ZaYa FF: Our Destiny (Unfinished abruptly) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read all 4 chapters, they're nice, but farheen is a girl name, did u mean fareed?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
It was awesome...continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
very nice update!!
thanks for d pm..
plzz continue soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Interesting update
waiting for the face off
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Index updated.
Thank you for all your likes and comments.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: neenzz

Read all 4 chapters, they're nice, but farheen is a girl name, did u mean fareed?

Well so far I know...In my place Farheen is also used as a male name. So only I choose that name.
Thank you for reading the story so far.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

New update with a new banner.


Chapter 5



Time : 9:58

Aliya getting out of her cabin to reach the site.

Jasmine : Maam...Should I go with you?

Aliya : I think there will be no need for it. I will handle it. If any problem I will ring you up...

Jasmine : Ok maam...

She went out...It was few steps...about 3 minutes walkable distance...She reached the site.

Place : School Office

Staff 1 : Jass don't you think maam is behaving weird nowadays...

Jasmine : Weird? In what basis?

Staff 1 : Weird...She sleeps here and she cries sometimes...

Jasmine : She always do cry often seeing her lappy...What's new in it?

Staff 1 : But she never satys here right?

Jasmine : She stayed here last night and you are calling her weird...

Staff 1 : No...She seems sad nowadays...

Jasmine : Office stress.

Staff 1 : Maybe...

Jasmine : What do you want to say?

Staff 1 : Nothing.

Jasmine : Good.

The phone ringed.

Jasmine : Hello, Who is speaking?

Farheen : Hello, umm...Is Aliya madam there?

Jasmine : May I know who are you?

Farheen : Farheen...Mr. Farheen Khan.

Jasmine : Oh, Sorry sir...I was...

Farheen : Its ok...Well what about the deal?

Jasmine : Sir Maam is now at the site...She must have talking with Mr. Zain now...

Place : Site.

Aliya dialed some number in her phone.

Aliya : Jasmine oick up the phone...Pick up...Urggg...

Place : Office

Farheen : Oh, well...I wish this deal turns a sucsess...

Jasmine : Ok sir...If you like you can also join the meeting sir.

Farheen : No, I just ringed up Zain and his phone is not available so I ringed up here, guessing he will be there. Anyway Thank you.

Jasmine : No problem sir...Do not mention.

Jasmine turned towards the staff members.

Jasmine : Umm...Farheen.

Staff 1 : Well, what were you talikng about?

Jasmine : The same...Site...deal...land...hotel...

Staff 1 : Do you think this deal will click?

Jasmine : Nope.

Staff 1 : Confident?

Jasmine : Not sure.

Both laughed when the phone rang again.

Jasmine : Hello...

Aliya : Jasmine...Come here ...to the site...

Jasmine : Maam, maam I couldn't hear you maam...maam...

Aliya : Jasmine...

Jasmine : Maam...

Aliya : Come to the site...

Jasmiine : Site????

Aliya : Yes...

Jasmine : Is everything ok...

The engaged tone...

Place : Bhopal

Shabana : Aayat...Aayat...

Aayat : What?

Shabana : Where are you? Come here...

Aayat : Why? Now what?

Shabana : Just come and have a look who is here in the gate...

Aayat : Appi...(Jumps in joy and went out her room)

Aayat reached the gate and her smile and joy faded.

Precap :

Aliya : Do you think I should final this deal? (Angry)

Jasmine : Maam I will ring up Mr. Farheen once and...

Aliya : What will he do??? Mr. Farheen and hs client...

Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Note

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Princess Diaries - IF

About the updates on the page:
As I have started the page now...I will update the last story first and will post this story.
Likes and comments on FB page also welcomed.

Regarding the name:
Soon the UN on IF will be changed as -Princess-
So the FB page is named as Princess Diaries.

Thank you.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mee first
Nice update
U left me in a cliffhanger just like today's episode
Continue soon can't wait
Thanx for d pm
Edited by anaghazaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Mee first

Nice update
U left me in a cliffhanger just like today's episode
Continue soon can't wait
Thanx for d pm

I havent watched the epi...
Thank you very much.
My pleasure.

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