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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Banner is amazing 👏
And good start !!
May be they are enemies but still highly attracted towards others.cant wait to see what's in his pocket..
continue soon..

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

I love love live this story
Amazing start
Cant wait for part 2
Lived it 👏

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

OKAY. THE FEEDBACK FOR THIS STORY IS AMAZING GUYS! So thank you! And your reviews are so sweet, they put a huge smile on my face. I answered some questions that a lot of people had below the first chapter on the first page but I'll reiterate it here.

1. NO ONE GUESSED THAT IT WAS AN EARRING IN HER POCKET LOL. You guys, Asad kept her earring for like ever in the showww! :) But the amount of people wondering if it's an engagement ring is too damn high, y'all are getting ahead of yourself there ;)

2. For the lot of you that are wondering about how the POV of this story will be, well, I plan on writing this story only in Zoya's POV until a certain point. It's just the way I am choosing to write this story, you will get an account of what was going on in Asad's head but not until later! You're going to be right there along with Zoya trying to figure out Asad's feelings okay?! I will probably end up doing something thing "Asad's POV Fridays" or something like that at some point where you'll get Asad's POV on multiple events.

3. For everyone wondering what their backstory is, you'll find out in due time! I set up the first chapter to just show the dynamics of their relationship. You'll get more background information embedded in the coming chapters.

4. Sexual tension - HELL YES. There is much sexual tension between our lead pair. I feel like Asad-Zoya always had sexual tension between them, even in the show, but they didn't dwell on it for rating reasons.

5. The inner voice - I AM SO GLAD EVERYONE LOVES THIS. Lol. It's so much fun to write tbh.

Edited by astonm - 11 years ago

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

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Beautiful update, I really like Asad and Zoya convo

Asad , like always a beautiful person inside and attracted to our zoya 😉, mutual feelings was clear from both of them

it seems that Asad know many thing about zoya and she didn't know him well

really amazing chapter, i really like it

thanks for the pm 😉

Edited by radadolcevida - 11 years ago

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

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hay Anjali thanks for PM
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Update it was Amazing
Asad is geym of person
Zoya respect Asad's helping nature
Nikhat getting engage

But what about Nuzut,is there Nuzut in the story?
and Najma entry.
Anjali I want Najma nickname to be "Tamatar" Its cute.
also use 3rd person's POV on some switable part

Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Anjali, this is super duper amazing! I love the way how you describe the characters! KSG <3

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Annie_AsYa

@Annie_AsYa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Oohh lala 😆

Okayy... so I don't really know what to call youu 😆
So I will stick with Astonm for the time being until I get to know 😉

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Alrighty!!!
What do we have here?? 😃

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Clueless !!!
The name says it all 😃

I have read both the chapters and to say I was in Awe would be an understatement 😳

This story is Amazing ...

The writer (You My Love) are so talented 👏

Seriously this kind of work is just excellent 👍🏼

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Your updates are Long and have a lot of information which in my opinion is very useful to actually know more about Zoya and Asad ..

Oh yess ...
The characters ❤️

ASAD !!! 😳
I can imagine him *Literally*
Sooo hott .,. And dreamyy

ZOYA!!! ❤️
The same old talkative and chulbuli Zoya

Love the way you have them portrayed 👍🏼

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This is a wonderful piece ...

P.S. Officially bookmarked by Anni 😃
P.P.S Thanks for the PM 😊

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Love

~Anni

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

This is so amazing !! I'm totally in love with it !! ❤️
And i agree with Humaira that though Asad gave his coat, he at least gave it and taht was cute !! 😆 and this chapter also clarified how Asad is a good himan being ! loved him and his way of thinking !! 😳 ❤️ personally i feel like Asad is in love with her and does realize it, i mean at every point where she's about to go, with a pretext he manages to get her back ! 😉
Absolutely loved the chapter buddy !! ❤️

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

nice update
so zoya finds a earing...in his coat
whoops...she was jealous, when he mentioned girlfriend😉
nikhat is a cutie...
asad is nice guy...loved that he using his knowledge to help people...
so another drive and civil conversation😆😆...very much unlike asya
mr. siddqie...ughh man don't force your wish on your children 🥱...
update soon