Why casual writing for lover boy, Swayam Shekhwat?

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 11 years ago

Off lately D3 story has really become so difficult to understand and it goes over my head as a bouncer many a times -_-

Well Swayam's character has been shown as a perfect leader who is not only managing his juvenile team but also giving inputs as a member, mentor and friend. Yes he is the only sensible member when it comes to team D3.

But when it comes to lover boy and a BF, where does he leaves his sensibility and dedication? Today's abandon corridor scene was nicely written and executed, but there was something missing. And that something was missing from the lover boy's side, swayam's side.

Dunno why but his attitude has become so casual towards sharon.

She gifted him a diary and indirectly hinted that she wants his exclusive time. But his reactions were very casual after that.

Swayam's character as a lover boy has been butchered many times in last seven months. It is the basic essence of his character, please don't ignore it CVs.

He should do something special for sharon now, its high time.

Edited by cscs - 11 years ago

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cutiee0034

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Posted: 11 years ago

Swayam ko ekbar intense toh dusre hi moment mein dumb dikhane ki kya zarurat hai?? 😡 Sharon ne q appo diary diya ye baat saare fans samajh gaye Swayam nahi samjha😭 .Swayam pls understand she needs your tym and attention. 😭 How can Swayam be so dumb? Nil ya kisi ka phone aate hi why he always have to run? thik se Sharon ko goodbye nahi bolta. 😭 Sharon was once again hurt. oh god. Swayam aur Sharon mein prob hone wali hai ab I think. Sharon ne intimate moments k baare mein socha but not Swayam??😲 How? Usse toh sabse pehle sochna chahiye tha. Also mujhe laga k friday k epi mein uss intimate moments mein kuch edit kiya gaya jo aj dikha . When Sharon was thinking, tab ek moment aisa dikha jaha Swayam deeply kisses her hand when Sharon keeps her hand on his mouth. Ye Fri ko nahi dikhaya tha. Pata nahi aur kya kya edit kia gaya. 😡

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stardust2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

I beg to differ here. Since i am now out of college and in the corporate world, i can promise u this is how life gets. The BF GF thing is college would not be same once u enter the big bad world.

When responsibilities pile up, you are always in short of time. With more things to manage, there are more things to worry abt. Expecting swayam to give 100% time to sharon is not practical...especially so now since he is in self-doubt mode abt his role as d3 academy lead. If Rey was around, swayam would not be this lost. Swayam seems lost and confused abt how to manage the D3 academy and his students are not helping much.

Also i think sharon's side of work is being ignored completely. Given raghav n ishita's eqaution i would be more worried abt sharons academy than D3. D3 team has old team mates, and swayam has to manage only the other half. With sharon, whole team is new and leads are not upto mark yet. Sharon should be more panicky than swayam actually.😆

Long story short, Time and situations do result is changes in one's character. Sharon seems to get it, since she is not complaining. Yes it feels bad but you take it in your stride and go on rather than cribbing to your partner always. Sharon is handling it right but fangirls are not. 😊

Edited by stardust2011 - 11 years ago

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--Anaya--

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Posted: 11 years ago

do not understand why Swayam is turned as those idiotic television hero characters who give a damn about their relationships just because they get busy..I thought Swayam was an exception. But cvs hv turned him as such.

How come Swayam do NOT consider Sharon's POV? How come he is shown so blind to Sharon from past 9 months?? Swayam is never meant to be so casual about Sharon and his relationship. Why is he shown that way? He is NOT like typical hero character. He acknowledges and values relationships. That's the uniqueness of him and its missing. So disappointing.

Its good to see Swayam occupied vth work n all busy but Swayam as a lover boy character rather an epic character who always valued relationships is NOT being justified and that since MONTHS. That Swayam should hv been justified at some point. At least through a MONOLOGUE. What would it cost?

Ameeta need to come out of her Saas Bahu mindset and stop spoiling Swayam's uniqueness. This is NOT how Swayam is.

Edited by Anaya.SwaRon - 11 years ago

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

Role reversal _/\_ again

His BF side is ignored and neglected badly

One day he is shown Carin BF which he is but how his work is affecting their relationship he is not realizing it

His changed priorities are irking me the most

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

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Posted: 11 years ago

They are happily playing with both the characters of SS to suit the plot of other characters and its really pathetic to see this happening. There is just nothing show for SS just random scenes, and this show has become hell boring coz of that

only tolerating this show for VS and hoping for some good scenes of SS and the old gang

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cutiee0034

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: stardust2011
I beg to differ here. Since i am now out of college and in the corporate world, i can promise u this is how life gets. The BF GF thing is college would not be same once u enter the big bad world.
When responsibilities pile up, you are always in short of time. With more things to manage, there are more things to worry abt. Expecting swayam to give 100% time to sharon is not practical...especially so now since he is in self-doubt mode abt his role as d3 academy lead. If Rey was around, swayam would not be this lost. Swayam seems lost and confused abt how to manage the D3 academy and his students are not helping much.

