Thunder Storms And Instant Noodles || A Swaron One Shot. - Page 2

nice os!! hope they show this in the show

super cutee os😳

"Swayam?" she questioned.

He yawned at the other end and simply said, "I know, don't worry, I'm on my way."

"Thank you" she smiled, slightly gushing on to how much he already knew her.

I went like awww at dis point...trust me ur fab...like u hv done full justice to our sharon's majnu...i loved ur os...
I give u 3 "S" for it... thats Short Sweet n Swaronish...
Coming to a suggestion(though i m nt at all writer)...u could hv added like swaron having noodles while watching der old pics n some masti,teasing or doing something else,... N later on swayam dozing off or da other way around...(sorry if u feel like its a lame suggestion bt i felt like,... kya yaar abhi toh swayam ghar aya tha abhi toh...)

Ps: huge wala sorry if reading my comment was waste of time for u...Shooliiieee

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