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Fantastic post Minnu...
Ten - As always your acrostic are bang on
Diya - Another wonderful take from you...
Shwets - Your quotes that speak of Rudra's feelings right now...Just brilliant
JJ - Please add one more - CVs & Channel - Jazbaatless
And thanks to each and every one of you (Shwets, Diya, JJ, Minu, Ten, Psagars, Bhavi, Kerrie, OF, & anyone else I may have left out unknowingly) for loving and appreciating the very amateurish poems that I pen...
The first thing that came to my mind was this song -
"Tera mujhse hai pehla ka nata koi..uhi nahi dil lubhata koi"
it was my favourite movie and song and I used to be crazy about Shashi Kapoor when young..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cjUHQj36sVc
So Mohini at last frowns in worry over who will light her death pyre when she leaves this earth...
Beta kis kaam ka agar woh apne maa ki arthi par aag nahi de sakta. This would mean all that she stands for, he pride, her egofor bearing two sons...is all pointless. She knows it would not take long for Sumer to walk out on her soon, after what she had done to him in the past.
Diya rightly said another loop closure. If only they got back Sunheri and Aman and had closed that loop which would have made interesting viewing rather than pickle wars. I hope the trophy puts an end to this war...and Sumer and Shatabdi take off on a honeymoon for Koel No. 2.
Here is a very short one...I know it's not upto the mark...
Kaise Kahun!
Tum ho mera sukoon ( you are my peace )
Tum ho mera junoon (my insanity...)
Tum ho meri arzoo (my hope)
Tum ho meri justaju (my quest)
Tum ho mera kal (you are my yesterday/tomorrow - I say this for u can interpret it as M=P)
Tum ho mera aaj (and my today)
Tum ho meri chaahat (you are my desire)
Tum ho meri pehchaan (you are my identity)
Kaise kahun mein kya kahun... (what do I say how do I say it...
Ki tum ho meri jaan...(that you are my life)
M to R
Phir bhi teri iss berukhi ne mujhe rula diya... (yet your callousness brought tears)
Kaise kahun mein kya kahun...how do I say so...you are my life...
Ki tum ho meri jaan...
dd
Edited by ddFan2012 - 11 years ago