Zaya FF 'Pain In Love' Last Part pg 82 [15/12] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Aroo i read it before

But i am not sure is it the same story😉

I am in anyways😃

Update soon

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😆 😆 wahi wahi asy...
But I frgt the title 😕


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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Nice one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Seems interesting...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Aroo i read it before

But i am not sure is it the same story😉

I am in anyways😃

Update soon

Thanks for pm




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hehe wait for it then..
cool 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: gowtu

Nc start
Intrstng story... Loved it..

Do continue aroo...
Mujhe add kar jaha karna hai :-P lolll
But pm me :-)



thanku gowtu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hey dude its amzing u write osm n plz cont. n plz add me in pm list n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
salam, yes i know that 35 likes are not done yet but as the update was ready and i wanted to discuss about pm's i thought to update now only..and do read the little info about pm's please, thanks in advance
ohkay now enjoy reading😊

PART 2

'kya?' he stood up from the couch shocked 'aliya yahan hai bhopal mai, no ways you must be kiddinng ayaat' zubair said not believing her 'no zubair, she is right, aliya bhopal mai hai, or aj raat mangni mai bhe ayege wo' barkat said supporting ayaat 'ya ALLAH mjhe to yakeen he nahe ho raha!!' zubair exclaimed 'yakeen to huma bhe nahe ho raha tha bhaijan, aliya Gulam haider jo 5 saal pehle achanak se gayab hogaye the wo is tarah wapis ayege'

'aliya? Ayaat baji yeh aliyakon hai?' trio turn towards the door as gauher called out aliya's name.. 'tum usse nahe jante gauher' said ayaat 'isiliye to poch rahe hun k ye aliya kon hai?' gauher reasoned 'aliya humare bohat purane dost hai...' she paused 'pata hai gauher she was so intelligent even usne university mai top kiya tha' 'university?...baji ap unse kab milay thay?' 'university ke pehle day, bht unique mulakat the hum sab ki' 'acha...baji mujhe bataen na kya hua tha?'


~~flashback~~

Ayaat, zubair, zain, barkat and rizwan were going towards there class as it was the first day and they don't want to miss there lecture, a girl was going from the other side and she winked in zain's direction while going, zain giggled and then turned to catch a glimpse of her like a playboy and when he turned he bump into another girl, they both fall on the floor and the four tried to suppress there laughter, zain was lost in her beauty...he had held her waist so tightly, that girl was trying to relief herself but she can't...zubair unable to control anymore laughed out a loud bringing zain back to his senses, he stood up abruptly while the four were laughing irritating him

'you...can't you see, blind' he said to the girl 'excuse me, not me but you are blind...khud dosra taraf dekh kar chal raha, takrae bhe khud or sorry bolna k bajae mujhe blame kar raha ho...khadus...' Zain tried to shot back but she ignored him and start picking her books, and after picking them all she left.


they all tried to make zain calm, and then they went to there class, after entering in the class, they all occupied front seat and settled down but next seat to zain was empty and then they all were surprised because that girl entered in the same class searching for a seat, and then there teacher entered into the class and start introducing him

'hello students, i m your senior teacher, MK sharma, you all can call sharma sir, and now i...' he stopped when he looked at that girl who was still standing in the entrance, he pointed her 'excuse me...Ms ?' 'aliya...aliya gulam haider' she replied 'ohkay Ms aliya why are you standing here?' he asked 'sir i did'nt found any place to settle down' sir sharma looked here and there and pointed her to sit on the very next seat to zain 'go there and sit down' he ordered

when she looked at zain she mumbled 'inhe koi or jaga nahe mile the' she silently moved towards that chair and sharma sir told everyone to introduce themselves, all students start introducing, maximum everyone's father were rich...now it's time of rizwan

Rizwan:-hello sir, my name is rizwan qadir, i got 82% last year and my father runs some factories in bhopal'

Ayaat:-hello sir, my name is ayaat hashim, i got 85% last year and my father is a business man

then zubair introduced as same as ayaat but he 76% last year.

Barkat:-hello sir, i m barkat Usman Abdullah , my father is a business man, i got 80% last year.

Ain:-hello sir, i m Zain Usman Abdullah , i got 89% last year, my father is a business man.

sharma sir:-nice now it's ur time Ms aliya, introduce yourself

Aliya:-hello sir, my name is aliya gulam haider...my father is clerk in a government office

she can't continue because everyone start discussing about her status

'ye larke is university mai kaise parh rahe hai' thought ayaat 'hmmm, humare to fees he more than 20,000 hai, to ye yahan kaise' suggested rizwan 'kiya guyz, let her finish...' barkat interrupted there conversation while sharma sir noticed that aliya is feeling sad so he shouted

sharma sir:-shut up students, let her finish, Ms.aliya continue.

