Zaya FF 'Pain In Love' Last Part pg 82 [15/12]

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#241

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Seems interesting!
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It was fabulous as always 😊
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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA
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plzz continue soon..

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Originally posted by: neenzz
Part 1:
5 years pehle ka secret, intersting! I know it's something between aaliya and zain, did she leave because of zain? I wanna read more now!

Part 2:
In the character sketch u introduced her as aaliya hamid haider, but then in part 2, u wrote aaliya ghulam haider. I'm confused!😕
Aww! Zain bumped into Aaliya, and was mesmerized by her beauty! *giggling* cute! ❤️
Now the professor will ask aaliya to sit beside Zain, won't he?
Yes, he did! *excited*👏
Wait, weren't aayat and barkat a year younger? Then how are they in the same grade as everyone else, were they smarter?
I didn't know school may apnay introduction k saath apnay father ka bhi introduction detay hai... Lol! Jk!
'kitne mohabbat karte tha na bhaijan aliya se, unke liye to bhaijan ne abu takse jhagra kiya' said barkat sadly
I was eating a samosa, and woh mere halaq may atak gya, my eyes, wide-open
Kya- mohabbat-jhagra? Meri tou saari theory bawadi may gayi! I thought while reading the first part that aaliya left because she used to love Zain and he didn't, or maybe onkay beech kuch hua (as in something romantic,) and both loved each other, but before Zain could tell her, she left.
My new theory:
Aapne usmaan ko bura bana diya, greedy, i know ossi nay aaliya ko majboor kiya hoga!
Aww, Zain loves her so much, poor guy!
"Ab me woh aaliya nhi rhi!" Ekta kapoor ki boht bari fan ho kya aap? Jk

Part 3:
Sonia gandhi... Lol 🤣 that would be Aaliya, i guess 😕
Yes, that's her! I imagined her in that holi outfit. I know it wasn't green, but that's just what came to my mind!And Zain in the eid sherwani
Shaadi ki? Haha sub say important question 😉
Woah! So much attitude! Suits her 😛
And love the way all 4 were looking at her... Actually mere dimaag may full movie chal rhi hai
Najma? Aapne yeh AsYa per likha tha pehle?
Aaliya sweating at the mention of osmaan, mera theory per mera yakeen barhta ja rha hai
I don't trust her story, aise koi thori itna rich hojata hai. Kya osmaan ne Aaliya ko paisay diye hogay? Offer kiya bhi ho tou woh kabhi accept nhi karegi, phir kya hoga?
Aww flat tire, ab Zain ko oska address pta chal jaayega at least😃
Uh oh! Ab tou pakka osmaan say related hai oski jaanay ki waja

Part 4:
Finally, khulasa!
I was so right! But i ain't happy about it :(
I don't think she'd keep his money after such allegations, she would find a way to return it asap! Bot how?
Ugh... Now that i know it was about asya, mere dimag ka tv pagal hogya hai, kabhi surbhi aarhi hai or kabhi pree... Lol
Phir say asad likh diya aapne 😆 no worries
Nooo!!! Aaliya is engaged to rehan 😭
Phir say harsh ki jaga KSG... Me kya karoo iss dimag ka [:@]
Nice chapter aaroo... Karma's a bitch😈

Part 5:
Sorry couldn't stop reading, so won't comment on every part
The hug; it must have been so painful for zain, and then that stupid rehaan, apne haath ko kahi or masroof rkhay na, aaliya ki waist he mili hai kya? Bewaqoof
Shaadi in 1 month?! More than upset, I'm hopeful, qk ab yeh qissa jaldi khatam hoga
Good that Zain agreed to go to the dinner, ab waha kya garbar hogi? Gonna start the next part now

Part 6:
I so knew he would kiss Aaliya on the forehead 😡
Inni si choot pay itna bawaal, ismay drive krnay may kya problem jogi, seedhay seedhay bolo aaliya zain k saath akele time spent krna hai.. 😉
Really liked their coffee convo! Will she really tell him the truth now? I don't think she'll tell him about usmaan, maybe about her father's condition, but not what osmaan did!

