SS: Sandstorm Pt.2 Pg.2

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"Do you know she lied?"referring to the old woman, who had just publicly denounced her only living family. For some reason, the look of disbelief on the young woman's face kept hunting him, it shouldn't have but it did. And it annoyed him no ends.


"They are in on it" he still couldn't believe how an entire village had given in to one oppressive tyrant and cut off someone so ruthlessly, "They cut her off" he said, "This isn't loyalty, its fear" he threw the clay pot in frustration, "I can't believe this shit happens even today!" He wanted to help this town, but Rudra's hands were tied until they took that first steps away from Tejawat.


Rudra watched the water spill as the clay pot hit the wall and broke into fragments, and just above that low wall, through the one sided mirror, he saw her, curled up against the cold floor, clinging on to herself, the tears had stopped but she hadn't stopped muttering those inaudible words, and that dazed look staring at something on the blank wall on the other side of the room. She had been there all afternoon since he had brought her back from the failed trip to Birpur, where her own people had denounced her, her one and only family had denied ever knowing her.


"Sir, should I get her some food?" Aman was always the voice of reason. Rudra wouldn't ever acknowledge it but Aman's calm was needed to balance Rudra' hotheadedness.


Rudra did not respond immediately, prompting Aman to walk to over where he was starring at her through the glass, "Sir, she hasn't had anything to eat for the last 48 hours. She looks traumatized, if the women's organisation get a whiff of this..."


Rudra turned to Aman not pleased with his compassion, "She is a bloody terrorist Aman"


"And a human being Sir" Aman stood firm, "She needs food" he wasn't backing down.


"She is one of them" there was a real lack of conviction in Rudra's voice even as he spoke.


"And she will be useless to us if she dies Sir" Aman stressed.


"She is shielding Tejawat" Rudra argued.


"Look at her sir" Aman urged Rudra to see the human side of this trauma, "May be she is just a victim in this Sir. Imagine for a moment what if she is an innoncent?" he knew Rudra was not the heartless bas***d he portrayed himself to be, "Sir, right now you need a doctor" pointing to the wound at the back, "Looks like the bleeding has started again, you need to get it dressed"


"I'll take care of everything here" Aman reassured a visibly tired Rudra. The stress of the last forty-eight hours had begun to show on his face.


Rudra was too tired to argue, he picked up his cell phone and dialed Laila, "Are you in town yet?"


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INDEX
Into - Pg.1
Part 1 - Pg.1
Part 2 - Pg.2

Links to some of my other works on Rangrasiya.

Short Story: Letting Go (Completed)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4010947


OS: Why the fear, Major Saab? 2/2

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4142574


OS: Mirage 2/2

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3932086


The next one in particular caught my attention now because I believe, it reflects the anticipation all of us felt when the show started back in January 2014.


Stage is set 1/1

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3869917


Harbinger of Change (Week 1)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3874225


Road to Nowhere (Week 2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/3881056/road-to-nowhere-2


Strings of Autumn (Week 3.1)

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3883112


Falling Leaves (Week 3.5)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/3888375/falling-leaves



Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago
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WOW!! Starting form the start ... thats nice ... would love to read it ...

Beautifully written ...

But one important question ... you will complete this SS before 19 and if not , then will you complete it after 19 (speculated RR ending date) ... I have seen many writers not updating their work after the show ends ... and I really dont like to read such incomplete fiction stories ...


And about this update ... I loved it :)


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Part 1

He woke up startled, heart pounding as the bullet scrapped the top of his right shoulder blade. Rudra touched his right shoulder on reflex and felt relieved almost instantly.

"But her wedding dress?" she asked, "What?" he asked right back, eyes still on the one who stood passively behind the little girl who was doing all the talking. The one who was drawing all the attention despite wanting not to.

"It's her wedding dress" she said and it pinched somewhere, "Paro's getting married tomorrow" these words still rung in his mind long after the dream was gone.

"Paro..." he took her name for the first time and he knew somewhere even in the darkest crevices of his heart that she was not one of them. That she was not a terrorist who was plotting against her land. And yet he couldn't quite shrug off this anger he felt every time he saw her. This strong emotion of feeling betrayed, and this inexplicable anger that coursed through him every time he saw her. It irked him and made him react violently, and in her case almost always cruelly.

Except for that first time, when she had run to his arms, under the blistering heat of the dessert sun, trying to escape those men - that day when he had chosen to take a bullet for her. Luckily it had only scrapped him.

As the disturbing thoughts refused to let him go.He flung away the bed covers, and rose up. The movement alerted Laila who had been sleeping peacefully next to him on the worn out bed of this shady hotel room, "Rudra..." she blinked dreamily, her beautiful eye lashes still drowsy with sleep, "What's wrong?" the concern was real as she scrambled to the other side of the bed to light up the flimsy lamp, losing the sheet that covered her modesty in the process.

