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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update, loving prem kalpi bond
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Posted: 10 years ago
The update is awesome. Waiting 4 ur next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good, Kalpi is now too smart for Pooki's cunning moves! This is what Kalpi should have been in the serial , instead of being ' clay ' in everyone's hands, to be 'moulded ' in whatever 'form' each liked! She was 'potrayed' as a helpless female! Detest such roles for women! I love her character in your FF. Excellent idea!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Roller coaster ride it was. Smart Kalpi plus emotional Kalpi. Its so sweet to see Prem as Kalpi's best friend witnessing the change in her, that she is more lively now. I am loving him here so much. Raghav-Kalpi scenes were emotional, both still love each other; and Kalpi is for the first time confused about him being the real culprit. There car scenes where Kalpi let down her guard for the first time in front of Raghav was so touching; and later on her breakdown was painful. poor thing is herself so much in pain, pain because she still loves Raghav; and pain because she has been wronged and she wants to take revenge too; because she became weak again after days for Raghav's love. N that Pakhi & Gauri; getting on my nerves now really!
Sammy maybe he & Pakhi will be the one to bring about Kalpi's reality in front of Raghav.Hope its not so soon, and its Kalpi herself who tells this to Raghav. Hating Pakhi so much, n I really doubt of she really is mother of Khushi! 😛 Awesome update, getting interesting day by day.👏 n waiting eagerly for the next one. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an awesome update it was! Wish I could read the whole story in a day! Glad that Raghav didn't come to know of Kalpi's secret. Thank god for Prem! Poor Sammy, his plans failed again. The camaraderie between Prem and Kalpi was nice. Looks like they could be best friends in future. The relation they started out of majboori has become real strong now. They understand each other so well. Prem is happy to see his partner turned friend is living life again. Reminiscing the past Kalpi let her guard down for some time and Rags got to see a glimpse of old Kalpi. She thought of all the wonderful times they spent together. But reality strikes in the form of Pakhi's phone call. Pakhi is angry on Kalpi thinking she snatched her husband. That dumb woman, doesn't know that he was never hers in the first place. She thinks Khushi is her trump card. Later in the room, Kalpi digging her wound again and punishing herself for getting weak in front of Raghav. Felt really bad for Kalpi. Poor thing, she suffered so much already. It was touching to see Raghav attending to her wounds, crying for her pain. They forgot everything for some time , crying for each other, for their lost love. For the first time she's having doubts whether he's as innocent as her in this whole thing. She decides to give him a benefit of doubt, I think. If she sees that secret room of Rags where he kept all photos of Kalpi, i think she will realise he still loves her. Pakhi seeing all that happened between the lovers decides to take revenge on Kalpi. Hope Kalpi expose her soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
As promised here is the next update.. i think it's a bit messy one but instead of rewriting it I am updating it. Sorry for the mistakes and hope u like it.

This morning is unusual for Kalpi.. she is still confuse about the previous night and Rags reaction to her wound. In a confused state of mind she wears a blue t-shirt with a cream trouser which is a formal attire but simpler than what Kalpi's business suit. From last 5 years Kalpi is wearing the heavy business suits and designer wears just to show her royalty and position but today Kalpi wants to be her old self and she wore a simple dress just like any girl of her office. Her mind and heart is still arguing with each other regarding Rags and his love. She comes down to have her breakfast.. and glances at Rags sitting at the head of the chair. She steps ahead to reach there but paused for a moment on seeing Rags feeding pakhi with his own hands.

"See.. I told u!! Raghav is not innocent.. Yesterday he was tending ur wounds and showing all his fake love n today he is busy in feeding his sweet wife." Her mind said.

Khushi who was cheering his father to feed more to her mother notices Kalpi and as usual screams.. "Come massi.. See dad is feeding mom. Let's cheer him."

Kalpi gives a feeble smile and reach there. Rags who notices her feels guilty for doing so but he is just trying to fulfill a small wish of her daughter. Pakhi passes a evil smile after keeping her palm on her mouth and thinks, "This is just starting Kalpi.. Today I just instilled a thought in Khushi's mind that in happy family father feeds their wives and Khushi forced his dad to do so.. So u dnt know what Khushi will do to see her parents happy... My daughter is my trump card... N now when Rags has decided to give her all the happiness, I am going to use her as pawn. N before u can come to know about our separate rooms, I will shift in Rags room so get ready for our 2nd suhagrat.. Oops Get ready to witness the 2nd SR as I know 1st one had deep impact on u n u hid urself for 5 years... now u r going to hide urself for next 10 years. "

Rags stammer to give a justification to Kalpi.. "Actually for khushi's happiness I have to.. I mean.. I hope u understand."

"Relax Rags..She is ur wife." Kalpi pretended to be calm while inside she was boiling in anger on feeling cheated once again.