Sorry for such a long comment, i just read all the parts together, and i had to let u know how i felt 😊
U're a good writer, really! Please pm me the next update :)

lol itna bada comment 😲 😳

Part 1 sure go on 😳

Part 2 oh..my mistake will correct it soon..sowwy..its Aliya Gulam Haider...
they r younger...actually i m not a uni student so have no idea about all this but had red in many stories that at first daye everyone attend a class together and introduce themselves so...😳
lol..ap bht akalmand ho..must say 😃...bht acha catch kiya...
no i m not an ekta fan..actually aese lines mjhe bohat ache lagti hain...

Part 3haye...maine Najma likha? mai asya mai itne ziada pagal hn k har story mai unhe khech lati hn 🤪
hmmm intelligent...lets see 😉

Part 4lol don't worry ye maine editing mai thodi mistakes kardi..next time se dihan rakhunge 😳
yeah she is!!

Part 5lol itna hare rehan se 😆

Part 6haha good guessing...u ll knw in next part 😉

it's ohkie... in fact i loved your long comment...thanks a lot...will pm u for sure...umm ur name?

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salam all...scroll down for next Part

PART 7

'actually mai khud nahe janti k 5 saal pehle mai kyun chale gaye" her answer made him very confused 'kiya matlab tum nahe jante?' he asked not getting it 'abu ne bhopal chodna se pehle na hi mujhe kuch bataya na hi is silsila mai mera koi suggetion liye, unhone bus faisla liya or mjhe wo manna tha' 'mai nahe manta, uncle aesa kaisa kar sakte the, or agar aesa hi tha to tumne huma bataya kyun nahe?' he denied making her think for a while which did'nt went un notice by zain and then she replied 'wo...wo darasal jab tum mjhe result function k bad drop krke gaye the tabhi mujhe pata chala, abu ne mera mobile bhe leliya or hum agle din ki subah delhi chala gaye' 'phir tumne kiya kya? tumto kehte the na k tumhare abu kabhi kise se help nahe lete to tum apne mamo k ghar kyon rahe?' he asked

'humne aesa khud nahe kiya tha, delhi jana k bad maine bht time job search ki and finally mujhe job mile lakin mere mamo ki company mai.. unho ne mujhe apne sath chalna k liye kaha par maine mana kardiya lakin phir unhe nai mere bio-data se mera address dhonda or huma lene a gaye, unhone bht request ki jiski wajah se mjhe unki bat manni parhi' isiliye aj tum unki company mai itne important post par hona?' he asked 'nahe, aesa nahi hai, maine apne mehnat se ye sab hasil kya hai, mamo to kabhi nahe chahte the k mai kam karo lakin mai mamo par dependent nahe reh sakte the, maine ek employ ki tarah hi ye company join ki the, ye mere mehnat ka result hai k aj mai is status par hun'

'agar tum kabhi apne mamo par dependent nahe rahe to phir tumne rehan se engagement kyun ki?' 'kyun ki unke hum par bht ahsan hain, mujhe 4 saal laga is post tak pohanchna k liye lakin jab mere pass kuch nahe tha tab mamo ne mere madat ki, abu ka proper ilaj karwaya to mjhe unke har ahsan ka badla to chukana hi tha na' 'iska matlab tumhe rehan se nikah k liye force kiya ja raha hai, tumhe...'she interrupted him 'aesa kuch nahe zain maine apna har faisla apne marzi se liya hai koi force nahe hai mujh par...' she explained 'kiya tum rehan ko pasand karte ho?'

'shayad han or agar nahe bhe karte to karne lagun gi kyun k mujhe apne pure life ushi k sath spend krne hai' they both were silent for a minute but then zain stood up 'i think mujhe chalna chahie...' she held his hand stopping him and made him sit down 'zain please abhi mat jao, tumhare chot abhi taza hai, tumhe yad hai na final year mai ise tarah tumhare hath par chot aye the or phir bhe tumne driving ki the to tumhara accident hogaya tha' she said making a puppy face to stop him and he smiled on that 'come on aliya wo ek chota sa accident tha and itne choti baat tumhe ab tak yad hai'

'mujhe apne sare doston ki har bat yaad hai, tum logon k sath to maine apne life k best time spend kiya hai or mai us time ko kabhi nahe bhol sakte kyun k in 5 saalon mai jab tum log mere sath nahe the to sirf tum logon ki ye yadein hi the jinhe soch kar mai akele mai muskurati the' 'mai nahe manta tumhe sab to yaad nahe hoga' he smirked 'mujhe sab yad hai Mr.Zain Usman Abdullah' she sid confidently 'nahe nahe nahe, sab nahe or agar sab yad hai to hojae ek quiz?' 'quiz? r u mad?'

