Maneet FF.. DushtDanav ki Mishti~chap#9(page-50) - Page 18

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hi thanks 4 updating! Wonderful update! Well written! Thanks 4 da pm! Maan saves Geet frm Kuku's trap! Sasha miffed as he plan failed! Kurban hua sequence! Maaneet dance! update soon!
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SCENE 1

Geet is sitting on bed and cryingg

Suddenly door knocks by any one very hardly

Geet: (she becomes so afraid) kon hai??? Main nay poocha kon hai??? Kon hai???

Door knocksss

Kuku: main kuku tm darwaza kholo...

Geet is very tensed and not opening door

Geet: main darwaza nahi kholon gi,,tum jao

Kuku: I said open the doorrr

Geet: I will not open the door..go away kuku!! Go away

Geet thinks: kia krun maan pta nahi kahan ho ga kia krun (and crying)

Suddenly geet sees phone and pick it and make a call to maan

Maan: helloo

Geet: (start badly crying) hellooo

Maan: hello Kon???

Geet: maan main geeet (cries)

Maan: kia hua geet?? Tm ro kyun rahii ho?? Geet kia hua mjhe btao geet???

Geet: maan kuku aya hai and he is saying to open door (crying)

Maan: geet!! Tm darwaza mat kholo main abhi a raha hun geet main a raha hun...don't cry...

Kuku is still knocking

Maan comes and sees kuku

Kuku: aik baar tm darwaza khol lo phr daikhna!!

Maan: Heyyy kuku tmhain main nain mna kia tha na geet ko tang krnay say??

Maan k haath main bag hota hai wo phangta hai and kuku ki jo dulahi krt hai maan us ko jo dhoota dhoota hai ufff..

Maan: ab niklo yahan say

Kuku runs and leaves hotel

Maan: geet darwaza kholo!! Main maan!!!

Geet opens door maan enters in room geet is in maan's coat

Suddenly geet hugs maan and geet starts crying maan is astonished and maaahhhiii

Maan: ab main a gaya hun mat ro bsss chup kr jao

And they make maneet's pose maan is in maahi condition geet is feeling secure in his arms and maahhhiii

Maaahhiii maahiii maaahhhii hoo ho ho hohooo maahi vey maahi maahi vey maahiii mahhhiii ho ho ho hooo maahhii

Suddenly geet realizes and she wakes up and maan stiffsss

Maan: ummm wo yeh (with giving bag) lo change kr lo!! Main bahir tmhara wait kr raha hun

Geet moves her head in yes

SCENE 2

Geet and maan exiting from hotel

Maan: Geet tm ja k car may betho...main abi reception pr keys return kr k aata hun...

Geet: main b tmharay sath chalti hun...

Maan: tm yhaaan pr hi ruko...

Geet: nhi maan...I m cming with u...mujhay dr lg rha ha...
Maan: K!!!(Annoying)

SCENE 3:

(Geet n Maan in Car,,Maan driving car at a v.high speeed)

Maan: geet! Ye rona dhona bnd krdo... itx not the matter to b cried upon,,, juxxt stop cryng...

Geet: Whaaat??? What u said itx not a dat much big matter,, Hey Maan!!! U cant feel...Tm insaan ni ho,,, tmhay insaaan ki feelings ki koi qdr ni hai...tm ni smjh sktay,...

Maan: what u r saying?? Juxt stop it... N I hate crying girls!!!

(Geet still crying...n now more badly...Maan gives her, his handkerchief...)

Geet: mujhay ni chahiyae..

Maan: ly lo...(geet takes hndkrchif) aur haan 1 aur baat!!

Dadi maa ko aaj ki party wali baaat k baray my mt btana,,, she ix a heart patient.. wo prishan ho jayein g... agr wo kuch na b bolein tb b wo andr sy parishan hi rhein g... aur boht tension lein g... u understand??...Geet! Got it??

(geet givs no rply...maan sees geet...she is sleeping...suddenly on a turn, her head tiltx n cmx on th Maan's sholder..)

Maan: Geet!! Utho geet... [Flash backs: kuku gvng waitor to mix smthng in drink, kuku gvng drink to geet, kuku taking geet 2 room, n geet crying in the spot lite]( maan thinks: let hr sleep maan...it wx a reali tuf day 4 hr)

SCENE 4

Car stops in the front of the house

Maan: geet utho ghr a gaya hai...

Geet is still sleeping

Maan: she is disgusting

And he leaves her sleeping in the car.

Maan enters in the house

Maan: dadi maa!! Dadi maaa!!!

Nakul: sir dadi ma so chuki hain

Maan: ok

Maan goes and change the dress and lays down on the bed

Now maan is changing his positions over the bed, and non intentionally thinking about her.

Maan: yeh larki b naaa abhi tk car main hi ho gi ab mjhe hi jana ho gaa...

SCENE 5

Maan sees geet

She is still sleeping in the car

He carries her to the room and make her sleep on the bed and for sme mins he is in maaahi condition but leaves roommm

SCENE 6

Maan is in out house and thinking about geet and doing karate

SCENE 7

Geet is in room wakes up

Geet thinks about the last day and starts crying suddenly she thinks about maan and wipes her tears and feels secure.

Geet: maan is not so bad he is so sweet and caring.


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Edited by -KitKit- - 10 years ago
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Wonderfull n amazing...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me
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hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! Maan saves her yet again! Maan affected by her n behaves indifferently to hide his feelings! Maan gives the clothes n will wait 4 her at the car. Geet scared! Maan annoyed! They go home! Geet crying! Maan hates crying! She tells Geet nt to tell dadi as she is a heart patient! Geet agrees! Geet asleep! Maan leave sin in the car wen she does nt wake up! Maan cannot sleep! he leaves Geet in her room! Maan at the outhouse wrking out thinking of her! Geet awake n thinks tht Maan is so sweet! update soon
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