ZaYa FF: Our Destiny (Unfinished abruptly) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one dear
plZ zaya facEoff in next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Amazing update
But when us Zaya face off??
Continue soon
Thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Awesome chapter 👏
Update soon 😊
And thanks for d pm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Really awesome chapter...
Zain got to know about their place...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zain ddnt attend the meeting
Awesome update dear 👍🏼
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
really nice
vry well written
pls cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
nice update
waiting for d next part
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Liked the update, waiting for the next one, pm me when u do 😊
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Chapter 7


Place : Bhopal

Aayat : Ammi how can you forgive him? Don't you remember how shattered was appi when he left her all alone?

Shabana : Aayat I know...I know...but...

Zain heard the sound and went near Aayat's room.

Aayat :...but what ammi? U know how appi was shattered...how she cried all her soul out...how she screamed for her love...ammi ...no you cant forgive him.

Zain felt like 100 needles piercing him at the same time. He could imagine Aliya almost 6 months back...

*Flashback*

Aliya: (crying) Zain...Zain...for God sake don't do this Zain...

Zain : No Aliya...this have to happen...we must be divorced.

Aliya : Zain I will go somewhere Zain...I will never come back but don't do this Zain...I wont be able to...

Zain : Aliya...No way...I need Divorce...thats it. I don't care...go where ever you want...Do what ever you want to do...leave me alone with this divorce...

Aliya : Zain...how can you forget those moments we spent together.? The ...

Zain : Now stop this stupid emotional blackmail Aliya ...This words and youe fake tears are not going to work with me...Shed this somewhere else.

Aliya : Zain...hate me...beat me...ven kill me Zain...Dont Divorce me...Please Zain...

Zain : Aliya (Holding her shoulders) What do you think of me? (Picking her up slowly) I am a fool...(Tightening the grip)

Aliya : Ahh...Zain you are hurting me...Zain...

Zain :...Do I look like a fool? (Even more toghtening the grip) I want you get lost from my life Aliya...GET LOST FROM MY LIFE...

Nothing more can make Aliya fall down again in her knees before him...

No more words with her...No more reason to stay... No more place in her heart to get hurt... No more tears in her eyes...No more life I her...

A darkness was over her...the stills and scenes of how she enjoyed her life was waving in her mind...

It was like a hell...a well decorated hell...

The voice of Zain...

Welcome to hell.

The smell of the burnt T-shirt

The Reception...

Every thing is her mind...

I love you Aliya...

The voices were ringing in her ears...

It was too late to realize the real world...Zain was gone...GONE...

No Aliya is lost...Lost in nowhere.

She just got up and walked alone in the street...

A shattered soul.

*Flash back edns*

Zain recalled all her tears and the begging voice...

Shabana : I am not saying I am forgiving him Aayat. (Cupping her face)

Aayat : (Stopped crying) You wont na...

Zain was even more shattered...He couldn't believe...

Zain : (faking a smile) You deserve it Zain.

He moved out from that place.

Shabana : But Aayat see him...see his eyes...I can see the regret...

Aayat : Ammi...but

Shabana : Aayat I know...it will be so hard for us to accept him...But I know him from his childhood Aayat...He needs her...He loves her...

Aayat : But Ammi...How will we say that she is not here and she is...

Shabana : That's what I am thinking...We need to find Aliya...

Aayat : But Appi ...

Shabana : Its time Aayat...We need to build her life again.

Zain is sitting in his room.

Shabana : May I come in Zain? (With a smile)

Zain : Fhoops...

Shabana : Umm...Any problem..?

Zain : No...

Shabana : I need to say something Zain,

Zain : I know.

Shabana :Oh good then, What do u know?

Zain : All...

Shabana : What all...

The convo went like a convo between a school child and a teacher...

Zain : That you don't like me anymore.

Shabana : Who said so?

Zain : You...

Shabana : Oh you were (Holding his ears)

Zain : Ahhh...No...No...leave me...

His phone rang...

Shabana : Take the call.

Zain : No...Not so important.

Shabana : Take it.

Zain : Ok...


It was Mr. Farheen Khan.

Zain : Yes Mr. Khan...

Farheen : Where are you?

Zain : Bhopal.

Farheen : What? Any new deal.

Zain : Yes, My life.

Farheen : What?


Precap : No Precap.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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flashback omg poor aliya
interesting dear
plz continue soon
don't delay
Edited by zaya-firdose - 11 years ago

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