'Q dar gaye agar sab yad hai to mai hum sab k bara mai jo kuch pochon tumhe sab batana hoga' 'or agar maine sab bata diya to?' 'to mai man jaonga k tumne sach hum sab ko bht miss kiya hai' ohkay done'

Zain;-barkat ka favourite subject konsa tha?

Aliya;-maths

Zain;-hum sab kis professor ki class bunk krke movie keliye jata tha?

Aliya;-professor Shazia or unki boring history

Zain;-rizwan ne ayaat ko kab propose kiya tha?

Aliya;-prom night

Zain;-zubair ka favourite actor?

Aliya;-salmaan khan

Zain;-barkat ko kis cheese ka craze hai?

Aliya;-dance ka

Zain;-do u know k mai kis larki ko pasand krta hun?

Aliya;-itna easy? ofcourse m...' she paused and looked away on which asad smirk 'i mean ofcourse koi nahe'

'hmmm, ab mujhe yakeen hogaya hai k tum huma bht miss krte the but tumne ek answer galat diya' zain said 'ko...konsa?' she asked feeling uncomfortable 'yahe k mai kise ko pasand nahe krta, well is mai tmhare galti nahe shayad tumhe malom nahe is bare mai' he answered 'to kiya tum sach mai? pretending to be normal 'kisse? batao na please' 'bohat jald bataonga' 'sach?' 'han or kiya ab mai ja sakta hun?' 'par...' 'please aliya i'll be fine and mai ghar pohanch kar tumhe call bhe karunga' 'promise?' 'promise' and finally he left leaving a tense aliya behind,

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he left her house 10 mins before, while driving towards home a smile was playing on his face 'Aliya Gulam Haider, tum nahe janti k jab tum jhoot bolti hoto to tmhe pakarna bohat asan hojata hai, i know k aj tumne mujhe jo bataya wo sach tha lakin pura sach nahe, tum kuch to chupa rhe ho, or ab mujhe is bat ka yakeen hai k tmhare bhopal chodna k pecha koi wajah hai or ye bhe k tum mujhse mohabbat krte ho, ye tumhare ankhon mai saf dikhta or ab mai apne tarika se tmse ye sab qubool karwaoga, just wait and watch' he smirked as if he is having a plan...he reached home in 20 mins and his first attempt was to inform aliya

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she was moving here and there in her room restlessly when her mobile rang and screen flashes name of zain, she received it in one bell

'hello zain, tum ghar pohanch gaye? rasta mai koi problem to nahe hue na? tum theek ho?' she said in one breath

'aliya, aliya, aliya , take a breath, kitna bologe ek sath, mai ghar pohanch gaya hun, safely, now relax' a reply came from the other side on which she sighed with relief

'ALLAH ka shukar hai'

'acha ab kal office mai milta hai, bye'

'bye'

she hung up the call and then lie down on her bed "mai janti hun k shayad aj mai tmhe convince kr nahe paye kyun k tum mere ankhon mai parh sakte ho k mai sach keh rhe hun ya jhoot, lakin maine tumhe sab sach bataya hai zain bus ek bat k ilawa k mujhe bhopal chodna k liye force krne wala mere abu nahe balka tumhare dad the, lakin ab batana ka faida hi nahe, tum kuch nahe kar sakte, mere kismat mai rehan likha hai or mujhe uske sath hi apne life spend krne hai to phir mai tumhe sach bata kar tumhara dil kyun dukhao, mai janti hun k shayad tum mujhse mohabbat krte ho lakin bohat jald tum mjhe bhol jaoge' tears formed in her eyes and before they pour down her cheeks she wiped it to not to let them fall otherwise she will not be able to stop them later because she have to be strong, it's in her destiny, she have to forget him.