She glances at Rags sitting at head of the family's chair and sweetly asks Khushi.. "Do u know Khushi.. what this chair means??"

"Yes.. This chair is for head of the family and dad is the head of our family right??" Khushi chuckled.

"Right" Kalpi replied sarcastically and glared at RaKhi. They understood her hint and Rags get up and says, "No Khushi.. This is ur massi's chair. She owns the house so she is head over here."

"Com'on Rags, I was just kidding." Kalpi said while passing a fake laughter. She picks up the apple kept on table and starts eating it while talking.. "Raghav.. m not coming office today. Has some urgent work and will go to meet SP as well. Btw u meet Amar and he will tell u ur responsibilities."

"U r going to ur office and working with Kalpi." Pakhi asked confusingly. Raghav glared her in anger and dint reply as he has strictly told her not to interfere in his matter. Pakhi understand his silence but smiles so that Kalpi can't realize the strain in their relationship.

"Actually Prem took over Singhania industries and Rags joined me as an employee as he feel I am better than ur brother. Anyways this is among u guys so I better leave." Kalpi replied and leaves the place to meet Prem at the mental asylum.

Pakhi too leaves the place after getting disturb to hear this.. She wants to confront Rags for this latest development but she knows that Rags won't talk to her and instead will get angry.

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Prem and Kalpi meet at Asylum.. Kalpi is confuse that how they will hide it from Pakhi as she will come to know about it from doctor but Prem assured her and tells her to meet his mother while he will handle the doctor. Kalpi goes to meet neetu when she sees neetu again taking Sahil's name and scribbing the wall with some pictures.. She tries to find the sense in them but fails.. Lastly she takes out her mobiles and clicks the photo of those walls so that she can study them properly. Neetu notices her. Kalpi opens the door and Neetu comes running to out and makes some weird faces at her. Kalpi looks at her lovingly. "If u r my culprit than also I want u to get well soon. U have suffered enough n more than that ur son has suffered coz of ur illness. I do not know why I feel the love in ur eyes for me. It feels u want to say something through this pictures but we are not able to understand them." Kalpi said. Neetu who was hearing all this as if understanding it laughs loudly.. kalpi realizes that she can't understand anything. Prem comes out with doctor and the discharge papers of Neetu. Kalpis is shocked to see the same doctor obeying Prem and helping him in shifting Neetu. Finally they succeed in taking Neetu out of the hospital n in the car. Prem drives the cr while Kalpi was sitting in the back. Neetu was sleeping peacefully in her lap... Kalpi caresses her head and asks Prem.. "What if doctor tells this to Pakhi.. I mean someone else??"

"Don't worry.. u can take Pakhi's name as she was the one who was giving money to doctor. She dint want mom to recover." Prem replied in a sad manner. Kalpi understood his pain and stayed silent but Prem reveals everything.. " In the morning I met doctor and threatened him to handover to police for giving wrong medicines to my mom. Initially he tried to refuse but on insisting he told me that he was doing this for Pakhi singhania." Prem paused for a while. "I told him to not tell Pakhi about this transfer and gave him a huge amount to keep his mouth shut. I warned him that a mistake of his can cost a lot n I am sure he is not going to reveal anything to her." He finally sighed a relief after sharing everything with Kalpi.

Kalpi doesn't reply anything but just placed her palm on his shoulder. Prem smiled a bit on seeing this gesture of hers and says, "My old tiny enemy.. I like the way u r concern for me."

Kalpi too smiled on it and replies, "I wish we would have been frnz from start..".

They reach farmhouse where a panel of doctors was already available for Neetu's treatment. Prem looks at his mom emotionally and wonders will he be ever able to forgive her for what she did with Kalpi. He notices Kalpi arranging Neetu's bed so that she can sleep peacefully and giving necessary instructions to the nurse for her comfort. He admires her for the amount of love she has for her culprit and gets angry on realizing what his sister was doing.

After making all the arrangements Prem and Kalpi sits down to have lunch. Prem is lost in her mother and Pakhi's wrong doings.. Kalpi notices it and tries diverting his mind by talking about Maria.

"So.. any progress in Maria's case??"

"I have appointed one man to keep an eye on her relatives place and enquire about her... He was about to meet her relative.. Let me call him."

Prem takes out his cell and call his spy. Kalpi can only hear one way conversation.. "What.. n u just left the place.. I told u to take out all information still.. Damn it!! Leave it, I will do something."

"What happened Prem??"

"He met her sister about an hour ago and asked about Maria but she denied knowing her. On my instruction he kept an eye on them and they called Maria after he left.. Still he failed to find about her. Ohh God!! Now I know what I have to do.. I will go and threaten them and they will be bound to give her address."

