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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: crazygirl4arvi
it was superbbb... !!!!!!
u r a fab writtere yaar !!
i luvd aliya's past waali pov the most 😉
eagerly waiting for the next part...
do update fast dear...

Thank you dear..!!😳😳

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TheShySoul12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: neenzz
Shock? Shock wouldn't describe what i felt, it was so unpredictable, at first when i read he had a son, i started weeping, "why Zain, so u married sanam, why didn't u wait for her!" Is what was going thru my head, then when i completed it, i started crying out loud 😭
Inna bara twist! Why?! Why Renu?!
Btw i read all 4 chapters together! Needless to say, but I'm a fan, pm me when u update this sunday 😊

kya karu yaar i want my story to be different..drama filled and interesting issliye i threw in this twist ..but chill everything is going to be alright ..!!

Thank you ..and yes i will pm you ..!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: zaya143
Its OK renu ... Take rest par next week bhoolna mat yaar ...
Oh avi ab toh unres karde...

Thanks for understanding dear..!!🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: neenzz
Abhi shock say pehli ki kahani per aati hn, it was so romantic, i actually played kabhi jo badal barse, and then read it, and i could imagine the hottness, but then i had to put a censor to my thoughts 😛
And junu sounds so cute, i wonder how much cuter she would look! After all, Zain or Aaliya ka mixture hai, super cute hona tou bunta haina boss!
But please sanam or aahil jese jhatkay ab zara kum maarna, please!

LOL..!!

junu wo tho definitely cute hi hogai ..akir beti kiski hai ??😉😉

LOL okie tokie i will try to keep em to minimum ..!!😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: neenzz
And haan aapki tabiyat ko kya hua tha? U mentioned something about a hospital and medicines, are u okay?

Well thanks for the concern ..i'm absolutely fine now.. i was down with typhoid then..but all izz well now..!!😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
Res.
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Finally, I am Un-resing. Ab Khush? Bohat ..!!!

"Schwarzwaldtarta"

Is there anything called schwarzwaldtarta? 😕 (Sorry If i was wrong but, yeh sunke I am laughing 😆 The name is so funny.) haan hai google karke dhek it is a type of black forest cake..!!!

"nerdy"
Jiju calls you nerdy nah? 😆
Haan tuje yaad hai ???😳😳

"Okay..i will rehan .. i'm surely gonna help you out with this..just tell me, when is it ?"
" Mr.Sheika's PA had fixed the appoint for tomorrow evening "

Kuch din khush thi mein! Yahan per bhi rehaan?
haan ..where ever you go rehan follows..!!😆😆

Mujhe sach mein kuch samajh nahi aaraha 😕

But the chapter was well written 👍🏼👏
Thanch..!!

I'm in red..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
res.
all unres after 20th of sep.Sorry akka!
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I am doing what i told. 😆 It is after 20th only na? 😆 very smart..!! -_-

I dont know where the hell i resed for chapter two. So i am writing this for both 2 and three now.
i wonder tune kiya bhi hoga ki nahi ..!!😳😳

._- Chapter 2 -_.
(Late Unres hai, don't you want it a bit dramatic? 😆)

"Haan..copy right hai mere tum per..!!!"

Aww! I love ZaYa Kit-Kit! See Zainu baby is sooo sweet, He is bleeding and still cares for Aliya!
humara Zain hai hi sweet heart ..!!

"Yup surly we will.. right Rehan?"
Zain said giving in his hand for a hand shake and Rehan nodded in yes

Yahan Per bhi aagaya hai! Dummy Piece! 😡
yes ..he is here too..!!

"sir??sir mei kab se sir bangayi tumara liye?? sir nahi Ayan bolo..PA kya bangayi isska matalab ye nahi ki tu aapni bestie ko parai karde..!!!"

Ab Yeh Zain se jalega, am i right? this guy loves Aliya na?
umm..may or may be not ..muje nahi pata..!!!

"I Feel Like dirt ..."

"I hate you Aaliya Ghulam Haider.."

"Get out ..!!"

Achochhooo 😲 Zain yeh tune kya kiyaaa?
Bechari Aliya, i need to read the next chapter ASAP

go read then.!!😆😆

'medicines ji is not letting me think more to make this more interestingly'
Ab Tabiyat kaisi hai? You're alright?
Ya TT i'm fine now..thank you !!!

_-.Chapter 3.-_

"Brojaannn..!!"

This is awesome 😆 You're good in naming.
Thank you ..Thank you ..!!

"erhmm.. i promise ...this gonna never happen again... i will never ever again gonna let my personal issues effect my professional life..!!"

I wanna know nowww! What is the history geography! What happened, ah! You've put me back to the same state 'Question the whole time'.
nahi nahi ..itani easily nahi batavungi ..!!!

"Alright then .. Lets get start with the work Ms.Haider..i think it gonna be fun to working with you .!!"

he said smirking ..and extending his hand for handshake

"Surely it will"

she gave in her hand ..smirking back at him

This is gonna be fun!

Well Written! Very Good, and you've kept me intrigued.
Thank you ..!!!!!!!!!!

I need to go now! I'll unres the last chapter by 9 30 or so, Kolu Adukanam! Byee!

i'm in red...!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Hello hie bye bye.. mei aagayi ..as promised on sunday with the update..well ye update utana acha nahi aaya jitha mei chahaithi thi ..whatever it is i hope you like it ..my pc is on leave so there was neither proof reading nor typo correcting ..so please ignore all sorts of Typos..hope you guys will have a great time reading my update...Happi reading..!!!