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'Ya ALLAH mujhe to apne ankhon par yakeen nahe a raha k ye wohi larki hai jise maine zain se dor kiya tha, ye to bht ameer larki hai, ye maine kiya kar diya agar ye zain ki zindagi mai hote to mjhe bht faida hota, mai apne hathon se itna nuksan kaisa kar sakta hun'usman was just lost in these thoughts, he was cursing himself for letting aliya go that easily, he must had got profit if aliya was in zain's life, his thoughts were disturb by suraiya , his wife

'kiya soch rhe hain usman sahab?' she asked 'kuch nahe, buisness ki problem hai' 'kaise problem?' 'tumse kitne bar kaha hai k insab topics par mujhse bat mat kiya karo, tum ek middle class family se belong krte ho samjhe? tumhe insab ke bare mai kiya samajha ayega?' usman shouted at her standing up from the couch angry 'mujhe maaf krde mai to bus...' she tried to reason

'kiya tumto bus? kabhi mere liye kuch acha mat karna humesha nuksan, mujhe afsos hota hai k 30 saal pehle maine afreen ko nahe tumhe chuna tha, mai kitna pagal tha, afreen abu k business partner ki beti or tum mere hi office ki employ ki beti, 2 paal ki mohabbat ka chakar mai pure zindagi barbad krde, tumse mujhe kabhi koi faida nahe hua' he yelled 'bus karain usman sahab, ap bhol rahe hain mere ghar rishta lekar ana wala shaks ap khud the, maine apse nahe kaha tha k akar mere hath manga, or ap us bat ko bhol Q nahe jata, 30 saal hogaye hain humare shaadi ko lakin ap aj bhe mujhe tana dete hain as if it was my fault' she justified herself 'it was ur fault, u trapped me,agar us waqt maina hosh se kam liya hota to aj mjhe itna nuksan nahe hota,ye soch kar k zain k sath bhe waisa na hojae isiliye to maine...' before he continued zain came interrupting him

'kaisa na ho dad? kiya hoga mere sath?' asked zain walking towards him 'mera matlab hai k mai tumhara rishta bhopal ka subse bara business man ki beti se karunga, jo galti maine ki wo tumhare sath nahe hoge' he said laughing nervously 'dad please ap mom se shaadi ko galti kyun kehte hain, apne mohabbat ki shaadi ki the or is mai apko pachtana nahe chahie, apko khush hona chahie k apne wohi kiya jo apk dil na kaha, warna kuch log ap jitne khush naseeb nahe hote' 'ye mere badnasibi the zain, mere is harkat ki wajah se mere abu sare umer mujhse naraz raha or huma kitna lose hua tha business mai agar mai afreen se nikah krta to uske abu humare har tarah madad krte or aj humara status or bhe acha hota magar...'

'dad please,mujhe apki in baton mai koi logic nahe nazar ata, kya paisa or status hi sab kuch hota hai? pyaar ki koi value nahe, jo pyaar mom apse karte hain?' he asked and looked at his mother who was weeping standing on the corner and not wanting to lose his control he decided to leave 'ap kabhi nahe badlain ga'and shook his head with anger and left 'sab tumhare galti hai suraiya ' usman glared at her and then left the room and suraiya stood there crying

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next evening

Zain was in ilyas construction, he came there to discuss something important about there deal, he directly went to aliya's room but did'nt found her there and then he asked to varun about her

'Miss Haider kahan hoge?' 'sir mam mrs kaushalya k sath store room mai gaye hain' 'store room?' 'sir subah se humsab ek important file dhond raha tha par nahe mile to mam khud dhondna chale gaye' 'acha to store room kahan hai' 'straight jakar left k corner mai' 'ohkay'

and he went towards the store room, when he reached he saw aliya struggling with the mess and was busy in her search, he can't see miss kaushalya or anyone else anywhere so he moved forward to help her and while making his way towards her he push the room door and it got close with a *thud* which caught aliya's attention and she looked up with a shock

'Ya Allah zain! ye tumne kiya kya?' she asked 'kya hua?' he asked confuse 'zain ye darwaza sirf bahar se khulta hai' 'kya...?' after a pause 'idea...no problem hum kise ko bulate hain' he suggested 'hey come on ye room floor k end mai hai or sare employs apne kam mai busy hain kon ayega humare help k liye? mrs kaushalya bhe ground floor par chale gaye' she explained sadly 'to hum kise ko call krlate hain' 'mera phone cabin mai hai tumhare pass to phone hoga?' 'han hai' he replied and he took out his mobile from his pocket with a smile but then his smile faded 'kya hua?' asked aliya wondering 'no network :(' 'oh no' 'oh yes'

that's it...hope you guyz liked it, sorry in advance for any kind of mistake...do leave back your response and hit like

as it was a long part i expect long comments from you guyx😳

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