Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16) - Page 11

Originally posted by: cappacuino5

Amazing !
U have potrayed Draupadi's emotion so well !
I have always been intrigued about the kind if relationship Arjun n Draupadi shared with each other !
So eager to read what happens next !!
Pls continue soon !!!!!

Originally posted by: iturkhahs

Thank you for the PM

Very beautiful. Loved from where you started. Love was in the air.

Waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

love it well done

Originally posted by: -bharti

Its refreshing that you started with a happy memory of D's life...😊

Thank u so much 😳

Contrary to popular belief I always believe that she had her share of happiness and love in her life even after facing many struggles and atrocities...

even I do feel she had her share of happiness

I do not want to remember Draupadi as the woman who was wronged all her life, of course she was wronged but she was also the chosen one and the chosen ones most often than not have a challenging life...😊

Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

@Gayathri:

What an Amazing start to the write up..with ArDi giving us a Flying start!👏..I Loved reading every bit of it & it was so worth the wait!😳😃..I could actually picture what Draupadi was going thru' at that moment, walking with the Love of her Life..her Man..😊😃..The smile, the Blush on her cheeks, the emotions..was all so picturesquely written!👏..Love your style of writing..so Deep & Effective!😊👏😃

If this the start to the story, the rest of it is sure gonna Rock as well!🥳..So please do update soon!😉

Originally posted by: hpatgiri

U have beautifully expressed Draupadi's first & happy moments with her husband. Loved it. 😊

Please update soon. I m excited to read the next chapter. 😊

Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

your writing has a beautiful soul to it 👏

Thank you so much...am overwhelmed ☺️

preface - simply loved that it! the fragments of her life are presented so concisely, with delicate yet apt choice of words ... loved the last line, where her struggles still continue long after her death!

Thank you...I do feel her struggles are still continuing

introduction - the jitters, the anxiety and the innocence of first love is graphed so well ... the sparkle in her eyes, the glow in her cheeks, the smile on her lips ... one of her most happiest moments if not the only!!

Thank you so much.. I was worried about whether it will be liked.. glad that u loved it 😳

my apologies for being late! 🤗 can't wait for the rest of the saga to unfold!!

Its ok... its neva too late 😉

Originally posted by: Meself

It was as beautiful as it could be Gayatri!

Am touched! ☺️

And I must say this that I am happy that you began with this rather than her birth or the swayamvar. This possibly was the only happy turning in her life before Yajnaseni's life was consumed by the same fire that she was born out of!

Thank you so much... yes you said it perfectly.. yajyaseni's life was consumed by the same fire she was born out

Arjun had won her, she was meant to be his wife but then why did he stay silent all through out? His silence is what pierces and hurts the most! It was as if he didn't wish to claim her as wife. Maybe that will again be another issue to debate on.

Yes! This can go on as a debate.. Am here in an attempt to find an unseen layer in his silence.. as her suffering breaks me down...

Anyways; I simply loved the first person narrative here. Such a happy Draupadi we've seldom seen after the entire division of her and her feelings. She had so very well noticed Arjun's sharp eyes. Wish it were so in reality, maybe then Arjun could have seen what words couldn't tell!

Hopefully I too wish Arjun could have seen what words couldnt tell and wishing hard it was like this in real too ... Thank you so much for the appreciation.. ua comment is what I always look upon!

Please be fast with the updates...I am really impatient for next installments in this fic!!

I will do my best to give updates on time 😳

Love,

Shivani

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