her luggage was missing.

Shiraz will LAND in Dubai, maybe not.

So bro Zaki will LAND with the coveted job while Anam will be left Stranded.

How on earth did Farhan Miyan from QH LAND in Humsafars? he looks good.

How did 75 lakhs ki gaadi LAND in Mumbai in less than 3 hours?

Note to Zara: Gaadi 75 lakhs ki hai na ki 70 lakhs ki.

Aarzoo wanted to come to Mumbai and be successful because he wants to prove it to her dad that a daughter can fulfill her parents' dreams, aspirations and be successful without a male in her life. Maybe that was the reason that she was very excited after LANDING in Mumbai.

I would rather not talk about her barefoot LANDING in the Chaudhary Villa. Not a very smooth LANDING.

Maybe contrasts should be subtle and not so in the face types? Do we underestimate the sensibilities of the audience?
p.s. It is Assalam_u_Alaikum and not Salamwalekum.
Edited by gossipgirlxoxo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice👏
Am waiting for tomorrow to see if Aarzoo peeks😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

What an eeventful day it was, Sahir pondered over the happenings of that day, and took out his journal and made an entry.
"Aakhir kya tha us Lamhe main, kya khaas baat thi us ajeeb o ghareeb ladki main, us ka woh sehma sa chehra, woh pak aur masoom dua, kyon mere zehan main bas gayi.Mujhe pata hai ki har masoom chehra ke peeche sirf fareb aur kalik hoti hai lekin kuch Muqtalif tha us manzar main, dil ne ek baar phir aitbaar karne ki guzaarish ki hai. Aaj phir kalam uthane ki sifarish ki hai."

Rafta Rafta zindagi ne bana diya mujhe Faqeer.
Mohabbat aur Sahir Jaise mutawazi lakeer.
Baaqi hai na koi Hasrat na Aarzoo,
Sahir dafna chuka hai , woh chahat, woh justujoo.
p.s. Mutawazi Lakeer =Parallel lines
Justujoo= desire, search or quest.


😃 Sweetheart,
Could U translate that for me...😳

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

After a fascinating turbulence the flight finally LANDED.

Aarzoo LANDED in hot water after Sahir caught her white lie.

And Oh Boy, what was with the looks that he gave her, those, soft curious looks... Will these emotions LAND him in trouble?

Sarfaraz LANDED up with a lady like Farah, Just for a male child? I hope Humsafars doesn't LAND in copyright trouble because that story has ZGH written all over it.

What a LANDING(I mean entry) of SAC it was, HC emotes with his eyes, his body language says it all, Those menacing looks of shark can kill.

Jahanaara's dress LANDED with SAC, so we already have ArSa's wedding dress. <3

Humsafars LANDED with some new characters. So Far, So good. They are good actors. Plus they have a role to play.

So Arzoo also LANDED in the auction and saw the shark in action.

The guy LANDED in trouble for asking unnecessary questions to shark, It's none of their business.

Aarzoo somehow LANDED at NARIMAN POINT while her luggage was missing.

Shiraz will LAND in Dubai, maybe not.

So bro Zaki will LAND with the coveted job while Anam will be left Stranded.

How on earth did Farhan Miyan from QH LAND in Humsafars? he looks good.

How did 75 lakhs ki gaadi LAND in Mumbai in less than 3 hours?

Note to Zara: Gaadi 75 lakhs ki hai na ki 70 lakhs ki.

Aarzoo wanted to come to Mumbai and be successful because he wants to prove it to her dad that a daughter can fulfill her parents' dreams, aspirations and be successful without a male in her life. Maybe that was the reason that she was very excited after LANDING in Mumbai.

I would rather not talk about her barefoot LANDING in the Chaudhary Villa. Not a very smooth LANDING.

Maybe contrasts should be subtle and not so in the face types? Do we underestimate the sensibilities of the audience?
p.s. It is Assalam_u_Alaikum and not Salamwalekum.



Hamare...apne.. Farhan Miyan in HS...😲..may be to haunt U...😈😆

Hey, but this was nice...god knows when he will reappear after this.Atleast one actor has no payment issues.😉😆

What I loved:

Arzoo's first day in Mumbai: All the excitement of starting a new life...moving towards her dreams...can connect with it.😊

SAC's entry: 👏


Anam: I bet thismust give Geet feels...😆...(caught some few scenes with the vamp there)- Loved Anam's getup...ruthless, power hungry SIL-check. I loved the pairing with Farhan . (Its going to take some time to learn all the names..pardon me...😃)

Abbu: Very practical man.😆 Would I get near my daughter to get insulted? Nope.😆 (Yeah. Some copyright issues there...)

Arzoo's entry in Chau Villa: Not the tiptoeing bit...just the moment she chose to enter...straight into a saas bahu tiff.👏😆

Ashrafi: Looks like he has earned his screen space! 😉



Could do with improvement:

Arzoo should have talked to all her family members, and not just ammi...that is what U expect!

Didn't get the point of why Arzoo had to follow him to the auction... if it was to know his khadoosness...she has plenty of opportunities coming up...

God! Why would U want to show those dirty footprints? 😕 Unless SAC is to come and scold her about it, which I don''t think he is about to! So, this must be to tell us that Arzoo shares some characterestics with Khushi behna and Zoya behna... too bad she did not get inspired by Sanam bhateeji! 😉

Hey! But I am loving ittt!!!!

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank god i landed here

🤣

waise did u notice sahir did not touch the car door...is it symbolic with regards to his characterisation?🤔

or i'm reading too much into his actions🤔


frankly i feel...aarzoo littering the entrance has to do something with sahir in future...donno what...but aarzoo is pretty careless about a lot of things...whereas we find sahir to be very particular abt a lot of things...

another contrast...maybe?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnuMP

Nice👏

Am waiting for tomorrow to see if Aarzoo peeks😆

Thanks Anu,
Eye Candy, so peeking is allowed. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


😃 Sweetheart,
Could U translate that for me...😳

🤗

Translation cheez hai Kya,
aap jaan lijiye...
bas ek baar mera kaha maan lijiye...
DONE !!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's beautiful Amber!! You are such a wonderful writer!!!👏
And you know I was thinking that I'll request you to write your famous one word post again for Humsafars. Today I just got it😃
Thank you🤗
Connection isse kehte hai😉
Please keep them coming😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah!!... Awesome post dear 👏
Tussi to cha gaye... the words... the thoughts... Phew!!!
Loved every bit of it ... especially the way you named the post as Daag.

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