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Emaani.95

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Posted: 11 years ago

WoW!

What an awesome blossom update! LOVED IT.. !!

I loved your way of writing!

And .. ahhh, this was definitely a hell lot better date from what CV's arranged.

I loved the Ending! 😊

A kiss on the forehead was fine but I expected something more, you know 😉

Do write more on ZaYa 👍🏼

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Sruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NinjaInPyjamas
Oh my god Sruuu!! That gave me the heebijeebies!! This was really nice!
Write more, will ya? :)

I will edit my post and comment in detail soon!

Thanks ji ninjaaa. 😳

Originally posted by: Emaani.95
WoW!
What an awesome blossom update! LOVED IT.. !!

I loved your way of writing!
And .. ahhh, this was definitely a hell lot better date from what CV's arranged.
I loved the Ending! 😊
A kiss on the forehead was fine but I expected something more, you know 😉

Do write more on ZaYa 👍🏼

Sorry if I let you down, just wanted to make it mild. 😆

But thanks a lot, glad you that you liked it. 😳

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

its so beautiful update.u write in a way that i can't imagen every scene.i wish that happen in their real date.keep writing.

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Tanya

@TashaForever

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Posted: 11 years ago

WOW!!

You're an awesome writer!This date was beautiful :*

Im awed, really! Your writing...u made zaya look so cute..their fighting, boredom,jealousy and then part 2 :D

Altho i really wanted a lil more dan a forehead kiss...maybe an I love you, if not a kiss :P

But the 'shayad' was a lovely ending!

AWESOME!!

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Sruthi

@dauntless.

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Posted: 11 years ago

^thank you so much guys 🤗

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautifully worded. Enjoyed reading it.

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

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Posted: 11 years ago

i cant believe i havebonly just come across this

amazing ts

loved it

lil emotional aswel

write more soon

and please pm me when u write again

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