~~pyar ke beech me hum nahi ayenge~~LAST PART PG36 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for late pr aajkl likhna ho nhi pa rha h..I am soo much greedy yar..ab mujhko sakshi chahiye mera deemag kahin set nhi ho rha h...pak gyi hu..pta nhi kab ayegi..khair..m likh to rahi hu ise dekhte hain ye kahan rukta h us hisab se socheng ki end kare ya continue. .moving on update...hope u all like it..

part 12...

priya se ekdm handle nhi hota h ye aur wo bhi ram ke peeche peeche jati h..ram study me jakr jaise hi door band karne ko mudta h priya door pakad leti h ram ko kuchh samjh nhi ata h wo use dekh hi rha hota h tabse priya andr akar khud hi door band kar deti h..then she kiss him on his lips..ram ko kuchh samjh hi nhi aa rha hota h ki ise kya hua abhi to theek thi..tabse achanak se...pr puchhe kaise priya to use kiss kiye hi ja rhi h..to ram bhi respond karta h samne se...thodi der bad dono ko lagta h ki kuchh jyada hi ho gya ye to dono ekdusre ko chhod kar aram se khade ho jate hain..

priya neeche dekhne lagti h pr ram use hi dekh rha hota h..priya ko bhi pta chal rha tha ki ram use hi dekh rha h she is trying to ignore him but it cnt b...to finally ram ki trf dekhne lagti h ram qstion mark ki trh look de rha hota h use.

priya..okkk..I hv to talk to u

ram...hmmm

priya...kya hmm?

ram...bolo jo bolna h

priya...kya bolu..?..ye yad h apko ki m apki dost hu ye nhi yad h ki apki biwi bhi hu...

ram hasne lagta h to priya chidh jatia h...

priya. ..has kyun rhe hain?

ram...cmon yar..tumne hi to dosti ka rishta bnaya tha..

priya nazare jhuka leti h..dono thodi der waise hi khade rhte hain...phir kuchh der bad priya hi bolti h

priya...kya hum life me ek promise tode sakte hain?

ram...mtlb?

priya...mtlb ye ki m ek promise todna chahti hu..cn I?

ram...tod sakte hain ya nhi ye to m bhi nhi janta pr todna m bhi chahta hu ek promise

priya...to tod dete hain..bhad me jaye promise bhad me jaye duniya bhad me jaye log...I only want u

ram...I also want u..pr ye tumhare stupid promise ki wajah se kitna pareshan hua hu ki kya batau?...pls ye promise wapas le lo

priya..le liya...

ram ekdm se chhote bachhe jaisa khush ho jata h aur use kas ke gale laga leta h...dono ko aisa lagta h jaise aaj jindgi me pehli bar mile hain ekdusre se...aaj bhi mayne yhi hai ki pyar ke beech me hum nhi ayenge..pr aaj ye h ki jis taraf le chala dil chale jayenge...kuchh der dono waise hi rhte hain..then ram ekdm super excited hokar priya ko bolta h ki wo abhi ata h thodi der me..priya bolti h ki kahan ja rha h itni rat...pr wo ye nhi btata h bas chala jata h

priya ka bilkul man nhi tha ki ram chhodkar jaye use..aaj bas use ram hi chahiye tha aur koi nhi..but ram ki excitement ke aage usne apni feeling thodi si rok li..qki ab wo kisi bhi hal me na ram ko hurt karna chahti h na hi khona..priya kamre me baith kr wait kar rhi hoti h pr use chain kahan h..bar bar phone dekh rhi h ki shayad ram ka call aaye...wo khid bhi karna chah rhi h pr phone out of reach aa rha h..ek to rat h waise hi uska deemag khrab ho rha h..but still cnt do anything except waiting...

lagbhag 1hr bad ram ata h bht khush rhta h jaise hi kamre me ata h priya bhag ke aake lipat jati h

ram...kya hua?

priya..bina btaye kyun chale gye apko pta h kitna dar gyi thi m..itni rat thi..phone bhi nhi lag rha tha..