Also i think sharon's side of work is being ignored completely. Given raghav n ishita's eqaution i would be more worried abt sharons academy than D3. D3 team has old team mates, and swayam has to manage only the other half. With sharon, whole team is new and leads are not upto mark yet. Sharon should be more panicky than swayam actually.😆

Long story short, Time and situations do result is changes in one's character. Sharon seems to get it, since she is not complaining. Yes it feels bad but you take it in your stride and go on rather than cribbing to your partner always. Sharon is handling it right but fangirls are not. 😊

but this is not about any random boy .Its about Swayam, the ultimate lover boy. For whom Sharon was his priority. Moreover Swayam can very well balance between personal and professional life. And now that Swaron are officially a couple, he should be more attentive towards Sharon. What is more irritating is that Swayam is not able to read her face? 😲 The day when Sharon comes at Swayam's house and says ki 'Mom ne kaha ke agar main ghar late aayi toh mom mere liye khana nahi rakhegi', and Swayam believed it?😲 Swayam ko immediately pata chalna chahiye tha that she is upset for some other reason. Same thing happened on Sharon's bday. It was a disaster. 'Soup se bhar gaya pet' and Swayam again believed that? 😲 today again this appo diary wala thing , Swayam cud not understand what Sharon is indicating😲. I think Swayam character ki consistency maintain nahi ho rahi hai. Swayam should be Swayam afterall. Usse sabsa zyada koi cheez affect karti hai then that is Sharon. Even i do'nt like Swayam and Huma hug also. How is Swayam so casual about it. Swayam's one of the best dialogue ko shayad CVs bhul gaye hai- Tumse related koi bhi cheez mere liye casual nahi hoti.

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cscs

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: stardust2011
I beg to differ here. Since i am now out of college and in the corporate world, i can promise u this is how life gets. The BF GF thing is college would not be same once u enter the big bad world.
When responsibilities pile up, you are always in short of time. With more things to manage, there are more things to worry abt. Expecting swayam to give 100% time to sharon is not practical...especially so now since he is in self-doubt mode abt his role as d3 academy lead. If Rey was around, swayam would not be this lost. Swayam seems lost and confused abt how to manage the D3 academy and his students are not helping much.

Also i think sharon's side of work is being ignored completely. Given raghav n ishita's eqaution i would be more worried abt sharons academy than D3. D3 team has old team mates, and swayam has to manage only the other half. With sharon, whole team is new and leads are not upto mark yet. Sharon should be more panicky than swayam actually.😆

Long story short, Time and situations do result is changes in one's character. Sharon seems to get it, since she is not complaining. Yes it feels bad but you take it in your stride and go on rather than cribbing to your partner always. Sharon is handling it right but fangirls are not. 😊

First of all swayam is no ordinary guy an dsorry to say its not only about one single incident that has proved his casual attitude towards sharon and his love. From last seven months his lover boy image has been butchered.
coming to swayam and sharon's academy, well i guess both of them are doing enough things for it and sharon is a hard tough master and on the other hand swayam is calm, composed and sensible one. The basic essence of both of their characters has been shown.
But here the point is about love story. Sorry to say but Swayam's character has been written so casually, specifically from the lover boy point of view. He was always intense and neevr casual when it comes to sharon.
And be it fangirl or sharon, nobody is liking this casual treatment to swayam's character.
ps- i thought today fangirls will bash me, but here i am being called a fangirl. I loved it 😆

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 11 years ago

exactly SWAYAM in no ordinary character and his love to sharon is toh most defo not ordinary...he is THE LOVERBOY of THE DIVA sharon

i know he has responsibility n all but he is swayam who handles everything soo maturely he is capable enough to give exclusive time to his sharon and also run his academy successfully but cv's are showing ordinary swayam not THE LOVERBOY swayam

he is sensible, mature, philosophical, saint, caring towards all, helping all, strong, practical, a leader, the most logical person but above all HE WAS, IS AND WILL BE THE LOVERBOY OF SHARON why cant cv's justify all his role he is no ordinary he is very special very unpredictable person as swayam once said *predictable...predictable is so boring who wants to be predictable*

but cv's are making his character very much predictable