FF-Chhoti si Aasha- Ch29 & Epi pg 76

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ch 2 pg 5, ch 3 pg 7, ch 4 pg 11, ch 5 pg14, ch 6 pg 17, ch 7 pg 21, ch 8 pg 24, Ch 9 pg 26, ch 10 pg 29, ch 11 pg 32, ch 12 pg 35, ch 14pg 41, ch 15 pg 43, ch 16 pg 46, ch 17 pg 49, ch 18 pg 51, ch 19 pg 54, ch 20 pg 57, ch 21 pg 58, ch 22 pg 61, ch 23 pg 63, ch 24 pg 65, ch 25 pg67, ch 26 pg 68, ch 27 pg 70, ch 28 pg 73, ch 29 & Epilogue pg 76

My last FF Kuch Achhe Kuch Bure (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/641995/kuch-achhe-kuch-bure-ch-24-and-epilog-pg71); many felt ended abruptly, though many of you have appreciated the concept of the story and the epilogue too. I frankly had no idea how to continue the same. Now I wish to write a story, very different from what I have written earlier, a bit more melodramatic, with conspiracies and bitchiness, a bit different from my usual writing style. Let's see how it shapes up….

My earlier ffs were: Thori si bewafai (https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=615869) Kuch Rahen Anjaani Si (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/573991/ff-kuch-rahein-anjaani-si-ch-36-pg111): Contract Heir: https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=536274&T PN. Return of Bani Walia, https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/515481/return-of-bani-walia-note-on-pg-31: :Business Tycoon Jai Walia marries a Mt Abu Girl(https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/486636/business-tycoonjw-marriesfinal-prt-pg64). Mai Apke bina nehi reh sakti hu (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/457994/mai-apke-bina-nehi-reh-updt-pg-11-pt-ix)& Finding Bani (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/469208/finding-bani-ff-part-viii-page-8).

Chhoti si Aasha

Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha
Masti Bhare Man Ki Bholi Si Aasha
Chaand Taaron Ko Chhoone Ki Aasha
Aasmaan Mein Udne Ki Aasha

Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha
Masti Bhare Man Ki Bholi Si Aasha
Chaand Taaron Ko Chhoone Ki Aasha
Aasmaan Mein Udne Ki Aasha
Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha

Mehak Jaoon Main Aaj To Aise
Phool Bagiya Mein Mehke Hain Jaise
Badalon Ki Main Odhoon Chunariya
Jhoom Jaoon Main Banke Baavariya
Apni Choti Mein Baabul Ughaiya

Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha
Masti Bhare Man Ki Bholi Si Aasha
Chaand Taaron Ko Chhoone Ki Aasha
Aasmaan Mein Udne Ki Aasha
Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha
Masti Bhare Man Ki Bholi Si Aasha

Swarg Si Dharti Khil Rahi Jaise
Mera Manna Bhi To Khil Raha Vaise
Koyal Ki Tarah Gaane Ka Armaan
Bijli Ki Tarah Machloon Ye Armaan
Jawaani Hai Laayi Rangeen Sapna

Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha
(Film Roja)

Bani watched her children play in the garden, they were really having fun, happy to have so much open space to themselves, Atharva kicked the ball with all his might, Krishna ran fast to catch it, watching them, after a long time Bani started humming the song automatically, gradually her voice became louder, Atharva & Krishna stopped their game to look at their mother and then both of them break into a jig, pulling Bani up to join them…..Bani after a long time, goes into her past and starts dancing like she used to do with her sisters on this valley near Pune about 6 years after…suddenly Bani stops, she doesn't see her children, she panics and turns around, blood drain from her face, little farther Jai Walia was bending down on his knees, trying to make friends with the children…

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Flashback

Nishikant Dixit lived with his 3 daughters in the outhouse of the Walia Farmhouse. They have been doing so for the last 15 years i.e after his wife died and he decided to move out of Mt Abu with his daughters to overcome her death and start life once again…he was a school teacher and getting a job was not very difficult…he chose this place, because it had both solitude and advantage of being between two big cities Pune and Mumbai, in future he may need either of them for his daughters' studies, careers etc.

After shifting here, Nishikant found that housing was a big problem, the house he stayed in Mt Abu was his own, not too big and not too small, but with a sufficiently big garden…this place being near to the cities, land was expensive as many big industrialists, film stars, politicians had their weekend retreats here, so after hunting many houses he finally selected one, which his daughters somewhat approved, till he saw the advertisement in the local paper, Jai Walia is looking for a good Manager to manage his farm house, Nishikant thought to give it a try as they did not know any people around and the evenings were free, he dropped in on the scheduled date and time and met Jai Walia's masi…

The elderly lady was very much impressed with Nishikant, simple honest looking person, they took instant liking of each other. Masi heard about his life and family and immediately asked him to shift to the outhouse, meant for the Manager free of rent, with a permission to use the vegetables and fruits of the garden for his day to day requirement. The salary was not much but Nishikant was happy, his daughters would have some open space for themselves and whatever additional income he earned would be meant for their higher studies and marriage.

Thus Bani with her sisters Pia, Rano and their father shifted to the outhouse of Walia farmhouse.

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Nishikant was loving and alert father, maybe at times a little too lenient but in some regards he was very strict….the first fruits & vegetables of the farm was meant for the owners, he carefully had them packed and sent to Mumbai, the sisters were not allowed to venture into the main house except to supervise the cleaners and lastly no way the sisters were allowed to come in front of the family & their guests, Nishikant was very much aware that these houses were used by the rich and famous for their secret rendezvous', which did not go with his middle class mentalities, even though he found the Walia family mostly using it for their family gatherings but even then he did not allow his daughters to mix around, as he was already having trouble in containing Pia & her ambitions. Pia, his middle daughter was the best looking amongst his daughters, the most attractive, which she knew and tried to utilize it to the fullest, she wanted the best things in her life but the shortest possible way.

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Bani and her sisters had a happy life, on week days they had the house and its surroundings to themselves. They sang, caught butterflies, ran down the land to the river banks and when Nishikant was not in the house, took a dip in the pool. When the first rains came or whenever they felt playful or happy they sang their anthem 'Dil Hai Chhota Sa Chhoti Si Aasha', amongst the trees and bushes. Gradually they left for college. Bani to a best college in the locality as she had to run her household and help her father in running the farmhouse alongwith his regular job as a teacher, Pia & Rano joined Ferguson College in Pune and came over during weekends. After her college Bani took up a job with her college library as 'Assistant Librarian', due to her love for reading she enjoyed it….

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