Rudra turned to her and raised an eye-brow at her state, "I need to go back to HQ" he spoke emotionless, "But you promised to stay for the night" she didn't reach for the covers purposely hoping to entice him back to bed, "I travelled a long distance to be here tonight Rudra" she said with a mischievous glint in her eyes, "How can you walk away?" Laila knew his weakness, had preyed on it for all these years, tonight would be no different, "Come back here"

He picked up the covers that he had earlier flung to the floor and threw it at her, "Cover up and go back to sleep"

"But where are you going?" she knew this was inevitable, he was married to his job. The guns and the sense of power that it brought him was the biggest thrill for this man. She was content playing second fiddle.

She watched quietly taking in the sights as he dressed himself, "It's the Birpur case isn't it?" she prodded, she wasn't blind to his worry or the wounds at his back. Laila was well aware that this man wouldn't utter a word about the mission to her but that didn't deter her from trying to get him to talk, "Sometimes it helps to forget Rudra, come back and sleep"

He did not answer back.

"What's bothering you?" she asked again.

Rudra looked up and their eyes met, "There is a survivor" he lied. There wasn't a survivor, he had purposely let her live. He did not have an answer why.

"One of them?" curiosity got the better of Laila, he had never said as much before, ever. This was uncharted territory, so she had no clue how to handle this.

"No, one of us..." his response was enigmatic, "But she is ..."

"Wait it's a woman?" sleep was the last thing on her mind at this point, "The bride didn't die" he lied again.

"Parvati..." a wave of recognition hit her as Laila remembered their fated meeting on the day before the wedding. Rudra rushed to her side, "You know her?"

"I danced at her wedding remember?" her words refreshed his memory, "I know that.." he took a step back as he buttoned up his shirt, "I didn't know you knew her" he spoke, it took all the BSD training to mask his excitement. This annoyed him.

"Well if its Parvati" Laila settled comfortably back in bed, "Then forget it Rudra, she won't be of any use to you" he kept starring at her, she knew what that look meant, "She is nave as they come Rudra. Do you know, how they select brides every year at Birpur?" she couldn't stop herself, "The snake?" Laila's laughter echoed the room but he didn't couldn't find a reason to smile.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start...
Loving it so much :D
Continue soon dear, will be waiting :)
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Awesome ... will Rudra believe Laila??

I like how you keep it short and still convey everything ... sometimes its boring to read para after para to know a small thing 😆 ... but ya, sometimes its amazing ...

continue soon ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's a beautiful start..gosh, i miss those episodes..hope you put up the next chapter soon...😊
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Thanks guys, this will be a short FF. Since the show is closing, its got me slightly nostalgic so writing about the early days. Will try to update the second part sometime today.

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Part 3


"Aman..." Rudra's voice echoed across the sparsely furnished interrogation room, "Don't just stand there now" real panic was starting to set in somewhere, like a slithery unease that crept up on him and spread through him entirely.


He looked at the lifeless form on the cold cement floor, and every passing second just added to his woes.


"Sir" Aman finally managed a word, "I think she is innocent sir" he spoke confidently but cautiously not to irk his senior more than needed.


Rudra didn't want to hear any of that, "Now?" he spat out, "you say that now, after that stunt she pulled" and stared hard at the revolver in his hand, "She could have shot me" he said, as it slowly dawned upon him, "Don't go by that face Aman, the inside is hundred shades darker" Beautiful women belong to no one, his father's words rung loud and clear in his head, there was no doubting the wisdom in those words or your own life experiences.


There was silence as both men contemplated what had just transpired in the room, the silence was defeaning. Finally, Aman spoke again, "But she did not" he said. The message resonated through the room loud and clear. Rudra chose to ignore that which made him question his conclusion. He was clear in his mind, she was one of them, with them - and deserved no sympathy.


"Why are they taking so long?" Rudra handed the revolver to Aman and bent down towards an unconscious Parvati and picked her up in his arms. He immediately noticed how feather light she was, like a desert rose. He ignored the thoughts, and marched towards the door with Parvati safely cooconed in his arms, "Sir, but they are on their way"


Aman followed, a little wearily, concerned that this wasn't going to look too good outside the confines of this room, or to his seniors or the Mahila Mukti organizations, "Sir, lets wait for the medics to get here"


Rudra stopped at the threshold, "And watch her die?" he was met with silence, "I'm taking her to the hospital, start the car" he said and when Aman did not respond, "What the hell are you waiting for, run Aman, get going" Rudra seemed in total command, except only he knew he wasnt. He knew, he had to save her. He knew his blow had knocked her out, and for some reason, it unsettled him, seeing her lifeless. So he needed her back up, alive and fighting, so that he could settle their argument and more so for his own peace of mind.


As they marched out, they were greeted by a stoic audience, amongst them was the one who mattered the most, General VK Singh, who watched in absolute horror as he saw his most experienced but under fire Major who he had had a tough time defending - recent border skirmishes, now carrying an unconscious female witness / prisoner in his arms out of the interrogation room, "Damn it Rudra" he cursed.


This wasn't going to end well. To begin with, he prayed that the woman wasn't dead already.

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago
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This is absolutely brilliant. Please do continue. I can't believe the tripe we've been shown since the last one month is the same show that started in Dec. But this brings back memories of all the good times.

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