OS-Ashlok Seperation & their Mad Love for Each Other

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SEPERATION AND THE THEIR MAD LOVE FOR EACHOTHER..

After the dark there is always the bright light..

After the storm there is always the rain and calm..

After the seperation there is always the haunting...

After the problem resolved there is always happiness

For u and me and evry body..

But in mid there is this.. Day where

Every breath i take, every move i make,

Im thinking of this day.. When i will be with you...

Ever and forever..

( this poem i wrote..)

The below one.. I was reading and found good so... Pl read and enjoy...

SHLOKS AND ASTHA'S POV :

Soon, I'll feel your warm and loving touch, the softness of your lips will fall upon my face, I just know that Someday Soon, You and I will be together.

When Will We Be Together?

David L Yearwood

Someday soon, I'll feel the softness of your skin.
I'll see your beautiful eyes, and your sweet smile.
The sound of your voice, will be the music to my ears,
as will your words, I long to hear.

Someday soon, I'll smell your sweet perfume,
You really will be here... It won't be just a dream...
I can't wait for that day,
To open my heart to you...

Soon, I'll feel your warm and loving touch,
the softness of your lips will fall upon my face,
I just know that Someday Soon,
You and I will be together.

Love always, forever my love!

Regards
Deepa
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DEEPA...🤗The most beautiful poem.. Urs..and David's too...lovely poems very aptly...expressing Ashlok's love and separation...and the climax too.
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Originally posted by: akashavani

DEEPA...🤗The most beautiful poem.. Urs..and David's too...lovely poems very aptly...expressing Ashlok's love and separation...and the climax too.

Oh.. thanks a lot Vani dear... 🤗
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tks dear...
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You are welcome 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Deepu...A new avatar of Peot...
Nice poem dear...
So touching and lovely...
Astha and Shlok are missing each other very badly...
As Astha said there separation making them fall in love so mad...
Thus making there relationship more stronger day by day...
Lovely post...
Amazing work dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww Deepaa..Your poem is superb my dear..👍🏼

I loved ❤️it

And the second poem is also good..suits Aashlok perfectly👏
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Awesome poem Deepa👏..
absolutely Shlok and Astha are missing each other..
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wowww chechiii🤗
this is soo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful poem Deepa... Both d poems.
I just loved em❤️

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