Asya/Kabhi FF Teri Galiyan Part 8 updated on Pg 95 - Page 46

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys.
How are you all?
Finally i am back with an update.
This update is specialy for
Aaroo-thnku so much for promoting my ff, this means a llot to me. Nd asking for d update
Abi-for being with me and asking for the update.
Aishu-asking for d update.
Ok so here uh go.
Part 6 After that day there bond grew more stronger. There was a time when they couldnt bear eachothers presence but now they cant live without eachother. They come to college together and they take leave together.
Teachers also knew now that they take holiday on same day, so if one is absent all are absent.
Now they were sitting in the class.
Zoya sent message on group- guys i am not coming tomorrow, with a sad smiley.
Ayaan- why?
Zoya- i have a friend on IF vaishali, she is very sad because of minimum likes and comments she get on her story. A big thanks to her friend aaroo who promted her story and abi who supported her. So i am going somewhere so that i can divert my mind.
Asad- aww so swt of aaroo nd abi. nd uh too tht uh r sad for her. chalo hum bhi chalte hai. we ll have fun( sry yr koi aur bahana nahi mila but reason is true.)
All- ha chalte hai bahut time se sare lectures attend kar rahe hai. Haha
Laibaa- chalo lake side chalte hai main kabhi nahi gayi. zoya hamesha akele chali jati hai jab bhi mood off hota hai.
Asad- zoya tum vaha akeli chali jati ho? How could uh do this? You know ryt ki vo rasta kitna risky hai.
Himaira- aur danto asad isee yeh bahut ziddi hai humne kitna mana kia but nahi manti.
Zoya- haww tum sab mere against ho gaye.
Asad- zoya dont change the topic either promise tht uh ll not go there alone or nvr talk to me.
All- same here.
Zoya- ok yar i am sorry. I will not do this ahain. Plz dont say that uh wont talk to me. I cant live without uh guys.
She was still typing when teacher came to her and told her to get out of the class as using mobile phones was not allowed. All were laughing at her so she took revenge from her friends.
Zoya- ma'am main hi nahi asad, humaira, laibaa, rishabh, ayaan, aayat nd rizwan r olso talking. she said that with a smirk.
Teacher angrily- ol of uh get out of this class or submit your mobile phones here.
Without even wasting any second ol wrre out of the class.
Zoya was laughing like maniac when she saw all her friends taking there footwears off to beat hrr.
Zoya ran for her life- plz guys i am sorry yar. ab tum sab aise karoge kya?
Laibaa- chal thik hai tu bol rahi hai toh nahi marte.
All broke into laughter, ol wrre looking at them.
Rizwan- ma'am boli mobile dedo bahar nahi jana toh. par unhe kya pata hum toh betaab rehte hai bahar nikalne ke liye. Aur vaise bhi attendance toh lag hi gaye thi.
Aayat- ryt. chalo kal ka plan banate hai.
All left for their homes after making all arrangements.
Next day all were ready to go. 2 bikes and 2 scooties. Noone can ride alone as warned by asad. So all chose there partners.
Zoya- asad let me ride the scooty.
Asad- y zoya, i will ride na i am fine.
Zoya- i knw that but ivwant to ride as the weather is so good and like riding on that road.
Asad- ok.
Deep down asad knew that this was half truth, actually asad was having headache and zoya knew this so she made this excuse.
Zoya- sorry asad but kya karu uh r not feeling well so i said this lie but i love riding on this road. And i want to feel you hugging.
The journry started, it was half hour rid, asad slept hugging zoya as the ride started bcoz he was feeling miserable headache.
Zoya in her mind- yeh dekhlo inko yeh skuty chalana chahte the. vaise kitne cute lagte hai yej sote hue.
Rest all couples were enjoying there ride by singing songs and hooting.They were riding slowly enjoying there ride.
Zoya first rode fast so that she can maintain some gap so that dont get disturbed. She told evrryone about asad's headache.
Asya reached there and zoya woke him up.
Zoya-asad how are you now?
Asad-haww i am so sorry zoya i slept. actually my head was aching badly.
Zoys- its ok yar sab chal jata hai. Anyway how are uh now?
Asad- I am fyn. Mujhe itni mast nind aayi aaj.
Zoya blushed understanding his meaning. But thanks to the team they came and filled the environment with hoots, noise. All asked about asad's health and than started making plans for what to do.
They all played blind fold.
It was ayaan's turn everyone teased him but finally he caught zoya.
Zoya tried to hold someone but she failed and pouted her lips.
Asad saw her puppy face and thought of getting caught by her. All saw this and hooted but zoya thought they were hooting like this only as always.
***********
After playing blind fold all demanded asad to sing a song for all of them.
Asad started singing Pani da rang eyeing zoya.
Feeling his intense gaze on her zoya lowered her gaze
Ol noticed the eye contacts and blushes they share.
Everyone knew asya were in love and they decided to give them a hint personally.
After singing nd listenining everyone went for boating.
Each boat has seat for 4 so they sat in two boats.
They played water war, spashed water on eachother. Clicked photographes to capture the beautiful memories.
After having some more fun they returned home.
So how was the update.
Next update after 60 likes and 30 comments
Till than miss me.
Plz check the note on page 65
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Note:- Guys i was about to quit my ffs but my friend abi and aaroo supported me and motivated to write.
If uh ol think that i am a good writer than i should get atleast 60 likes and 30+ comments. And if uh dont think i am deserving than there is no use of continuing my ff.
So its your wish to decide whether i am deserving or not.
Because its high time i should take some action bcoz now i dont have patience.
Next update will be posted after i get my demand fulfilled or this will be my last update.
I will wait for 1 week. If uh dnt get pms after that than understand that i quited.
Thanks.
Lots of love
Edited by MagsDhingra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another one ! Yay ! Me first ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
res

unres

aww my maggie was sad 😭 aenda sad hue to real maggie samajh kar i will eat u up 😡 😳

ohkay update..

awesome 👏

zoya ne sabko pakarwa diya 🤣

there bonding is ggetting very gpod and stronger

asya ☺️

hayee amazing..asya care for each other a lot 😳

cont soon and don't u dare quit writing 😡

Edited by asyaarshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey vish
first i m really sorry for not commenting on any of the updates..
holding my ears..

was really very busy..

u knw i hve so many unread pms..

so give me time
i'll surely comment..

and dont stop writing..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

update soon...
and yeah dosti mai no sorry and no thank u 😡 😳


Kar dia 😊
Itna kuch karne ke bad uh deserve thanku no mtr wht.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KabhiInMyHeart



Hello Di ...

How are u ??

What do u mean by For Now ??



Hii aishu baby.
I am fyn n uh?
Uh will come to knw when uh ll read the note
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra


Kar dia 😊
Itna kuch karne ke bad uh deserve thanku no mtr wht.



gud..mai jaldi unres krduge..abhi thoda practical ka work kr rhe hn 😳
no yer..it will like as if maine tm par ahsan kya ho..plz..
i wanted u to cont and Inn Shaa Allah..u will get 70+ likes 😃
MeDHellsAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



abhi bataya no need of thank u
🤗


There is need of thnku. Samjhi 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MagsDhingra


There is need of thnku. Samjhi 😡



no there is no need 😡
and agr itna dil kar raha hai tera thank u bolne ka to mera new OS on asya read kr or ek acha sa comment krde 😳 😆

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