os: unspoken words of love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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unspoken words of love
the rain has been pouring since da morning..da weather seemed so beautiful..nandini loved da baby drops of water dat were showering on her face..she walked on da road..one step after another...yet it somehow felt lyk dancing...every thing seemed so perfect lyk a picture..she spread her both hands..nd tried to feel da rain more intensely.. she wrapped her hands around her nd looked at da sky wid a big smile.."da day is so beautiful,so perfect,..nd ur presence completes it" she thought nd blushed at da same time
Manik closed da door of his car nd kicked it...'it had to break down now..she mst hav been waiting 4 me 4 hours" he thought...da thought disgusted him...he hated da rain...as always...it always managed to create some problems 4 him...he removed da water drops 4m his face...bt it still managed to make his face wet..dat irritated him..rain is something not 4 da monsters...specially when it is Manik..as he moved his eyes 4m da car nd shifted his sight to da other side suddenly something angelic caught his eyes...a girl standing on another side of da road...she semed to njoy da rain more than anything else...her red top matched well wid da surroundings...she looked lyk an angle...Manik couldn't shift his eyes 4m her...suddenly da weather started to seem so beautiuful to manik...da drops of water..the wet nd muddy roads...all seemed perfect..it felt angelic...heavenly...pure...manik gazed at da girl..his eyes found out who she was...she was da girl he hated..da girl whom he couldn't stand 4 a second..da girl whom he considers to b a trouble..da girl who dared to fi8 against da Manik Malhotra..yes..she was nandini...Manik didn't want to look at her or gaze her like this...bt hisd eyes were nt ready to accept his decisions...this girl looked different today..very verydifferent...there was something so pure so beautiful in her...it seemed lyk two people were standing alone in da rain...as if da whole world came 2 a standstill..Manik felt so strongly 4 this girl..she was smiling at da rain...she was simply playing wid da rain...yet itseemed lyk an angle was showering petals...
as Manik kept on gazing at her he suddenly saw a hand wrapping around her waist...yeah..da hand was Dhruv's...suddenly he remembered dat nandini was none other dan Dhruv's girlfriend...his bsties's love of life...this thought 4 some reason ached his heart...it felt wounded...yet when it comes 2 dhruv he could sacrifice anything...even if he has to keep da words of his heart unspoken 4 ever

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love.my.monster thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey..this is my first os in this forum..i knw I've made many mistakes...nd i'm nt even a gud writer..yet I felt lyk writing...so I gave it a try..plz leave ur precious comments..dat would b a encouragement 4 me..
keep smiling
😊samanta
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was awesome!! Poor manik he sacrificed his undiscovered love for dhruv!! Please write more!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww my poor baby Manik ... Love the story... So sweet and pure :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvrainaarti

That was awesome!! Poor manik he sacrificed his undiscovered love for dhruv!! Please write more!!

glad u liked it
😊thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Aww my poor baby Manik ... Love the story... So sweet and pure :)

thanks dear...😊it's my pleasure dat u liked it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww u made my mornin dear, jst felt the rain in me whn Dhruv entered 😳 such beautiful lines Luved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was really cute! :*
Both MaNan and DhruNi handled beautifully!
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Wow this is so beautiful one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it yaar 👏
at first i thought Nandu was talking abt the presence of Manik nd at the end smthing happened in my heart nd i don't know it felt strange
i love DhruNi bt i was feeling sad for Manik 😭
do write like this nd pm me😛

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