Aliya:-yes sir...sir i got 98% last year and i m studying here on scolarship...' 'wow, i guess tum wo pehle student ho is class mai jise scolarship mile hai, ur father must be so proud of you...by the way students today's class was just for your intro, we will continue tomorrow...' said sir sharma proudly to her and left..

Ayaat moved towards aliya 'wow, 98%...tum to bht intelligent lagte ho' ayaat praised her 'thank you' aliya smiled at her 'by the way, i m ayaat' ayaat introduced 'and i m aliya' the shook hands 'or mai barkat, ye mere bhaijan zain, ye zubair or ye rizwan' 'hy everyone and yes sorry' said aliya 'sorry kisliye' asked rizwan 'wo bahar maine zara rude behave kiya, wo mjhe class nahe mil rahe the' ''itne bure nahe ye"thought zain smiling

'ohkay so now friends' zubair asked extending his hand 'friends...' she replied and shook her hands with his


~~flashback ends~~

'kuch hi days mai wo humare group mai shamil hogaye, huma uski adaat ho chuke the' ayaat said 'kitne mohabbat karte tha na bhaijan aliya se, unke liye to bhaijan ne abu takse jhagra kiya' said barkat sadly 'kya? Zain bhaijan ne usman uncle se jhagra...no ye nahe ho sakta, wo to kabhe aesa nahe karte to phir?' asked gauher shocked 'wo abu hamesha sa chahte the k bhaijan unke buisness partner ki beti asia se nikah karain taka abu ka business or strong hojae lakin bhaijan ko to aliya se mohabbat he karne laga isiliye to wo aj tak uska intezar kar raha hain' explained barkat

'zain bhaijan aliya se bht mohabbat karte hain?' asked gauher 'han bohat ziada' 'to unho ne aliya ko bataya Q nahe?' 'darta tha, lakin jab batane ki koshish to aliya najana kaha chale gaye' 'matlab?' 'jab humara university mai last day tha jab results announce hue to aliya ne top kiya tha or isiliye humne sab ne uske liye ek party arrange ki zain k ghar, or zain na decide kiya k wo aliya ko uske feelings k bara mai batadaiga lakin aliya to kabhe ae he nahe' said zubair

'kyun nahe ayen?' 'kyun k wo chale gaye, huma bina bataye or aj 5 saal baad humne usse bat ki' said ayaat kya zain bhaijan ko pata hai k wo aj raat sagai mai ayenge?' 'nahe...lakin hum unhe bata dainga' barkat said happy with this 'mai bhe chalun...please' gauher requested sweetly 'acha chalo'

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'sach...sach zubair aliya...aliya bhopal mai hai?' 'han zain. or aj raat wo mangni mai humse milne bhe ayege' 'mjhe yakeen nahe hota...jis tarah wo huma 5 saal pehle chor kar gaye the, wo wapis nahe a sakte' he said with a hint of pain 'hum bhe yahe soch raha tha but uske baton se aesa lag raha tha k wo jana nahe chahte the' ayaat said placing her hand on his shoulder

'kiya wo aj bhe waise he hoge barkar?' zain asked 'kaise zain bhaijan?' gauher asked 'kaise batao, alfaz he nahe' 'please batayen...' she said making a puppy face

'bht khubsurat, usse apne haq k liye awaz uthani ati the, sharmana to ata he nahe tha usse, apne abu se bohat pyar karti the, har bat mai jokes, sab ke chere muskurahat le ati the, kise ki takleef nahe dekh sakte the wo, sab ki madad karna bina kise matlab ke, sab ka khayal rakha,...humesha sub ko khush rakhna...or humare liye to wo kuch bhe kar sakte the...'

he was lost in her thoughts, while other blushed

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'ab mai waise nahe hun, mai badal chuke hun, halat badal chukain hain, mere zindagi badal chuke hai, wo aliya jo asani se sab par bharosa karlate the wo kahen kho gaye hai' she sayed to herself...she stopped reading that file, and closed her eyes to feel relax...najana sab kaise react karainga mujhse milke, or mere ab is naye zindagi ke bara mai jankar..'


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that was it...hope you guyz will like it, why aliya left? will be revealed soon, condition is to hit like and leave back your feedback😳 and yeah it is the start so i am pming everyone individually but guyz please from now those who wants pm and are'nt in my buddy list, please send me buddy request for further pm's, i want pm individually everyone, it's something we call tiring work and take a lot of time
hope you will understand and please if u are really liking it then try to promote it to others too, it will be so nice of you

thanks
aroo😃
Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Beautifully written
Loved it
Thanx for d pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
oh my god this is amzing u r jst osm plz plz plz cont soon n thanx for the pm
i know i m being greedy bt plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Beautifully written sister
I read that story but I will keep quite as u said little sister
Count me in as well.
Plz edit few lines as u gave hint urself which couple it was written
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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