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Posted: 11 years ago


Maan accepted his feelings clearly in front of Geet but jhalli Geet still wants to be his friend only...

yaar itna innocent bhi koi ho sakta hai kya aaj ke zamaane mein...

Maan's father suffered heart attack...Maan went to see him at hospital but from far only...

very interesting update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part,,
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 10 years ago


Part 21



After 3 more days doctor discharged Aman which was a relief for the Khurana family and so for Handa's who reached the hospital at the same day Geet's group arrived. Rano hugged Geet where she found her peace, Geet looked a scared kitten, she never liked hospitals so Daarji agreed to go with Geet and Aniee to KM, dadima also went with them as she wasn't feeling well. They alternate the visiting hours, Yash was the one who stayed with his father the most.

Maan was nowhere to be seen which agigated Anisha, Dadima too was hurt with Maan's behaviour but the one person who was worried for him was Geet. She tried to rech him only to realize she doesn't have his number and her own mobile, she lost it,,, again. In that moment of haze she forgot to even ask aniee or other to give her his number, partly because she didn't wanted to get attention on Maan's absence which was absurd.

Finally when Aman arrived home and everyone sighed a breath of relief and it was Dadima who broke the fake peace.

"Where is Maan? In these 3 days I didn't even felt his presence. "

"Because he was never there maa. He never cared about his family ever, not yesterday, not today, definitely not tomorrow."

It was Anisha who lashed her anger and hurt. She had expected atleast in this condition where she needs her both son, Maan would come to support them but again she felt alone. Nothing sort of happened which made her angry and bitter, her husband's sudden face to face with death made her bitter and she lashed it seeing Maan standing with one brow up.

"Not again the family drama."

Maan said in an amused voice, Geet stared at him wide eyed. She hadn't seen him in these 3 days and her heart went for him as she saw the flicker he tried to mask.

"Maan." This time the stern voice ws Dadima's which stiffen Maan, he walked towards his dad who was sitting on the half lying sofa, his eyes trained on Maan but there wasn't bitterness or sadness for not seeing his son in theae 3 days. Its yearning and pain,,, regret.

"I want your sign here dad."

Yash came forward looking at the file "Wht is it Maan?"
Man gave his sly smirk "Property papers. What do u think it is Yash? I want the property before the old man die."

Everyone gasp including rano and anisha,, Man just shrugged looking unfazed. He sighed dramatically "Hurry dad, I don't have the whole day for you. Read it, sign it."

Yash looked at him blankly, Aman looked pained, he was weak to say anything but before he can say anything a tight slap shut everyone making the room silent, just the sound of hand smacking skin filled the room. Anisha looked at Maan with rage that she had never felt before, his words pushed her all buttons.

Maan cocked his head still giving a sly smirk which made her more furious.

"Do u atleast care for your dying father Maan? I can't believe u can be so selfish. U didn't showed up at the hospital, we waited days, counted hours mins just to see your face and what u did, never once ask how is your dad? Is he alive or dead all u did ask for property?"

"Mom listen" Yash's voice couldn't hold Anisha, she was mad, Aman's weak protest couldn't supress the lava.

"You know what Maan, the person lying there your dad whom u don't have enough time to ask about his health was the one to fight for your life when everyone gve up on you."

That made everyone shut and stare at her and Geet with breath in throat, and to Maan stare at Anisha with blank eyes.

"You weren't normal Maan when u were born, Yash was safe but u, ur heart were sinking. Doc had to put u on life support. They doubted u won't make it. They said either if u make it u wont be normal and u weren't, u were so angry all the time. But u know who fought for u? It ws your dad, he shouted on the doctor for saying something like that, he fought day and night to keep u alive and u did but whatever he did never satisfied you, we had no choice to put u in boarding because of ur anger just to make you a better person but guess we failed. U failed us."

"Stop it mom."

Yash finally shouted, he turned to look at Maan who has a blank look. He looked at his dad who was shaking his head trying to say something.

"Make him sign that." All he said before leaving. For a brief moment his eyes met Geet but he diverted it soon.

"What was that Yash?" Anisha said angrily.

"Today if Dad is alive and fine its because of Maan. That special doctor from Callifornia came over night because of Maan, he made it a point and threaten everyone to make HIS DAD's health good. Luckily it was mild but that time I was with Maan when he was flipping the world just in front of my eyes."

Anisha stared at Aman who nodded with tears in his eyes. She tried to say something but nothing came, her eyes fell on the papers.

