#6 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! EPILOGUE-P.121*COMPLETED*(24/05)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys ! 😃
Thank you so much for all the love and support guys that i reached the sixth thread of this story !! 🥳 🤗


Clarification :

In this FanFiction and in my all other works, Asad Ahmed Khan is portrayed by the one and only Karan Singh Grover ! ❤️



THREAD 1
THREAD 2
THREAD 3
THREAD 4
THREAD 5

INDEX :

PART 24 - PAGE 1
PART 25 - PAGE 28
PART 26 - PAGE 45
PART 27 - PAGE 64
PART 28 - PAGE 109
EPILOGUE - PAGE 121
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...
oopppsssiii...
gadbad ho gayi asad zoya ke bich me...
hope their misunderstandings get cleared soon...
plzz dnt make sana villan of their luv story...
dnt make their seperation too long...
try to update soon...
Edited by uzma_nayeem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i got 1 page...😉😉

now to the story...

yar what is happening...

zoya was taking such a rash decision...

cant she feel asad love for her... he is someone caught between love and work...

but she is just growing up.. someone should put some sense into her...

lovely update dear...

what is sana going to do now...
Edited by kals82 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I bellaaddyy want the first page
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved


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Unreserved!


Congratulations on the 6th thread! 🥳 Approximately 16 chapters left.


The hot chocolate and coffee moment on the grass was beautiful. She had made his coffee before and sent it via Najma. ❤️


"...Zoya Farooqui is a wonderful 25 years old woman, who is mature, responsible, sensible and the list goes on..."


Finally, thanks to Dr.Khan's unyielding love and dedication.



"He felt disgusted by himself, how could he stoop so low ? He wasn't able to look at himself in the mirror, because he was becoming Akram.

But the worst was that he was hurt by Zoya, not by her words but by the lack of trust she had in him, how could she even think that he had meant those words. Was that all the trust she had in him through the past months ? After all they have been through was that the trust she had in him ? How could she even believe he had left his job, his passion only for pity ? For a responsability that he had to fulfill an that he could have without leaving his job ?! How many women were there in this world who were unwedded-mother but did he marry them all ?! How could she believe taht he was the type of man who would bring every people who he helped to his house ?! How could she believe that he had married her and had brought her to his house only for a matter of pity ?! "


Asad! 🥺 Heartbreaking! Heartbreaking! Heartbreaking!


Zoya! 🥺 The letter was poignant.


"Please give Ammi the phone, Dr. Khan..."


"Dr. Khan, you don't need to worry about me because i'm not your patient anymore."


And we are back to Dr.Khan! 🥺 Very endearing I love intensity. ☺️


"Hey Ammi, please don't scold Asad, he's not at fault, anyways, i couldn't live in that house for the rest of my life, now could i ? I only left because i felt that i needed to and please don't worry about me, i'm living with a childhood friend of mine that i had met again few days ago when we went for picnic..."

@Red: Now that's love!


So the guy was a childhood friend - Interesting!


"It's good that she left ! After all these months she didn't even had an ounce of trust in me ! Good that she left ! Now all i need to do is to get her out of my heart ! It would be easy, after all, out of sight, out of heart ! Now, she means nothing to me ! Goodbye Ms. Zoya Farooqui, it's over !"


No its not over Dr.Khan, it's just the beginning. ☺️ I love this separation because of the intensity that shall follow and because when she returns to him it would be forever.


Sana! 😵 Please stay away from them, they can cause enough destruction themselves a third person isnt needed to this volatile equation. 😆


Update soon! 😳

Edited by p_s05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Story needs drama & u planned a unplanned drama. He pushed her away as he started comparing himself to akram which was shocked for me as well. Zoya took his words wrong & left. She should trust him & fight to him but she was right as well. So separation track started. I have one question. When will they meet again as I don't want both of them in different frames. Asad said good bye to her with his mouth but he never took her out from his heart & same with zoya as well. I don't want sana to take some wrong decision bc of asad changing attitude. She should talk to asad & make him understand that he was not like akram. Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Can I have another one,
P.s. travelling network faltering
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭

Kita roi main padh ke isse 😭

Sana is not doing good and Zoya chali gai 😭

Iss baar only itu sa comment me sad
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Janna pehle congrats 4 6th thread wohooo🥳
OMG what an updt Bano😲
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Daro nahi😆
I m shouting here wid happiness
Dil khush kar dita meri Jaana🤗
Zoya had quires of her past which Asad cleared
He thought he was like Akram no baby u r not😔😲
Zoya i know what he said was hurtful but true main bhi disappoint wid her lack of trust👎🏼
Me singing d song-- Kya hua tera wada...Dagabaaz Zoya😡😆
kya melodramatic ho gayi hun main🤣
but asli maja toh end main aya Zoya left wid a detached letter😲
Asad broke down in front of Sana like a baby😭🤗
Asad declared he will remove her of his heart😲
& Sana is anry on Zoya 4 changing her BFF
Iss kehte hain twist baby👏 humesha Asad kyun uske peche jaye😈😎
dono side se balence hona chahiye😉
I m gonna love this twist bring it on Janna ILu bas🤗 u really rock😎
Seperation track will rock n roll🥳

PS- so she went wid that frnd. I know is bar this guy wont hurt her but I just realised😲 & m angry ki she didn't rusted Asad par 1 barso purane dost ke saath chali gayi knowing she was raped b4 also ab agar phir aisa hua toh kya hoga she is still immature pagal ladki kahin ki😡😡😡


Ho gaya mera love u again😳😆

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG rula diya 😭 .
I'm with team asad...
how could she think of him like that... she didn't trusted him 🥺
hugs 2 my ashu...man is totally broken..
Zoya... ko divorce bhi samaj ayi bt she couldn't understand asad didn't mean it ..
continue soon..
muaahhh Bano... garden scene is lovely...
Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago

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