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SCENE 1

Geet is in her room and wakes up

Geet: maan is so nice so caring bt thora sa rude hai pr itna chalta hai main room main kaisay ai main raat ko car main hi so gai thi (she analyzes that maan brought her here)

She smiles

Geet: maan meri kitni care krta hai (maaahhhiii)

She starts thing about him, all the scenes,

Geet thinks about last nyt and starts crying

Geet: aaj main college kaisay jaon g?? log kia kahain gaye main aaj chuti kr leti hun meray liyae yeh hi theek rahay gaa..

Suddenly door knocks geet wipes her tears dadi enters

Dadi: good morning betay

Geet: good morning

dadI: betay ap abhi tak tyaar nahi huin or aap ka chehra kyun utra hua hai..

geet: bs dadi maan tabiyat theek nahi hai

dadi: kia hua betay doctr ko bulaon???

Geet: nahi dadi maa sr main dard hai theek ho jaye ga or aaj main college nahi ja rahi araam krun gi theek ho jye ga

Dadi: theek hai beta ap araam krain hum aap ka nashta yahin behj detay hain

Geet: theek hai dadi maa

SCENE 2

Maan comes on dinning table

Maan: good morning dadi maa

He sees geet's chair and she is not here maan's eyes is searching geet his eyes is questioning about geet.

Dadi: nakul geet ka nashta us k room main behj do

Maan: geet nashtay pay nahi aye gi???

Dadi: beta aap ko kb say kisi ki parwa honay lgi???

Maan: nahi dadi maa wo hr roz hoti hai na is liye ppoochh raha tha (with confuse)

Dadi: acha wo geet ki tbiyat theek nahi hai is liyae wo aaj college b nahi jaye gi...

Maan thinks "geet sirf raat ki waja say collge nahi ja rahi yeh geet b naa!!!"

SCENE 3

Maan is in college

while coming to the class he listens, Every body is talking about geet and last nyt's incident

Sasha: good morning maan raat ko bohat mza aya tm itni jaldi chalay gaye thay

Maan: hmmm main kal k baaray main koi baat nahi krn chata do you understand????

Sasha: aaa haaann theek hai

Maan is feeling in college that college is empty, nothing is here in college

SCENE 4

Geet while sitting in her room crying due to last night!

Dadi comes, She wipes her tears and lays down.

Dadi: geet beta yap ki tbiyat kaisi hai

Geet: ab theek hai

Dadi: betay room main hi behti rho gi to tbiyat or kharab ho gi bahir niklo lawn main launch main behto

Geet: jii dadi maa

Dadi: good girl

SCENE 5

Maan comes in the house

Maan: dadi maa!!!! Dadi maaa!!!

Dadi: betay aap a gaye

Maan: dadi wooo ammm geet kahan hai???

Dadi: geet ka to naam hi mt lijiyae pta nahi usay kia hua hai subah say apnay room main behti hui thi abhi us ko main nain kaha bahir niklo tbiyat or kharab ho jaye gi abhi lawn main gai hai maan aap say aik baat poochun?????

Maan: ji dadi maa poochain!

Dadi: kal raat ko kuch hua tha kia????

Maan: nahi dadi maa kuch b nahi hua main abhi geet say mil k aata hun

Dadi: theek hai beta

SCENE 6

Geet is in lawn sitting on bench and crying,

Maan comes and sits with geet

Maan: geet!!!

Geet sees maan and wipes her tears

Maan: geet is tarhan ghr main behtnay say problem solve nhi ho ga utho bahir niklo or logon ka samna kro aisay log tmharay baaray main or bura smjhain gayee...

Geet: maan main kia krun mjh main himat hi nahi hai kisi ka samna krnay ki

Maan: geet yeh theek nahi hai utho or sb ka samna kro

Geet: maan (with crying) main akailay sb ka samna nahi kr skti nahi kr skti

Maan: theek hai geet Kal college main main tmharay saath hi rahun ga

Geet sees towards maan shockingly,

Geet start crying with some happiness

Geet: thank u maan thanks a lot tm hi ho jo meri feelings smjhta hai thanks maan kal meri help krnay ka thanksss..

Maan: ab yeh rona dhona bnd kro, or utho andr chalo!"

Geet: ok!

She smiles, and goes in the house!

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Precap

Maan comes out from the car,

everybody sees that any girl is coming with MK.

Every body: wowww yeh MK k saath????


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Edited by -KitKit- - 10 years ago
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loved it...
maan being caring...good
continue soon
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Nice part geet likes maan nw nd she didnt go 2 clg coz of last nite's incident
maan feels whole clg is empty nd tels geet dat 2 face d prblm nd assures her dat he ill be wit her
waitng 4 d nxt part 😃
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awesome update
geet scared to people after last night happenings!!
but maan assures her to help her!
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lovely update!!!!
finally maan is showing some compassion😃
waiting for the next update eagerly!😳

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