ram..cmon bachha thode hi hu m

priya. .bachhe se kam bhi nhi h..ek bhi kam samjhdari ka nhi krte hain..huh...

ram..ufff..achha I am sorry..ab jaldi se taiyar ho jao

priya..taiyar?..rat me ?..kyu?

ram..aise hi mera mn kar rha h tumko taiyar dekhne ka ...nhi kr sakti itna mere liye..

priya..cmon blackmail mt kariye..u know very well kuchh bhi kar sakti hu m apke liye..

ram..hehehe

ram priya ko ek saree deta h priya pehn kar aati h..khubsurat to wo waise hi bht h pyar ka rang chadh jata h to mujhe aur rambabu ko duniya ki sabse khubsurat aurat dikhne lagti hai..kya kare yar dono ki kamjori jo h..ram priya ko bahar lekr jata h priya ko kuchh samjh nhi ata h ki wo ja kahan rhe hain...wo ram se puchhti rhti  h pr ram bta nhi rha hota h..khair finlly dono destination pr pahonch jate hain..

priya...yha?

ram...han sari kahani yhi to shuru hui na..iska anjam bhi to yhi hona chahiye...

she smiles..dono park me andr jate hain..apni fvrt jagah pr baithte hain aur ekdusre ka hath pakdte hain..

priya...uff ram is jagah ne mujhe meri jindgi di h..

ram priya ki trf dekhne lagta h..qki usne ram ka nam liya..he cnt control anymore wo priya ko kiss karta h..she respond back...

ram..tum nhi janti pehle din se jabse tumhe dekha tha pta nhi kya feel karta tha but u r always in my mind..

priya..aur ek to wo book

ram..uski to kya bat h uski hi wajah se to sab hua..usne hi mere deemag me ye sab bhara..

priya...really?...same here...pr apne to bola tha aap kisi se pyar karte hain?

ram...han to karta hi hu..tumne bhi to kaha tha..

priya..are to main bhi to karti hu ..pr m to apse karti hu aur mujhe pta nhi tha ki meri shaadi bhi apse hi ho rhi h

ram...damn..m bhi to tumse hi karta tha bewkuf ladki..to pehle dekh nhi sakti thi..promise karne ki itni kya jaldi thi..huh

priya..hehehe

ram..pr phir wo ladka kaun tha jo tumhe I love I bolta tha mujhe to laga tum usse hi pyar karti ho

priya..hahaha..usse kyun pyar karungi..wo shadi shuda tha

ram...what?

priya...han aur to aur wo apka dost tha..

ram...kya?..mera dost?

priya..han vikram

ram...kya?...wo sala kyun tumko I love u bolta tha..neha se dar nhi laga use..usko to m chhodunga nhi..uski himmat kaise hui meri biwi ko I love u bolne ki..

priya...hahahha..excuse me..us waqt m apki biwi nhi thi..but wo chahta tha ki m apki biwi ban jau isiliyee ye sb kiya usne..ye janne ke liye ki koi aur to nhi h meri life me...as wi hame sath me aksr dekhta tha  to isiliye humdono ko milane ke liye ye sab kiya usne..

ram...gadha kahin ka mujhe bol nhi sakta tha ye bat kam se kam itna problm to nhi hota 

priya..achha wo sab jane dijiye..ye boliye jb apko pta chala ki m hi hu jisse ap pyar karte hain pr m kisi aur se karti hu to apko bura laga hoga na..

ram...bht bht bht jyada..itna gussa ata tha tumhare upar na ki kya btau..man krta tha pakad ke puchhu kyun kisi aur se pyar karti ho..mujhse nhi kar sakti ho?

priya. .hahaha..

ram..has kyun rhi ho?

priya...bcz I also feel the same..

dono ek dusre ko dekhne lagte h..they desptly need eachother now..but rambabu to park me le aaye ab yha kya kare dekhne ke alawa...

priya..ram..ghar chale?

ram...kyun meri company achhi nhi lag rhi h?

