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Posted: 11 years ago
What an update, i have no words to explain abt my feel now, god, i was totally immersed within the update, and i realised i have to wait for a day to know what has happened to him, i want madhu to feel bad atleast for a day seeing rishu's condition and knowing her dad's real face, she must accept the fact that he deserved that death by rishab hands, and she should understand the pain which rishab went throu every time with her heart-piercing words and i wanted her to confess him back this time.
Take him to coma or in bed for any much time, but just my request is pls pls pls make madhu understand the pain which rk had because of her.

Fantastic update!!!! Hats off!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
kat r u updating at nite
cant wait to read i m becoming anxious bird of my rk want to fly in his lala land hehehe u see ur story has made me mad
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kat update 12 hun .i want to comment this time
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just posting friends.. 2 mins
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Part 21


"Rishu.." she said in a husky fearful voice.

But there was no answer. She tried to separate to see him but RK's weight was on her. She looked dreadfully at Sultan.

"Rishu!!" she screamed looking at Sultan. She couldn't get anything out of her mouth now.

Sultan came running to them. "What happened?" He asked afraid as he pulled RK away from Madhu. He tried patting RK's face to wake him up while Madhu shook him holding his arm but he didn't.

"Rishu wake up!!" She screamed. Just then Sultan noticed Madhu's dress having deep blood stains. He looked at her baffled and shocked. "Why is there blood on you?" He asked.

Madhu looked down at her dress and then at RK in shock. That's when Sultan noticed blood flowing out of RK's left side of abdomen. He touched that and his fingers came out blood pooled. He was stunned. "How did this happen!!" He said to himself.

"Call the ambulance!" He shouted as he noticed Kapoor standing at a distance in a shock and fear. Madhu sat there shocked too.

Sultan stood up as he tried holding up RK to take him down meanwhile Kapoor called the ambulance as he already was afraid of Sultan.

Madhu helped Sultan in holding him around his shoulder as they walked off with RK with his dragging feet.

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They were now rushing with RK on the stretcher almost lifeless and unconscious and taken inside.

Madhu and Sultan stood outside the emergency ward as they apprehensively waited for doctor to tell what exactly happened.

Sultan sat on the side bench as he thought to himself. How could this happen? RK was fine till the end. He had fought, he had jumped up and down, nothing had hurt him. He had killed Bhatia. He was fine when he sat there and cried. He was even crying! Then what happened suddenly. He was just hugging Madhu and when she came off he was shot... Suddenly he was shook to the core. He stared blankly at the floor as he tried to comprehend everything.

Just then the doctor came out of the emergency. "Excuse me.." he interrupted.

"Yes Doctor.. How is he? What happened?" Madhu came running while Sultan stood up.

"What happened that you must be knowing better.. but there is bullet that has penetrated his spleen which has ruptured. The prognosis would depend on the extent of injury which we are still assessing. All that I can say is don't expect much for now. We will try our best.." he said.

"Don't say that.. You have to save him.." Sultan said demandingly.

"We will save him.. That's what we are here for.. It can be either ways.. He might start recovering soon or we might not even get a chance to treat him.. We will do our best.." he said as he patted his shoulder and went back in.

Sultan and Madhu stood there shocked. "Please Rishu come back.." Madhu said in a low crying whisper.

"You killed him..." said Sultan from the side in a dummy like voice. Madhu turned to him stunned not able to believe what she heard.

"What!" She said in disbelief.

"You shot him... Right Madhu?" He said angrily.

"What are you saying?" She said baffled.

"He was fine.. Everything was done.. And then you hugged him and after that he was found shot.." Sultan almost shouted.

"No!!! Why would I shoot him?" She was taken aback.

"Really?? Why would you shoot him? Should you ask that? You are the one who had been vouching for your hatred towards him.. You hated him.. You destroyed him once.. And you had already said to RK that after he kills Bhatia you would kill him.. RK has been my only family Madhu. We have been together since childhood.. And let me tell you I wont let anything happen to him.." he controlled his voice from raising in the hospital somehow.

Madhu looked at him dumbstruck. "But.." she said with tears brimming in her eyes.

"Just go away Madhu!! You did what you wanted.. You wanted him to die.. You hated him like hell.. He loved you.. Did everything for you.. Even listened to your scorns.. He even encouraged you to kill him so that you get satisfaction! But did once your heart melt? You played with his feelings still he loved you like crazy but you didn't realize his worth...Didn't you realize that deep love he had for you?" He asked in a hurting tone while Madhu looked at him dumbstruck as she shook her head to refuse that she killed him. She wanted to say but was choked by the tears..