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CH5: She is My Daughter..I Guess..!!

Zain's POV :

"So that is our proposal ..what do you guys think about it ??"
i scudded back into my chair.. throwing a quick smirk at aaliya to which she quickly replied with a glare
"we fee.."
"aloo dear"
before ayan could complete his sentence .Asma ..my baby sister came rushing into the meeting hall..just to be glared by me and rehan ..adored by aayan..and to confuse aaliya ..realizing our glares..she shot few sorry looks at us and stated the reason why she was there..

"how many time have i told you asma..no bragging business in between my meetings ??"

i almost yelled at her
"sorry to disturb you guys..but aloo dear ..there is a little girl waiting for you at the reception with an teen girl who said that the little kid is junoon and she has got boo boo on her leg while playing with boys and .."

aaliya shrieked ..and immediately ran out of the room without even letting chotu complete her sentence...my mind started question up .. why is aaliya look so worried ?? who is this little girl ?? some n number of question started shooting up in my head.. and these can be answered only by aaliya i followed her without wasting a sec..not only me even aayan and rehan came with me

Aaliya POV:

hell man..junu is hurt ..junu is here and what if zain comes to know about junu ??what would i answer him because i never told him that we had junoon ..as soon as i reached the ground floor i saw junoon sitting on the guest couch ..clutching her red knee and crying in pain ..ayat was by her side comforting her.. i quickly reached her..hugged ..then got on to my knees
"what happen darling ?"

"Mi..boo.-boo .."

she said half crying

" i told her that i will fix it but she wasn't okay with it and started crying out loud so i got her ..sorry appi i disturb in between..!!"

aayat said

'No, it's fine aayat * i turned back to junu*how did you get em?"

i asked her in clam tone

"thas boyish phush me mi ..becoz they don't wannas a gil too pla "

(Those boys pushed me ammi..becoz they don't want girls to play )

she pout ..aww..my baby .. i hugged her to my chest ..that when aayan yelled for the first aid ..when the aid was here i was about to put when ayat hurried done it before i could ..looks like she is really guilty about whats happening ..ayan moved ahead and bent down on his knees

"hey junu darling ..is your boo-boo paining bad?"

"Ayu unclu.. nossh..it's ishn't "

(Ayan uncle..no it isn't )

junu jumped into ayan 's arm hugging him tight ..the duo were lost in their own little chatter

"Ahem ahem"

some one 's throat clearing sound caught my attention..that when i tasted bitterness of the reality.. i turned to face rehan asma and zain standing right behind me "Holy sh*t" zain was right behind me...junu got most of her feature from her father i.e., from zain ..expect her forehead and lips ..everything else was totally an xerox of his features..thats whats makes the fear to creeped into my heart .. what if he doubt about junu being his daughter ??? how am i gonna face him..and his questions??? what if he takes away my junu from me???all such fearful questions started raising in my mind ...my thoughts of train was broken by asma's yelling
"kamini ..you never told me that you have a daughter ..!!"
well she sounds to be angry at me for hiding about junu to her ..but come on men how could i just tell her about junu when i know she is zain's sister ??
"Umm sorry about that ..but come on let me introduce her"
i said trying to make the situation easier for me..but zain was in no mood to let me do that ..as he was constantly glancing at junu ..as if he was searching for some answer in her
"Finally ..!!"
asma signed ..i kneed down near junu
"junu dear..this is aunty asma..ammi's friend in schooling ..and asma this is junoon ..my daughter "
"hayieee Ashmi auntu "
junu throwed herself into asma's arms which were open for her to get in ..making her lose her balance a little and making us chuckle.After they broke their hug i turned toward rehan and zain .
"And baby these two are my bosses ..Rehan sir and Lo..*zain smirk at me knowing what i was about to say * i mean zain sir .."*his smirk dropped*
"Hey aaloo if you want you can take an day off as junu is hurt ..she needs you i can handle this"
ayan said..without any time waste asma handed me my handbag indicating to leave.i turned to junu only to see her have a chatter with .."Mr.Zain Abdullah"

zain's POV:

"I'm sholly"

umm so she has a daughter ..who looks.. she looks ..looks ,,strangely like me..wait a sec like Me?Me!wait she looks like me..i stared at the little angel for another minute..her chocolate brown eyes..black hairs ..then my cheeks ..my nose..and her smile..that definitely is "Abdullah's trade mark" smile..does that mean ..wait a minute..all of a sudden i started having the flashbacks of the fateful night when i made her mine..that when realization hit me that she could be.
"MY DAUGHTER"

she is my daughter i guess..!!!

"No it's alright sweetie"

i bent down toward her

"Sho youre Mi's Newie bossy..??"

(So you are ammi's new boss)

she asked me flashing that abdullah trade mark smile once again

"hmm yes..BTW what your name little one?"

i asked her

"Junoon"

she smiled widely

"How old are you ?"

i asked her..i heard someone intake of breath probably aaliya's

" i turnu pour bi thish Desember "

(i will turn four by this december)

Almost four huh? by her looks ..ages and aaliya's face by now i'm 90% sure that she is mine..!!

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Precap:

She is mine isn't she?

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i know i know you guys were waiting for this to happen in this chap..but i felt ki ye chap come out a bit long so issliye i pushed that scene to next chap...i'm sorry for that .. but i promise next wali super romatic hogai ..okay now as you guys know my rule..comments do ..updates lo...so do like and comment .. .it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!

[Pic & gif Credit to it's owner..!!}
Love'
Renu ..❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

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