Her Maidenhood- A Historical Fiction MG OS 29th July'14

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

<div>I would have ... but alas golden words cant be repeated na

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Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lazy-sleeper
jhoot

tu ne jhoot bola kyun 😲

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lazy-sleeper
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Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

jus read ur OS...
u jus took me to some historical period...
u penned d cute little love story so beautifully..
its 1st time i read ur stories...loved reading dem..
wldove to read other storiez written by u...
keep up ur good work..ur r n amazing writer..

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

I am speechless.

It was so beautiful.

Superbly written

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

just read the intro li9nes

and i loved it..

will read wen my lappy cums back...

keep me informed of the progress

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

very beautiful story...

after reading ur first post I thought story ended with sadness but then next post made me happy...

thanx for pm...

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

love always find its way..

beautiful OS

Edited by impoojaverma - 11 years ago

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

To tell you the truth shuru maine many things went upar the head what are those ranks n titles... but if you ignore them ... everything becomes crystal clear... but then you get used to those words too na... n also understand what will be the order of that ranks...

Geet ... so nave n lovely... all lost to the person who is ready to kill them .. but what can be done to the devil heart who is only ready to beat for that one person...moreover also ready to give up for her family without a second thought...

Maan... knows everything but still not ready to accept his love for her... the ego... he was so bowled out at her first sight itself and would do anything to get her on her knees...created rumors for his love only 😲

And what was that... Maan demanded her for himself forever...very smart one ... she will be his ... but kuch late hi sahi akhal aahi gayi Maan ko...

Now Geet had to choose someone else... the leech.. but why fear when Maan is hear... n we get to know about the proposal ... happily married n wanted more to that story... but then what can be done when u don't write the continuation ...

Very well written that too with high class English...Congratulations on successful completion of one another OS...

uff...thaak gayi comment de dete dete... ab next par attack...

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fatema_007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

wow this is surely my lucky day...I'm getting to read these superb os s of urs when just a while ago I was thinking how would I spend my night without a good book ..
thank u soo very much for the pm 😊