" What kind of vengeance you wanted? You call him a beast?! And what are you? I don't think a human could ignore that much of love and compassion he has for and even your family.. Go away from here right now Madhu.. Or else I will kill you.." he said in an angry pressured tone as he stood face to face with her.

"Kill me then... If you think I shot him.. Kill me.." she cried.

"RK had said to me.. That you are him.. his life depends on you.. Otherwise I swear I don't leave my friends' enemies, let alone who harm them."

"Please Sullu just listen to me... I love him alot.. Though I agree I betrayed him but that was for my father.. I..." she tried to reason.

"Father? Shamsher Malik! How can I forget? Yes you are his daughter! Then it was surely expected of you... Backstabbing the ones who trust you is in your blood.." he said with disgust.

Madhu was shook to the core. "What?" She said as her heart felt skipping a thousand beats.

"You did all this to RK because of Shamsher Malik? Do you even know who he was? What he did? RK killed him and he should have killed him. That was what he deserved." Sultan shouted.

"Sultan!" Madhu screamed angrily as she couldn't let him insult her father.

"Malik was the one who killed RK's parents.." he said paying the least heed to her anger.

Madhu felt a blow. "What are you saying? Bhatia did that.." she said trying to refuse what she heard.

"No Madhubala.. Bhatia just ordered that.. But it was executed by Malik. And not just executed.. Malik betrayed Mohan Kundra.. He was his friend and associate in business. And Mohan had trusted him in everything. Mohan Kundra and Bhatia were business rivals and he had even exposed Bhatia's illegal projects.. But then Bhatia bought a man.. You know who? It was Shamsher Malik.. Yes it was your father... he sold himself to Bhatia and then not only did he betray RK's father but he even ruthlessly killed his parents. Gunshots one after the other.. Do you realize what that child must have felt seeing his parents in that state. Still.. Still he had not told you for once why he killed your father. You kept on accusing him and hurting him but not for once he told you the truth.. You know why?"

Madhu looked at him still in shock.

"Because that stupid man thought that you would break down hearing about your father. He was ready to become the villain and take up all your hate for his whole life only so you don't feel shattered and betrayed by your father.. That is how much of a beast he is.. but why am I telling you all this.. You have now done what you wanted.. he is fighting there for life..." Sultan said controlling his tears as his voice shook with emotions.

"but get this one thing clear in you head.." he patted his finger on her temple in anger which made Madhu suddenly look at him wih wide eyes. "RK said to me that you are him.. And if he dies.. Then you would too.." he said determined and walked off..

Madhu stood there like a statue. Sultan's words had hit her like blows one after another. All her illusions were shattered. Her father? He was the reason behind all what RK had to face? And RK was never wrong? The man she had hated all her life was righteous and the one she loved like mad was the culprit. Her whole world had tossed upside down. Again she was trapped between the two. And she felt like a criminal herself thinking of her father. Not only she was the daughter of such a man but also she had fought and wronged RK for him.. She remembered how he had cried to her remembering his parent's death. Not even then he had told her who killed them because he wanted to protect her. But she had always scorned him. Madhu looked towards the door of the ward as she realized RK was fighting from death. She wanted to stay but she felt as if she had no right to be there anymore. She was even ready to kill him for that man who unfortunately was her father. She walked off still like dummy as she tried to gather something from the events. She wanted to decide something but the storm in her mind was unsettling her. She wanted peace to let her mind work at least.

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Sultan was now in the doctor's cabin.

"What would happen now?" He asked apprehensively.

"Dont worry.. Fortunately the bullet hadn't penetrated the tissue proper of the spleen. It was in an accessory part which we have removed. So we have resuscitated him and he is stable now. As he had lost quite a good amount of blood we would keep him here for monitoring and replenishing his blood. If he remains stable he might be discharged in a day or two." The doctor told him smiling relieved himself.

Sultan heaved a sigh of relief. "Thank you.." he muttered as he came out of the cabin to tell Madhu about it but he found her absent. He looked around but she was not there. It had already gotten dark and Sultan inferred that she might have gone home. Moreover now he was least interested about her safety. She had tried to kill RK and he won't let her harm him again.

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The morning arrived and RK was now conscious. Sultan went to him hurriedly.

"Thank God you are fine.." he said relieved seeing him fidgeting to get up.

RK smiled at him, "You are a girl.." he teased Sultan.