"Great idea.. just go and threaten them but what after that?? Maria will come and meet u but just coz of fear n not love.. Prem.. u love her. U need to find her but not in a way that she misunderstands u."

"But what should I do now??"

"i have an idea... Find out the call details of Maria's sister. List down all the numbers and one by one call on them. N with the help of number we will be able to find her address."

"Mind blowing.. U should be a cop. Wait.. I will get the the details in half an hour."

Kalpi sits in the balcony for next half hour still thinking about the Rags and the way he behaved yesterday. Prem was busy making few calls and finding the call details of Maria's sister's numbers. Luckily he gets it and to his luck she has only made two calls in that one hour. He calls Kalpi and tells her to dial one number and ask about Maria while he dials the other one.

After finishing the call Kalpi informs that this number is of some plumber... so the next number is supposed to be of Maria.. He dials the number.. He can hear the ring...His hands shiver in nervousness and he tells Kalpi to talk but she denies and closes her ears saying go ahead. Finally someone picks the call.

"Hello" Said a little girl..

"Hello.. can I speak to Maria.." Prem replied in nervousness.

"Mom has gone to market.. who are u" The little girl replied with confidence..

Mom.. that means this can be my daughter.. Prem thought.

"N who am I speaking to." he asked emotionally.

"I am Pari.. Pari Maria Desouza and who are u" She asked.

"Pari.. Pari maria Desouza.." He disconnects the call without replying.. Kalpi looks at his emotional face and hugs him while he stays silent and dials the number again.. From the other end Pari was constantly saying "Hello.. hello" but Prem was not replying and just hearing the sweet voice of his daughter. Kalpi leaves him alone for sometime and calls the frn of Prem whom helped him in finding the call details and requests him to give the address of the number. Finally she succeeds in finding the address and informs the same to Prem.. Prem thanks her and leaves the place to meet Maria while Kalpi goes to meet SP.

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Rags is having tough time in the office.. Amar is not leaving any stone unturned to insult him as per Kalpi's instructions. Rags is getting furious on seeing someone else bossing over him and finally leaves the office after insulting Amar. Amar informs the same to Kalpi and Kalpi smiles as she expected the same from Rags.. She is confident that he will come back tomorrow as he can't work under Prem. She is standing outside a home which is locked.. She looked at the address and realized that it is Sheetal's house only. She is surprised to know that the house is just 4 kms away from Kapoors house. She enquires about sheetal from neighbors and to her amusement they tells her that she left the city in the morning only.

"Now I am sure Rags is not innocent.. I just took Sheetal's name in front of him and now Sheetal fled away. I won't leave u Rags." She thought.

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P.S. : No proof reading so sorry for all the mistakes once again.

Regards
Vish
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

😈... Stalker is here...😆

Give the second update quickly..
Btw super awesome update.. I was literally dancing on my seat while reading Prem and Kalpi's fake business convo.. glad that Sammy's plan failed...bach gayi kalpi😃
Its great to hear that Kalpi has started smiling and living her life again.. Hope so she gets to know about Rags innocence soon now that she atleast thinks he maybe innocent... RagNa scene was cute..
I kind of forgot about gauri.. she too can be the partner in crime right?? after all she hates kalpi too..
This is getting more and more interesting...


I love my stalker...See on ur order I gave the next update quickly.

M happy u r liking the update.. But do not dance in college. I am assuming that u r in college.😆

Kalpi is taking steps towards knowing the facts but she will still fact time to believe the innocence of the person who she is trying to hate from last 5 years,

Gauri..😕 Quite possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice update, loving prem kalpi bond

Thank u Sampa.

Originally posted by: yadanu

Interesting updates

continue soon


Thank u dear.. updated next part.


Originally posted by: aryagr

The update is awesome. Waiting 4 ur next update.


Thank u so much.. Next update is ready.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Good, Kalpi is now too smart for Pooki's cunning moves! This is what Kalpi should have been in the serial , instead of being ' clay ' in everyone's hands, to be 'moulded ' in whatever 'form' each liked! She was 'potrayed' as a helpless female! Detest such roles for women! I love her character in your FF. Excellent idea!


Yep.. Kalpi is no longer the naive girl whom Pookhi trapped easily. i am glad u r liking her here. no comments about the show coz the indian daily soaps has always shown the lady is weaker. She may take drastic step towards the vamp but only after bearing a lot but still they are weaker in front of their mils n hubbies. Thank u for liking it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


I love my stalker...See on ur order I gave the next update quickly.

M happy u r liking the update.. But do not dance in college. I am assuming that u r in college.😆

Kalpi is taking steps towards knowing the facts but she will still fact time to believe the innocence of the person who she is trying to hate from last 5 years,

Gauri..😕 Quite possible.


going on 12th.. uske baad toh I'll no more be a stalker will come only on sunday😭
so i'm free to dance😆

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