"Papers and he said."

"He was pushing dad to react because I had told dad everything which made Maan vulnerable. So he said it's property paper, when its the reason he had the heartattack. Someone filled a fraud case against his company, so Maan can only handle it as it own so he said dad to write the power of attorney on his name, he was going to take the blame Mom, he loves his family. It's his only way to show that and not make himself vulnerable. "

Everyone looked baffled, Aniee sniffed but Anisha couldn't, her heart tore away remembering her own words, but she could just stare at him.

"Guess he didn't fail you, you failed him. You all failed Maan. You said he never loved his family but in this small time span I never felt he was ever loved by his family, then I fear even to think what he felt for years."

Geet's voice ws soft and it hit the target s Ddima, Aniee, Aman wiped their tears nd Anisha looked, deafted.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 22




When Geet left the place behind Maan none noticed, all were consumed in that moment. Yash saw her leaving behind Maan, he knew she is going to console him and for the 1st time he didn't worry about geet and her feelings, or if Maan will hurt her, maybe because he knew only Geet can reach his brother or maybe because deep in his heart he knew only Geet can console Maan which somewhere made him jealous, he wanted to be the one whom his brother can confined, but Maan never did that.


Geet half expected Maan to runaway 1st thing, but he was there, sitting in that small garden looking lost. She sat besie him in the swing. None said a word. Strange but the silence was confronting. She didn't tried to console just sitting there she gave a lot of thing none ever tried. She waited for him.

Eventually Maan's shoulder relaxed he leaned on the swing chain still not looking at her.

"First time it didn't hurt to hear her words, maybe because first time I felt loved."

His soft voice made the lump in her throat larger but she stayed numb, giving him space to talk. She can wait eternity for him to bare his soul, but what he said made her chest arch even more.

"If u don't mind can I,, can I put my head on your lap Geet? I always wanted to do that, but it was q Mom, she never had time for me."

His voice was small, lost, in that moment it showed how much vulnerable he is and he is ready show it to her. She just nodded

"Ofcourse."

Her mumble didn't clear the knot in her throat or the teary eyes but Maan was so lost in himself to see her, she stayed there placing his head on her lap. She threaded her hand in his hair.

"I always wanted her to see me, it enraged me when she choose Yash every time, but I never tried to see my fault, maybe it was my fault,,"

Geet didn't let him complete

"it isn't, u needed love which they never understood."

"Do they really love me Geet?"

So much pain, in that small voice of him that squeeze her heart, how can anyone left their heart not to love him? But his uncertainity tore her heart.

"Yes they do, just open your heart to recieve them, can you do that Maan?"

Her voice was merely whisper but so was his and they understand each other not only with words but eyes.

"Don't cry," he wiped her tears that she was unknown "everything will be fine."

How ironic, that's what she wanted to say but only manage to give a watery smile. They fell in a comfortable silence and none knew how much time they spent like that, when Geet opened her eyes Yash was in front of them. She immidiately looked at a sleeping Maan, her legs were numb but she couldn't slide past him, she gesture Yash to be quite but then another figure came across. Geet was stiffen seeing Anisha there. Right now she doesn't care what anyone think of her, her first priority is Maan who was sound asleep like he had never slept like this in a long time, least she knew how correct she is.

But Anisha did what none expected, she signaled Geet to be quite and with Yash help she slides in Geet's place so Maan won't be disturbed. Geet was worried but seeing the pain in Anisha's eyes she let her hold Maan, Yash walked her inside the mansion but not before covering Maan with a blanket as it was already 10 mins past 9.

"Don't look at me like that Geet, he is my brother, and I love him."

Geet gave him a cute smile "I knew that already say something new."

Yash shook his head smiling and sliding his jacket on her shoulder, they both slides inside the mansion and Yash went to kitchen for her food.

"I am not hungry."

"I don't see why is that, you haven't eaten your dinner."

"But"

"Geet, trust me, I will make sure he eats but now you have to take this,"

There was 2 sandwich with orange juice,, at the sight her stomach grumble and she looked embarrassed, Yash couldn't himself but laugh at her cute pouting face, and then pinched her nose.

"Eat this, I will make some for Maan and take out. Mom haven't eaten anything too."

"And you?"

Somewhere she knew he also haven't taken anything, his concern shows on his face which made her smile so soft, yash looked at her for a moment longer he would have liked, her smile was so like,,,, he stopped himself thinking of her.

