The Vow (RagNa FF) Chapter 13 page 34 (LAST CHAPTER) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Very nice update!! Continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
iss kamla ki toh..pakhi nahi toh koi aur..ajeeb aurat hai yaar..anyways ur update is super se bhi upaar😆 sorry for such a boring dialogue..its fantastic dear 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Nice update aria
hope ragna will unite soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
OMG reading this gave me goosepbumps at Kalpi's reaction! Too scary I found it too freaky!
Nice update and eager to read the next one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Lovely update
This kamla and Pakhi will never change
I like Kalpi reaction to the scene In front of her
Kamla deserve it
Recap is amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Superb update
Loved kalpi's reaction also wat she said to kamla
Kamla deserves dis treatment
Precap is nice
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#57
Well I comment for the 3last part
Really like it
Love Kalpi's behaviour towards kamla, she deserves it
Hope Jai won't separate RagNa 😕
And can't wait for RagNa convo, plz updates soon
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Chapter 6

Kamla starting feeling light-headed,Kamla fainted everyone rushed to her,Kalpi stood there and slighty smiled seeing her mother down,Suhana and Paakhi watched kalpi shocked at her reaction,Vithal and Pakya carried kamla upstairs,Paakhi and suhana went upstairs,Paakhi was irritated,Kalpi then looked up and saw Raghav she watched him,Raghav was beyond shocked,seeing kalpi's look and hair Raghav was surprised,Kalpi watched him,she walked up to him slowly, Raghav watched kalpi in a gaze.
Raghav-Kalpi..your'e...
Kalpi watched him,Suhana came and grabed Raghav's hand,Kalpi watched her.
Suhana-Raghav,Mausi Maa need us
Raghav watched kalpi who was calm.
Suhana left with Raghav who kept on watching kalpi,Kalpi took a deep breath and Sighed,She then walked upstairs slowly,she then stood by her parents door and watched kamla on the bed.
Kalpi-Baba
Everyone turned and watched kalpi who had an expressionless look on her face,Kamla looked up and smiled
Kamla-Kalpi
Kalpi watched her and walked towards her,Vithal helped kamla up and everyone watched on,Kalpi kneeled down next to kamla,Kamla held kalpi's face
Kamla-Do you have any idea how i lived in these two months without you,I missed you so much kalpi.
Kalpi watched,hugged and whispered to Kamla
Kalpi-Really Aai,You missed me
Kamla was shocked
Kalpi-It Doesn't seem so,Anyways You have Paakhi and your New daughter,you don't need me.
Kalpi looked at Kamla who was shocked and heartbroken,Kalpi got up and when she turned Raghav was behind her ,Kalpi watched him and went out Raghav followed behind her,Kalpi was walking down the stairs and Remembering her mother with paakhi,then Suhana,Kalpi was walking out the Chawl when Raghav held her wrist she turned and watched him Raghav quickly Coloured kalpi with red colour,Kalpi watched him in a Daze and got blurred flashes someone colouring her
Raghav-Your'e Back Kalpi won't you speak to me? I coloured you first
Kalpi watched him
Raghav-Why are you watching me like that?Don't you remember me?
Raghav held her wrist tighter,Kalpi watched him
Raghav-Say something!
Kalpi-Raghav Singhaina
Kalpi looked at him,Raghav smiled.
Kalpi-Raghav Singhaina is hurting me.
Raghav was shocked
Kalpi-Would you please let go?
Raghav let go of kalpi's hand.
Raghav-Kalpi I missed you
Kalpi watched him confused,In the Car Jai and Mira were getting worried
Mira-Where can kalpi go?
Jai-Chawl,She told me about the chawl
Mira-Ajay where is the nearest Chawl
Ajay stoped and asked a Man
Ajay-Chacha where is the nearest chawl?
Man-About 3 Minutes from here.
Ajay-OKay thank you
Ajay drove off
At the chawl
Kalpi watched Raghav
Kalpi-Why would you miss me?
Raghav-Because i...
Raghav and kalpi heard a car horn,Jai quickly came out the car and saw kalpi,He ran and hugged her infront of Raghav,Raghav clutch is first in anger.
Jai-Kalpi are you okay?why did you leave
Kalpi-Jai calm down
Jai-Kalpi i...
Kalpi-Jai,Go,I'll be with you guys in 2 Minutes please.
Jai-OKay
Jai left and went in the car,Kalpi watched Raghav she touched her face and watched raghav,Kalpi then slowly put her hand towards Raghav and gently passed her hand against his face and coloured him,Raghav was speechless and shocked.
Kalpi-Happy Holi Raghav Singhaina,I too coloured you first.
Raghav smiled,Kalpi watched him, and walked towards the car Leaving,Raghav,The Chawl,and Her Family Behind she thought"I'm Going to Kill Old kalpi and Bring a new Kalpi,One who doesn't care"Kalpi stoped and turned and watched the chawl then looked at Raghav who was watching her,She watched him and thought"There's something wrong with this guy,Why would Raghav Singhaina Miss me"She watched him and left,Raghav touched his face and smiled and remember his holi moments with kalpi.

Precap
Night time,Hotel
Kalpi and The Raichands came back from the chawl
Kalpi was in her room she went in infront of the Mirror she watches the colour on her face and remember Raghav colouring her,Then she touches her face closes her eyes and got blurred Flashes of someone colouring her and saying "My world is just you"
Jai knocks and open the door and sees kalpi holding her head,Kalpi then faints,Jai rushes to her

Morning
Kalpi got a phone call,she answered the phone
Kalpi-Hello?Hello?No answer?Hello is anybody there?
Kalpi watches her phone
Kalpi-Baba?
Vithal on the other end was teary eyed


Edited by -AriaRai- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Wonderful update!!! I enjoyed Raghav and Kalpi's moment. Please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Happy for Kalpi's behaviour towards kamla, she deserves it
Hope she will remember Raghav soon
Can't wait for the next part dear, do update soon

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