priya..achhi lag rhi h isiliye bole rhi hu chaliye na...

ram..hahaha..nhi ghar nhi jayenge..yhi rahenge

priya..kya?..ratbhar?..yha park me.?

ram...nahi..wha

priya samne dekhti h ek cottage rhta h..she so much surprised. .

priya..yha ye bhi tha mujhe to pta hi nhi tha itne din se ati hu m phir bhi.?

ram priya ko lekar jata h..full arrangements rhti hain wha..suhagrat ki...she is feeling like nothing cn b bttr than this...humsafar bhi sath h aur manzil bhi pas h shayad jindgi ka koi aur dusra pal kabhi itna khubsurat nhi hoga jitna ki ye pal h..ran door lock karta h aur mudta h..priya khud hi ram ki baho me aa jati h..they kiss eachother passionately. ..jaise aaj nhi kiya to kabhi milega hi nhi krne ko huh...

iske bad btane ki jarurat h nhi jaise sabki suhagrat hoti h inki bhi hui ..they complet with eachother...slept in arms peacefully. ..this is the begning of thier love..jo ki hamesha se inke pas tha pr dhundh ke paya inhone aaj...


ok this is over for now...phir milenge jindgi ke kuchh aur naye rango aur raya ki nayi kahani ke sath...tab tak ke liye...

miss me

thank u all for ur all love & support

love

veena
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...veena ki story mein pehli baar first reserve mila hai...Im so happy😎
last part
itne jaldi stop bhi kar diya...arre yaar kabhi toh continue karo...hamesha likhi ho beginning of life...toh hame dekhna hai ji
anyways...good Priya ne pehel ki aur raya ke beech saari baat clear ho gayi
good ending...
thanks for PM jo abji takk nahi mila😆
Edited by sandhyasn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh Lovely Update Veena👏
Beautiful ending
But why you end so soon
Yes i am going to miss u & your Story 
Come back soon with another story 
Love u too 🤗

Edited by rosinagoor - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

wow...veena ki story mein pehli baar first reserve mila hai...Im so happy😎


Awww sooo sweet aur mne abhi tak pm bhi nhi diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: veena23


Awww sooo sweet aur mne abhi tak pm bhi nhi diya😛

aaj pehli baar bol rahi hoon...rehne do PM...meine padd liya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update
nice ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was awesome story di!!
but itni jaldi ending??


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Kya baat hai Veena mamla kaafi romantic hai😉😆
Well pagaloan k jaise shart banate hai , fir todte hai , fir jud jaate hai😆
accha hai, inko ek dusre k saath time pass karne k liye kuch chahiye hota hai , kynuki the Ram kapoor k paas paise bahot hai, naa kamane ki tension na khane ki problem😆

Chalo acccha hai they realized and laughed heartily on their stupidity, aisa hi hota hai mai poochu toh wo kya sochenge dono k dil me ye chal rha ha hota hai , aur waqt yuhi nikal jaata hai😆 both are scared ki saamne wala kya sohega😆

THANK U VEENA FOR MAKING BEST OUT OF RAYA and entertaining US
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Posted: 9 years ago
aweee finally u end it 
 next kab ..aap bata chuke ho ..alredy aapke 
pass idea hai jaldi  ajao...plzzz

thank u for this ..ss /ff nehi bolungi  jaldi khatam kardi aapne..
but this one is the best stil 
kuch alag hi tha ye..
pyar karte hai ..samne hai phir bhi bata nehi sake promise k liye 
and bataye to phir bhi ek naya tarike se 
 superb di 


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Posted: 9 years ago
Relief lastly Raya talked with each other and clear the mu.
Now every moment they want to spend with each other.
But seems Ram has some other plans he take Priya with him in the same park which was cause of their togetherness.
Raya sari purani baatein yaad kar rhe Ram ko bahut gussa agaya yeh jankar ki uske bestfriend ne Priya ko I love you bola but all he had done for them only.
Now they are lost in each other arms.
Beautiful end but you ended story very fast...