New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated - Page 29

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

Poor soul

Well now maan is there
Wonder how will she react seeing him 😳



muski kaha ho sweet heart ...

we all r missing u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally catch up all 5 parts Maan really did so bad. I mean seriously wanna slap him hard waht he had done with her. Anyways he sucessdded in catching Geet. Geet is ill. Dont know how much poor soul have to react finding him near her. 👍🏼😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

nice update..

seriously maan needed some doctor's help coz he wasnt normal.. no feelings even when he hears someone insult his own wife.. seriously how stone heart can he be...or was it just a wife to f*** for his desires and give her pain and hurt


same thoughts were in my mind
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Posted: 10 years ago

Both parts ( 4 & 5 ) are awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
going in a right direction. he needs to suffer all the pain geet had gone through in the past due to his cold shoulder to her.
awesome parts
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sangeeta33

I have read muskan di story as well that was mindblowing no doubt but always felt di did notgv proper end but after reading ur story m speechless
supperb maan realised his mistake and wants geet to back in his life and i really love ur diary thing i really cried reading geets pain supperb yaar maan finally meet geet waiting for next part now

thanx alott m glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice. Thanks for updating for us.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 4
awesome update dear...
maan realizing his mistakes n geet's pain after reading geet's dairy...
geet Bangalore me...really feeling bad for geet...usse tho bina kisi galti ki saza mili h...n uske parents chhii i hate them more...apni beti ki help krna tho dur uski baat samjhne ki koshish b nai ki aur usse disown kr diya...ami geet k parents ko b unki mistakes ka ehsaas hona chahiye ye log kaise bach skte h punishment se

hmmm tho maan ko pata chal gaya k geet kaha h...ab maan Bangalore jayega...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 5
awesome update dear...
tho maan Bangalore pahuch gaya...n wo geet k office k bahar uska wait kring but geet office hi nai aai 2 days...geet ki tabiyat kharab h issi liye wo office nai aai...
hmmm tho maan ko geet mil gai wo office aai thi file dene n wapas jate waqt office k bahar behosh ho gai...maan geet ko hospital le aaya...
ab dekte h hosh me aane k baad geet ka kya reaction hota h...
eagerly waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-6

Next morning when geet opened her eyes she felt starange,her surroundings were not the same as her place,last she remembered was that she has gone to office to give a file then how come she is here n that's when when she ralised that someone holding her hand,geet quickly got up n looked towards the person only to get shocked,there was maan sleeping resting his head on bedpost holding her hand near his chest,geet for a while forgot where she was she kept looking a t maan,she didn't knew how to reat for a while she felt she was dreaming n never wanted her dream to end but than,she thought what maan was doing here,n why he came here soo far to banglore,geet was lost in her thoughts n forgot to notice when maan opened his eyes,he lookedtowards geet n carred her head he bought her face closer to her n aske geet r u okh,see fever to abo b h tume,when u were soo ill then what was the need to go office,but seeing no response coming from her he once again touched her forhead n asked geet u okh,kuch chaiye tume mai doctor ko bulaun n geet kept looking at him n slowly nodded no,geet was soo lost in his care,in his worry,there was a time when she used to long for this care n worry but now when she was getting it she wasn't able to belive it,shedidn't knew what to make of maan's changed attitude towards her,she slowly got up n said ji wo thanx for the help,i don't know how i came here,i never wanted to disturb u m sorry.

Geet said maan coming around the bed n held her he bought her near the couch n made her sit,geet u fainted there outside ur office so i bought u here,

My office,but aap wahan kya asked geet confused

Maan kept his head low not knowing what to say

Its okh if u don't wanna tell,i understand its ur personal mattter.thanx for the help ill take ur leave now said geet trying to get up when maan held her hand once again.

He was about to say something when his phn rang it was his mom again asking him to comeback,n he denied.she was pestering him to come back as work was suffering in his absence but maan denied outrightly n kept the phn

U should go back maan,ur work needs u

No geet at this point if sumthing really needs me than its u n our relation

But ur work is important maan n our relation,that's no more there,it ended the day u signed those divorce papers said geet looking down

Nothing is more important than u n our relation geet,i have done this mistake once in past i won't repeat it again,for me nothing comes before u n our relation said maan

Geet was about to say something when again maan's cell rang n maan turned around to take the call

Mom i told u na plss don't disturb me m in mid of sumthing

...

