Vidarth Poetry collection:Poets and Writer, I challenge you! - Page 3

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

I love your poem, Ash! It's amazing! ❤️

Although I prefer writing, here's a teensy tiny try of mine.

I think it kinda sounds incomplete, but whatever >.>

Not too bad, I hope!

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As always, I watch the rain fall,

I never really used to care.

But now it sings to me of you,

When I never wanted it to.

I wondered if we could move past,

all that we've said and done.

But I see your eyes, I feel the tears slide.

Why is this what we've become?

Originally posted by: DoubleH

I love writing poetry xD And I seriously love this idea of yours *_*

I'm shore what I wrote is nowhere near that amazing poem you wrote. Yes, that was one fantastic piece of art 👏

So. Well. Here's what I managed to write (I'm damn sleepy right now, so I couldn't manage more than this 🤣 ]

You came into my life as a stranger,

Neither had I seen you, nor had I longed for you.

But you managed to see through me, my scars,

Healing the pain, but the marks still remain..

Were we ever even meant to be together?

That question, I dont know why, has no answer.

I look up at the stars and see her, my long lost love,

She smiles at me and says, yes, she's the one...

You weren't my angel in disguise,

Nor were you the perfect one for me.

But you taught me how to love, once again.

You shared my pain, gave me a reason to live...

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

Wow!!

It was beautifully written

I loved Parth's point of view here.

Love the last lines of every stanza.

I love how he's come to peace with accepting her as a part of his life.. As his healer and lover

On a lighter note... I'm bananas over the feelings :)

Fun and pun both intended 😆

Originally posted by: sandhir4eva

👏👏

You are great!!!!!

You wrote such beautiful poetry in your sleep?

👏👏