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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fairystar


Yaad aagya tha..tabhi tu unres kar diya😆
Aur vasse bhi SAKU BABY ko koi bhul sakta hai🤣🤣
bdw thank u for wishing me luck...much needed😳😆

moochar waise kal mera bhi english ka paper hai aur dekho main kya kar rahi hoon😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ok guys as I promise that I will update a small part of my each story so here is my 1st update.

guys thank you sooo much for ur support its really means for me a lot

This update is dedicated to our chudail. Because aaj uska happy wala b'day hai.

wish

you

happy

b'day

chudail 🤗

happy reading guys

PART 9A

[i have no proof reading so read it at ur own risk]

When finally he'd sucked her lower lip capturing her mouth for a deep kiss shrugging away all the protest of his mind she slipped her arms around his neck curling her fingers in his thick, dark hairs, she felt his hand slide upward until his fingers brushed the nape of her neck, holding her trapped in his arms and squeezed her eyes shut, lost in the feel of his hard body pressed to hers, to the sensation of his mouth, and the taste of him and his hands demandingly moving on her bare waist, his lips teasingly exploring her mouth. She had never kissed any man in her life it was her first kiss her first kiss that she willingly want to gave to her husband ,her Lover but unfortunately he is not her husband nor her lover. But she didn't o any struggle to free herself. .she squeezed her trying to remove all the thoughts as of now as she wanted to savor the moment in her heart forever wanted to save the memory of his lips on her in her heart so no one could snatch it from her. She didn't know where was she?---what she was doing? She had been forgotten everything until she was breathless and was forced him to give her breath. Did he finally break the kiss?.

She took a deep breath stabling her breath, letting him pull away his face, her body stumbled as the realization of what she had just done washed over her. She had just willingly kissed him allowed him to touch her allowed her heart to feel and enjoy the moment. Allowed that person who had kidnap her and take her here away from her family [yuck disgusting family]

She had opened her eyes allowing her gaze to meet with him and gulped down the air, there was havoc of emotions she could see on his face his eyes were staring at her in bewilderment. He cannot understand what just had happen 1 min ago. He kissed sanyu and she also respond him with same passion and desire. He cannot register what the feelings and emotion was telling him to kiss her to feel her. He can feel the softness of her lips on his. Whereas sanyu also unaware of the unknown feelings. Is that love. But how can be this possible. Forget it. But at the same time someone was standing and watching the passionate kiss of them and burning with jealousy. He was none other than dhruv.

Rd was not feeling guilty for what he done just before 5 mins. But he was scared of sanyukta's reaction. He doesn't know what will she do now. Is she will eat him alive for kiss her forcefully. [omggg Bechara rd]

Sanyu has no words first time in life to say, but she compose herself and finally broke the silence.

Sanyu-um... awww mr devil how dare you...

Rd-umm. Voh.. sorry...

Sanyu-what!!!! Sorry..

Rd-umm haan...

Sanyu-aap ko pata bhi hai mr devil maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi kiss nahi kiya because I just wnt that I will share my 1st kiss with whom I love most in the entire world and you spoil it. Huhh

Rd-ok na I said sorry so...

Sanyu-what sorry. Ek to mera 1st kiss barbaad kar diya aur sorry bol rahe ho.

Rd didn't want to drag the fight because he was feeling guilty so he gave up and starts walking but sanyu held his wrist. He was surprise???????

Sanyu-w8 mr devil.

Rd [thought- ab yeh kya kahegi]-what.

Instead of answering him she takes a step forward and search something in her wallet without braking the contact of their eyes. She took out a handkerchief and brought it to near his lips and wiped his lips. He is always surprise with every action of her. Nothing different in this scene also.

Sanyu-mr devil kya tum aise party me jaate.

Rd[confused] huhh????

Sanyu-haan nahi to kya, tumhare lips pe lipstick ka mark tha. You are so careless.

And she went from there leaving a confused rd.

Rd-hain. What was that. I am really gone a mad soon.

And the demon of the story is come to irritate mr devil.

Dhruv-huhh kiss kar rahe the angel ko.

Rd- [turns and said] its none of ur business.

Dhruv-its mine business

Rd-who the hell are u to interfere in our life. [did he just say our life, omgg rd to gaya]

Dhruv- I m not interested in fi8 with you but just want to say that don't hurt my angel.

Rd- yeh kya angel-angel laga rakha hai. She is not ur property.

Dhruv- but soon will be mine.