Mom pls i can't talk now

Huhhh geet smilled sadly looking at maan n said quitely,no maan u r wrong,u r wrong our relation n "i" m the last two things in ur life,n regarding the most important things of ur life...,i have realised what r the most important things in ur life in our these 5 years of marriage n now there is nothing left.said geet sadly n left

When turned around after cutting the call there was no geet in the room

He ran down to look for geet but no luck,he again lost her,why the hell he repeats his mistakes again n again,when today he got the chance to talk n clear the things between them he again lost her,maan banged the car feeling frustrated onhis luck,he got his phn out n called his detect9ives asking them to findout about geet wherebouts,her place

Geet came back home totally lost,she was emotionally getting week,she didn't knew what maan wants from her anymore coz knowing him in last 5 years she knew he can't change,he can never change,it hurt her to think about her lonliness but she didn't had any other choice this lonliness was her destiny,n she didn't want to give her heart any false hope,she knew may b she hurt maan with her denial but she was helpless she was nothing let in her heart,it was all broken,n she didn't had it anymore in her to bear the same pain once agin,geet lied inher room feeling exhauseted coz of fever n her emotional tumoil

After waiting for half hour he got all the detail n he rushed to see geet

Maan stood outside geet's apartment wondering what would he tell her

Finally gathering all his courage he knocked the door,after waiting for 5 mins the door opened n there stood a shocked n pale geet

Aap yahan??

Geet plss i need to talk to u plss geet

Maan pls go,there is nothing left to talk,aap pls jaiye yahan se,ye sab kar k aapko kuch nai milega maan pls goo

Plss geet just give me one chance to explain,plss geet all i want is just a chance to plead forgiveness,pls forgive me geet plss,i realised my mistakes 6 months back geet n m living in hell realising all ur pain pls geet

Is it soo easy maan,to forgive all ur pain,its just 6 months for u,but for me its 5 years of pain,of longing,do u even know how i have lived all those years alone waiting for someone who could understand my pain,my longing said geet crying

No maan no there is nothing left anymore in our realtion n i have realised it now soo pls go back plss don't punish urself n me.

I know i was wrong geet,i was always wrong n i also know that my those wrong decisions have lead us here,but pls geet once just once listen what i wanna say

There is nothing left to hear maan,nothing everything is over,sooo plss let me go as i have nothing to offer u..plsss said geet trying hard to not break infront of him she is breaking inside,her resolve of staying away from maan was breaking,all those 5 years of there marriage all she ever wished was to see that same love,tenderness care in his eyes n now when she was seeing all these she didn't wanted to belive on all these,she was soo broken from inside that she wasn't in a condition to take another heart break if maan n his promises turns out to b a lie n nothing more..

She was about to go when maan held her hand n bought her near couch n made her sit hi sat down n kept his head on her lap

I know geet i never gave u any chance to trust me to belive me but still geet pls believe me once i really want to rectify all my mistakes pls geet one chance is all i want from u

I want u back geet,i want a chance to make our relation better,i came here to meet u

Geet sighed hearing him she kept looking down not once raising her eyes

Its no more possible maan

Maan u should not have come here,there is nothing left between us,whatever it was has ended,now nothing can b change it,so pls go back

I wasn't searching u from last 6months to leave u like this n go back geet,i had gone to get u back day after our court meeting but that's when i realised that u left n from that day i m searching for u

But why maan why u want me back?? There is nothing left in our relation infact we r divorced now so now why u want me back asked geet with a broken voice,she didn't knew what maan wanted from her anymore

No we aren't divorced geet

Geet looked shocked towards maan

Yes geet i asked my lawyer to drop down the case from our side,i have denied to divorce u n we aren't divorced

But y maan why don't u want to divorce me, don't u want to move on in ur life.pls maan i understood in these 5years of marriage that i wasn't compatible for being ur life partner,i tried maan i really tried but couldnot become the one that u wanted as ur life partner,i could never make u happy,neither could give u any happiness m sorry for being a failure...

Soo pls maan don't waste ur time here,this is not the palce where u should b,u should go back home n move on in ur life

No geet it wasn't u who was wrong but me,in our realation u never failed it was me who failed.failed to understand ur feelings,failed to give u happiness,security,failed to protect u,i failed at everystep of our relation geet while u were always there for me

Geet i know i was wrong,i took all the wrong decisions in our marriage,never gave u the happiness that u deserved but geet trust me i never did all that intentionally,it was just that i didn't knew how to express myself,but pls geet i need just one chance,just once to win u back,i won't ask u to come back with me till u decide to come back with ur own wish,but geet pls just give me one chance,i don't wanna loose u geet,i i...i can't think of a day without u plss forgive me once pls said maan keeping his head on her lap

I know geet i never gave u any chance to trust me,i know at every step of our relation i have broken ur faith,ur trust in me n our relation but plss geet give me this one chance n i promise u that i won't disappoint u,i promise geet u ll never regret ur decision,plss geet give me one chance for the sake of our relation plss said maan


okh guys that's it for now


will b waiting for ur response,plssscomments n likes if u like the update,the as soon as u guys will give me lotts of comments n likes i ll u pdate the next part

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