Swayam OneShot: Flame in the soul

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Yogini

@yogini64

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was amazingly written ... 👏

Beautiful portray of his emotions... 😊

He has seen alot of hardships in his love life... making a diva love a normal boy is not an easy task... 😳

Specially when she tagged him as a stalker... what he started as a secret admirer was ruthlessly insulted n crushed... 😭

But still... his true love won back... thats lovely... 🤗

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

shenzz🤗🤗

this wil b one of my favs of ur works❤️

each and every emotion and feelings of swayam was penned down amazingly👏👏

reminded me of all d old memories😳

loveddd ittt to d coreee😊

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Cenjonstrand

@Cenjonstrand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awesome one shot
brilliantly presented the emotion of swayam

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

did you ever heard about a masterpiece

tis was exactly tat

i cannot express kintney mindblowingly you portrayed

swayam's broken heart's feeling

tis os was outstanding

yu perfectly showed every facet of his feeling

his agonizing pain n the five stages of loss n grief very beautifully

do write more n i mean it from my heart

becoz ur writing is exceptional n very unique

the best part about you as a writer is tat after reading ur material

whether it be rom com or emotional it is so realistic tat

you can actually picturize everything n whenever you give emotional updates you give such a deep analysis about a character tat the whole sequence becomes heart-touching

all in all a very well formed n bewitching read 🤗

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

beautful os shenz

loved the way you penned down swayam's feelings

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abhilasha_dream

@abhilasha_dream

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Swayam's emotions have been amazingly portrayed by you... Wonderful !!

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neha

@swaron933

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

i am speechless

hats off to your writing skills👏

superbbb

very beautifully you pened down swayam's state of mind

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Shenz,What should I say?

This piece of yours made me re-live the whole exceptionally beautiful journey of SwaRon once again.Seeing SwaRon from the eyes of Swayam comes is a heavenly joueney.This piece was filled with so many emotions if Swayam and every emotion potrayed beautifully by you.I am so glad I read this...Its beautiful.Beautiful. 😊

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

It was just Beautiful. The way you expressed Swayam's feelings is just commendable 👏 👏

Swaron's journey came back rushing to me as I read this OS. Brilliant.

I just love your works as they are dealt with precision and beauty. Amazing. ❤️

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

This was such an expressive piece. You penned down the emotions in such a wonderful flow, from the beginning to the end. I really liked the way you handled it, I could imagine Swayam in front of my eyes.

I wish Swayam would have been handled the way you wrote in the serial as well. I was quite disappointed with the way they handled him. Anyhow, this piece is commendable.

Try to write more along these lines.

Love

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