Sultan chuckled happily as he felt his friend was back to the way he was. "At last... everything is done RK.. You succeeded.." he said to him.

"Yes... Finally I have that peace of mind... but you know something is feeling empty now.." he said thoughtfully thinking that the only mission of his life has been done.

"Yes a part of your spleen has been removed.. so that is empty.." Sultan joked.

"Not funny..." RK looked at him disgusted. "By the way.. What happened to Kapoor and all? And Bhatia's body?" He asked suddenly anxious.

"Don't worry everything is done.. I had sent my men.. And everything is clear.. Kapoor has been dealt well he wont open his mouth ever.. And even if he tries, Thanks to you, I have all the means to destroy him now.. so he wont do that stupidity" Sultan said boastfully..

"Great... where is Madhu?" RK asked getting relaxed now. He was very sure that Madhu would come barging in anytime.

"She is at home.. she had shot you.. wasnt that enough that you still thinking of her." he said .

"She had shot me?! Who said that to you..?" RK asked confused

"RK.. You were fine all the time.. only after you hugged her you had that bullet shot in you" Sultan argued.

"No.. Madhu hadn't shot me.. It was Bhatia.. He had shot while I was fighting his body guard I felt something but I wasnt very much attentive to all of it that time" RK baffled as he thought how Sultan thought it the wrong way. Hearing him Sultan was shook, he remembered the gunshot when he was talking to Madhu. How could he forget that? he cursed himself for what all he said to Madhu.

Just then RK's phone rang. He picked up the phone casually.

"Hello.."... "Mrs Malik..?" He exclaimed confused. "What?! Madhu isn't back home? All night?!!" he almost shouted on the phone... "Dont worry I will get her back to you soon.. Yes I remember my promise... Nothing would happen to her." He said as he disconnected the call.

Sultan looked at him with widened eyes as he heard that Madhu wasn't home all night.

"Where is Madhu Sultan?" RK asked angrily.

"I dont know.. She just disappeared yesterday.." he said confused and shocked.

"What had happened? She isn't the one to go away leaving me like this.. Speak up damn it.. She hasn't been home all night!" RK shouted.

"After you were brought here.. I thought that she has shot you.. then..." Sultan tried thinking himself.

"Then what?" RK asked restlessly.

"I told her.." he looked at RK shocked realizing what mistake he had done.

"You told her what?"

"About Malik..." he said.

"Shit!! I told you Sultan she should not come to know about it.. She wont be able to take it.. See what you have done.." RK said angrily as he tried to get up.

"What are you doing.. you stay here.. I will search for her.." Sultan said getting up.

"You expect me to lie here while Madhu might be in some danger.. Are you mad?" He screamed.

"But you have just recovered.." Sultan argued.

"I told you Sultan she is me.. even then you told her.. And She had to shoot me.. What wrong was even there that she had killed me.." RK said ignoring Sultan's concerns as he was now walking out of his ward.

"I am sorry RK.. I was just taken away by emotions.." he said regretting

"Thats your whole problem Sultan.. Why the hell you get so emotional" RK shouted as they walked out of the hospital.

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Part 22

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Edited by k.atrina75 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional,fully emotional update.a heart touching one.rk was fighting fr his life n madhu at last came to knw da truth.waiting eagerly fr next one
Edited by vmpy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
uff...Me 2nd spot!!😈
Nina, u r 3rd!!😈
sorry, kat.. we are racing in ur story!! oh no! only one more update😭 then where we will race to comment 1st??😭

okay! coming to the update!!😃

Great update!!👏⭐️

a whistle for Sullu, for his dialogues, for his love & care on RK!!👏 i have never ever liked sultan this much in any story!!😛 u made me fall for a character which i hated in all stories & in serial too!!😳

i'm so so happy bcos u are satisfying all of my wishes... i asked u for a hospital scene & madhu crying for rk - i got it😳, beach scene - probably i'll get tmrw😉, then epilogue - u said u will give me!!😳 u r a great writer dear!!⭐️ fulfilling all ur readers wish & giving super awesome updates to us!!⭐️

Rk is always so sweet in ur stories, be it "afar as my love's happiness or villainous love" u r portraying him as pure gem in all ur stories!! i like it!👏

a part of spleen is missing LOL!!🤣 madhu is missing but sullu is cracking joke!!😆

okay! finally paddo used Rk's card & asked for help! madhu came to know everything abt her father! though again Rk is mad with sullu for the mess he again he created in Rk's life he will forgive him & they will be best buddies again! so no loose ends left!! PERFECT!!👏

i guess madhu is in beach... looking at a star fish & Rk will head straight there & sit beside her... then... maafi maafi maafi... love declaration... the end!!⭐️

ah!! cant wait to read the last part of this beautiful story & my fingers are all set to give my comment for this lovely story for the last time!!😳


Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update!👏👏👏👏

Sorry for the late reply. But better late than never. 😉
Yes I know Sudha. You came second, I came third.😈 Congratulations. 😆
But number three is my favorite number.😆 So actually it doesn't matter, as long as I comment. 😆
Now over to the update.
O, Sullu, Sullu, Wherefore art thou Sullu?
Deny thy friend and refuse thy promise.
Or, if thou wilt not, be but sworn my tears,
And I'll no longer be ignorant.
🤣🤣🤣🤣
Sorry I couldn't help it. I thought it would be appropiate according to the story.🤣🤣
Sullu, Sullu, Sullu. My Sullu.😳 You fulfilled my dreams in this update. This was totally, I don't have any words for this. 😆 That's a first. 😆 He told Madhu everything about Shamsher.😳 How he worked with Mohan Kundra, let himself be bought by Bhatia and killed RK's parents in cold blood. And the way he narrowed it all down. ☺️ He loves his best friend. It shows. He told me he was you. If he dies, you die. ☺️My hero in a disguise of a goon. 😳😆 I feel sorry for him now about the whole Trishna thing. He deserves a better girlfriend than her, someone who isn't is as annoying.🤣
Now how can he remember the promise about her killing RK, but not the shot Bhatia fired. 😡 Stupid, stupid, stupid Sullu. No wonder Trishna is with you. It's because something called karma. 🤣🤣
Well I am glad it happened, because in that way Madhu found out everything. ☺️ My stupid Sullu did at least something right in his stupidity. Besides covering up all the tracks, and reassure that the police won't do anything. 😳
Well RK's comment when he woke up. 🤣 You are a girl.🤣🤣
That he is.🤣🤣🤣🤣 An emotional one nevertheless.🤣🤣🤣 Hey, RK he is your sister, not your brother. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 He even told RK he was sorry at the end, let Madhu go without protecting her.
"I am sorry RK.. I was just taken away by emotions.."
"Thats your whole problem Sultan.. Why the hell you get so emotional"
Maybe he is secretly in love with RK. That's why he doesn't want Madhu near RK and says that Trishna is annoying.🤣🤣🤣🤣 Well, well. I do wonder if we will found that out in the next and final update.😆 Where will they find Madhu? Is her dad burried? Maybe at the graveyard? I don't know. I DO KNOW THE BEACH! THE BEACH! THE BEACH! THE BEACH! How couldn't I think of that earlier. 😆 They will find her at the beach. Sitting there with the starfishes, crying.😳 If she still is awake, that is.😆 And when she meet RK.😳 She will hug him. He will flinch due to pain. And later on Sullu will apologize for his mistake. Now only the Padmini bomb is yet to come. 😆 Did she know it all? Will she allow RK to marry her daughter. I think she will, I think she will, I think she will. 😆
Naw, final update.😭😭😭😭
What will I do. I am going to miss this story so, so, so, so, so much.😭😭😭😭
I won't be able to give my long essaylike comments. And my analyctical witty and snarky remarks.😭😭 Well I have to deal with it. I know one who will be happy. My computer. 😆 I think it was to hot and I overloaded it yesterday. And as a precaution it shut itself down. 😆😆
I hope for an epilogue and other Rishbala stories from you Maryam.😳😛 Thanks for the update and for the PM. I do wonder if my comment is longer then your update or my previous comment. But I doubt that.😆
Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago
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Lovely update..
Will edit this comment tomorrow.. :)

Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago
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my god wat a disgusting creep mallik was
bcoz of his greediness our poor rk has to suffer so much i m.so glad that rk killed him n bhatia too both of them deserved worst than this
n glad sullu told madhu everything i just love the way he stood up for rk it was mindblowing a true bond of frndship was executed
n glad my jaan is alright n u didnt put him in hospital for long
but one thing is hillatious our rk is really superman no matter how much hurt he maybe but wen his love is in trouble all hell break lose n he gets super active to protect her
i m.sure he ll find her then emotional reunion
in all rk darling roxxx
super awesome update kat
ohh no only one part left
i m gonna miss it like hell
plss update the epilouge also tomorrow
as i am having exams frm monday so might not be active depending on my course so i want to read it before i go away
hope it will be fyn with u
Edited by NehaVdian - 11 years ago

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