Rd-in ur dreams. And better for u if u stay away from her.

Dhruv [with smirk] I cant. But why r u so much bother??

Rd also don't know why he was bother? Was he feels something for her or just he thinks that he has rights on her. He shrugged all the thoughts away and said- I m telling you last time just stay away from her, otherwise you will regret it soon.

Dhruv-no I'll not. By the I don't want to waste my time here with you .

Rd-to jaa na jaha jana hai.

With that rd left the place and goes near to sanyu where mrs malhotra and vidushi was present.

He excused both of them and said her that party is over now lets go to the home.

Sanyu-are yaar mr devil thodi der aur rahne do na plzz.

Rd-no chalo.

Sanyu-plzzz.

Rd-no

Sanyu-plzz

Rd-are maine kaha na no means no.

Sanyu-ok but...

Rd-chalo

And he take her to the car where his driver was already present

Rd said to driver-tum chale jao main khud drive karke le jaonga car.

Driver-but sir...

Rd-I said go.

Driver-ok

And driver handed rd the keys of car.

Rd- ;sit inside the car

Sanyu-huhh baith rahi hoon.

And she sits inside the car.

Sanyu- mr devil ek baat punchoon.

Rd- use pahle main kuch punchoon

Sanyu-why not. Main kab mana kart hoon .

Rd-tum ne kya bakwas karne me aur mujhe irritate karne me phd ki huyi hai.

Sanyu-ummm... nahi aur waise bhi abhi meri age hi kya hai kar loongi aaram se, na tum kahi ja rahe ho na main. [and she wink]

Rd-agar tum mere sath rahi to main pagal ho jaonga.

Sanyu- haw mr devil you...

Rd-can you stop ur nonsense for some time.

Sanyu-aapko mera bolna bakwas lagta hai, ab aap dekhna main aapse baat hi nahi karoongi

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PRECAP- abhi to part stat hua hai yeh nahi janana kI dhruv kya karega??? And sanyu rd se baat karegi yaa nahi

I know boring tha sorry for that😆

And next update will be of fb wala love😉

now plz leave ur precious comments here.

and for pm hit the like button

and don't forget to wish chudail😉

love u all

sakshi

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
res🤣🤣
moocher became stalker..pat on my back🤣🤣
will unres after...READING😆😳

UNRES...LOOK I'M SO FAST😆

AWWW I LOVED SANDHIR FIRST KISS😳
N I HATE THIS DHRUV..YUKKSS🤢🤢
WHEN IS STATED SANYU AS 'ANGEL' I WANTED HIM TO GIVE BLACK BLUE RIGHT ON HIS FACE😡😆
BTW I LOVED RANDHIR JEALOUSLY PART
N I HOPE DHRUV KUCH ASSA VASSA NA KAR DAI😡

IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE SAKU BABY😳
HATS OFF TO UR WRITING👏👏
AND THNXX A TON FOR UR SCARP ANYWAY IT WAS OF NO USE🤣

LOVE
MOOCHER❤️




Edited by Fairystar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res 2nd but still happy
Update was fab but ittu chotu sa koi nhi
Hey ye dhruv kya karne wala h ab 😕
Hmmm i know ab sanyu rd se baat nhi karegi n he will get mad and wo khud try karega sanyu ko manaane ka yaaay😉
Imma sooo happy
Lovely update
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
And soory main cheez to bhul hi gayi
HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHUDAIL (sorry real name nhi jaanti comon yaarnayi hu yaha pe )
Edited by pritha072angel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

moochar waise kal mera bhi english ka paper hai aur dekho main kya kar rahi hoon😆😆


aap samajdar logo mai sai hu..aap tu bina pade bhi no lai aaoge...muj jaiso ko padna padta hai🤣🤣
Edited by Fairystar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rd tum akele nahi ho...hum readers bhi jaldi hi pagal ho jayenge...

Lol this is just awesome one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha so cute yr sakshi ...bt ye dhruv kaha se tapas pda ,.ise zyada cute to riteish hi tha ..huh ..nyway brilliant yr d way u described d scenario ws awsm ..thnx fr d pm ...nd ya mai tumhri bki stries b padungi tension mt lo..bt my favorite is dis one ...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was awesome
sanyu randhir se baat nahi karegi bechara randhir
ab yeh dhrub kya karne wala h I like the love triangle
updated 9B ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh!!! i'm late...
the update was sooo cute...
sakshi you r an amazing writter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
really nyc nd funny update dear

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