"I have some work, so I will take these in my room. You better take rest."

"Yash,, ummm can I stay here, I mean I will lie on the couch, I m not feeling good to go to bed now."

Yash looked at her for some moment then nodded "okay."


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Maan opened his eyes only to see same color eyes as him staring back, immidiately he straighten up and started looking for Geet but she was nowhere, how could she leave him.

"Geet needed rest Maan, she was sitting here for 3 hours."

He was asleep for 3 hours straight which never happened, and the thought she stayed in one position, in this chilly night only for him did wonder to his heart.

"When" only one word came from his mouth, when his mother came here. Though he couldn't said full but Anisha understood, maybe for the first time his unsaid words are being listen.

"Just over 20 mins"

Maan was hurriedly straightening to leave when his mother's desperate word came on him.

"Maan please don't leave, give me a chance,, give us a chance."

It halted him and Geet word came in view "Yes they do, just open your heart to recieve them, can you do that Maan?"

Yes he can, not only for Geet, he wanted to it for himself. His eyes fell on the window on ground floor, curtain had been pushed and someone was standing in the dark, his eyes locked with the hazel and he found himself immobilised, how could he say no to the pleading eyes of Her,, Geet. She didn't left him, she was always there just like she promised everytime.

He sat down beside his mother, both didnt said much.

"We always loved you maan, love you but,,,," she sighed like a older woman feeling defeated. "Give me a chance Maan, please I beg you. I m sorry for everything, words can never defy what I did, can you please give us a chance." Her words were broken whisper, the pain she felt reflects in her voice, Geet's words affected her and the family so much. True, they failed him in many ways, will he ever forgive them for what they did.

"Don't go.. move here, move in the Mansion."

"I, I c-can't

Who can believe the MSK world knows for his anger and ruthlessness can be so vulnerable in front of his mother, his family. His eyes met Geet, it's like her hazels were given him strength.

"Please Maan, at least stay here till your father gets well, he needs you too Maan like me. Let us show how it could be, what you always deserved, Just give me a chance."

Maan looked at Geet who's eyes were on him in concern, her every word follow him,, "give them a chance" her heart whispered maybe.

"Okay."



Precap: Maan and Geet spending the night...

"Can I sleep with you?"
"Uhh-huh I don't think it's a good idea."
"I promise I'll behave."

Maan's eyes went wide hearing her innocent word and cute pout, then looked down at himself "I don't know if I can behave" his murmur made her more confuse which made her pouty confuse face edible for him and a groan worked deep in his throat...






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Posted: 10 years ago
dear why sooo late...m upset fr ur late updates dear...i miss d stories...

atlast everybody came to knw about maan n ask fr his forgiveness...lets just think dat everything is going to be fine nw...

awesome n mindblowing updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet went to look after maan
her presence too gv him peace
he slept in her lap
his mom took the place l8r
noone que about geet being with maan
maans mom asking him a chance n he is giving it for geet
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi tich
love the update
maan so vulnerable
his family refused to take proper care of him now repenting ..
geet always therefor him ..
please make yah stay away from maneet ..i want maneet together ..
maan decided to gave a chance only for his geet ..
soon all will be fine with him ..
happy to know maan's mother realize her mistake ..
i didn't like the way anisha send geet away //
but geet still was near him ..seeing him from far off ..
i want that moment to be close by maneet holding hands of each other ,promising to be with each other through every thick and thin ..


thanks for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome part ...love the understanding btw Maaneet...Finally Maan's mom took a step towards maan I hope now they will give him his share of love...hahahaha precap kya krega Maan is jhalli Geet ka 😆
Thanks for the update di🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally family comes to know about Real maan..he always loved his family..Geet was so close to Maan she understood everything which was related to Maan
Yash knew that it was Geet only who could console his brother..and he was right Man slept peace fully in Geet's lap but when he wpoke up he found his mother there
It was his long wish which was fulfilled today
Now Family wants a chance to love him and he too is ready to open is heart for them
both parts were superb
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Posted: 10 years ago



part - 21

wow lovely emotional heart winching update..te way aman health is improving , but all are angry on my maan for his rudeness was lovely emotional..te way geet craving to see my maan was lovely touchy..opps my maan asking for sign and anisha slapped him and poured her frustration without knowing wat her son doing and all was shocked wen yash open te truth was lovely heart winching...te way geet ki words made them speechless..i love te update so much

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